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Re: Detritus Short Film Application
Emma Maughan
Wed 08/01/2020 10:31
To: Toby Riding
Hi Toby
Thank you for your script submission for short of the week.
If the use of voiceover is fundamental to the overall meaning of the film I think would be fine, and
works well to drive the narra ve.
Your script is now submission ready.
Kind regards
Miss Maughan
From: Toby Riding
Sent: 05 January 2020 14:51
To: Angela Jones ; Emma Maughan
Subject: Detritus Short Film Applica on
 
Hi Short of the Week,
Enclosed is the latest dra of my film, Detritus. Is it possible to get some feedback? I'm not sure if I'm
using too much voiceover.
Thanks
Toby Riding
1 09/01/2020, 20:15

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  • 1. Re: Detritus Short Film Application Emma Maughan Wed 08/01/2020 10:31 To: Toby Riding Hi Toby Thank you for your script submission for short of the week. If the use of voiceover is fundamental to the overall meaning of the film I think would be fine, and works well to drive the narra ve. Your script is now submission ready. Kind regards Miss Maughan From: Toby Riding Sent: 05 January 2020 14:51 To: Angela Jones ; Emma Maughan Subject: Detritus Short Film Applica on   Hi Short of the Week, Enclosed is the latest dra of my film, Detritus. Is it possible to get some feedback? I'm not sure if I'm using too much voiceover. Thanks Toby Riding 1 09/01/2020, 20:15