EWRT 1A Class 8
AGENDA 
 Due Electronically via Kaizena before class: Essay #2 
 Team Change and Game 
 Vocabulary Test: (Chapters 5-9) 
 Discussion: Ngo and Toufexis 
 Essay #3: The Concept Essay 
 In-Class Writing: Consider topics for your essay from The 
Hunger Games. Make a list of four different possibilities. 
Write paragraphs for two of them, sketching out what you 
already know about the concept. Think of at least one 
example for each from HG.
The Game: NEW TEAMS TODAY 
• With your new team, discuss the words on the 
next slide for five or so minutes and prepare to 
compete
Vocabulary Words
Swathe
You have 15 minutes
The Concept Essay
Ngo: “Cannibalism: 
It Still Exists” 
Get into groups of 
three or four to 
discuss this 
essay and answer 
questions.
Take 10 minutes 
• First, briefly summarize the story 
• What is the concept about which Ngo writes? 
• Which extended anecdote does Ngo use to help explain the concept 
to his readers? 
• What is his thesis? 
• How does he classify his concept? 
• Categories? 
• Types? 
• How does he define his concept? 
• Find examples of each his classified concepts.
Brief Summary and 
Concept 
Extended Anecdote
Extended Anecdote 
Thesis and classification
Thesis and 
Classifications 
Definitions
Definitions 
Exemplification
Exemplification 
Endocannibalism Exocannibalism 
 Survival: Vietnamese boat 
refugees 
 Ate people as they died 
on the boat 
 Dietary: Miyanmin (both types 
really) 
 Eats their own dead and 
catches outsiders 
 Religious/Ritual: African tribe 
of the Bimin-Kuskusmin 
 Eat parts of genitalia to 
enhance reproductivity 
 Survival: Japanese troops’ 
supply lines cut 
 Sacrificed Arapesh 
people to feed troops 
 Dietary: Leopard people; 
Alligator people 
 Hunt victims 
 Religious/Ritual: Bangalas 
and South American Tribes 
 To honor those held in 
high-esteem, they 
sacrifice slaves and 
captives
Ngo has written a 
concept essay 
about cannibalism 
 Use this essay as a model for you 
own!
Toufexis “ Love: The 
Right Chemistry 
 Get back into 
your groups 
to discuss 
this essay 
and answer 
questions.
Take 10 Minutes to 
Answer These 
Questions 
 First, summarize the story. 
 How does Toufexis “Hook the Reader”? 
 How does Toufexis focus her plan? 
 How does she create a logical plan? 
Summary
Summary 
Hooking the reader
Hooking the Reader 
 What does Toufexis do to catch 
Readers’ attention? 
 The title—”Love: The Right Chemistry” 
 The epigraph quoting Greta Garbo’s line 
from the film Ninotchka. 
 The conversational tone of the essay 
 Using “O.K.” and “Let’s” rather than the 
more formal “let us.” 
Focusing the Plan
Focusing the Plan 
What She Does What She Does Not Do 
 She focuses on certain 
scientific aspects of 
romantic love, specifically 
the evolutionary biology 
and neurochemistry of love 
between adult human 
heterosexual mates. 
 By keeping to her focus, 
she is able to present 
information that is 
unfamiliar, and therefore 
interesting, to her readers. 
 Because she wants to 
emphasize love as a tool to 
promote reproduction, she 
does NOT include same-sex 
love, or nonsexual love 
between friends and family 
members 
 She does NOT discuss 
views on love by various 
religions or cultures. 
A logical plan
A Logical Plan 
She provides clues for the reader 
 Introduction of 
topic 
 Thesis 
 Forecast 
 Transitions
Introduction of Concept: Paragraph 1: She announces that she is writing 
about “romantic love,” a concept that she will address with “scientific 
precision.” 
Thesis: Paragraph 2: What seems on the surface to be irrational, intoxicated 
behavior is in fact part of nature’s master strategy—a vital force that has 
helped humans survive, thrive, and multiply through thousands of years” 
Forecast: In paragraph two: “Love rests firmly on the foundations of 
evolution, biology, and chemistry.” 
Toufexis also uses transitions to let the readers know when she is leaving 
one topic and going to another: here is the transition from biology to 
neurochemistry:
The Concept Essay 
 Topic: Write an essay 
about a concept from The 
Hunger Games that 
interests you and that you 
want to study further. When 
you have a good 
understanding of the 
concept you have chosen, 
explain it to your readers, 
considering carefully what 
they might already know 
about it and how your 
essay might add to what 
they know. 
In-Class Essay #3 
3-5 pages 
125 points possible 
You may use a page of 
notes 
You must have a Dictionary 
or other defining source and 
at least two quotations that 
exemplify your concept from 
The Hunger Games.
Equality, Legal, Skill, Hunger, Cold, 
Friendship, Safety, Justice, Fair 
play, Class, Game, Play, Power, 
Identity, Strength, Competition, 
Sacrifice, Spectacle, Schadenfreude 
(happiness derived from others’ 
misfortunes), Fear, Privilege, 
Topics to Consider:
In-Class Writing: 
 Consider topics for your essay 
from The Hunger Games. 
 Make a list of four different 
possibilities. 
 Write paragraphs for two of them, 
sketching out what you already know 
about the concept..
Homework 
 Read: HG through chapter 19; SMG 148- 
163 
 Post #8 Finish and post your in-class 
writing; then, find a good definition for your 
concept. It can be from a dictionary or an 
encyclopedia. 
 Post #9: Name the two concepts about 
which you wrote paragraphs. Find a few 
lines from The Hunger Games that 
illustrate each concept. Copy them into 
your post, and then explain how the 
example demonstrates, defines, or 
embodies the concept. (include page 
numbers) 
 Bring: SMG to Class 
 Study: Vocabulary 10-13

Class 8 1 a vocab test 2

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    AGENDA  DueElectronically via Kaizena before class: Essay #2  Team Change and Game  Vocabulary Test: (Chapters 5-9)  Discussion: Ngo and Toufexis  Essay #3: The Concept Essay  In-Class Writing: Consider topics for your essay from The Hunger Games. Make a list of four different possibilities. Write paragraphs for two of them, sketching out what you already know about the concept. Think of at least one example for each from HG.
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    The Game: NEWTEAMS TODAY • With your new team, discuss the words on the next slide for five or so minutes and prepare to compete
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    You have 15minutes
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    Ngo: “Cannibalism: ItStill Exists” Get into groups of three or four to discuss this essay and answer questions.
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    Take 10 minutes • First, briefly summarize the story • What is the concept about which Ngo writes? • Which extended anecdote does Ngo use to help explain the concept to his readers? • What is his thesis? • How does he classify his concept? • Categories? • Types? • How does he define his concept? • Find examples of each his classified concepts.
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    Brief Summary and Concept Extended Anecdote
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    Extended Anecdote Thesisand classification
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    Exemplification Endocannibalism Exocannibalism  Survival: Vietnamese boat refugees  Ate people as they died on the boat  Dietary: Miyanmin (both types really)  Eats their own dead and catches outsiders  Religious/Ritual: African tribe of the Bimin-Kuskusmin  Eat parts of genitalia to enhance reproductivity  Survival: Japanese troops’ supply lines cut  Sacrificed Arapesh people to feed troops  Dietary: Leopard people; Alligator people  Hunt victims  Religious/Ritual: Bangalas and South American Tribes  To honor those held in high-esteem, they sacrifice slaves and captives
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    Ngo has writtena concept essay about cannibalism  Use this essay as a model for you own!
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    Toufexis “ Love:The Right Chemistry  Get back into your groups to discuss this essay and answer questions.
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    Take 10 Minutesto Answer These Questions  First, summarize the story.  How does Toufexis “Hook the Reader”?  How does Toufexis focus her plan?  How does she create a logical plan? Summary
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    Hooking the Reader  What does Toufexis do to catch Readers’ attention?  The title—”Love: The Right Chemistry”  The epigraph quoting Greta Garbo’s line from the film Ninotchka.  The conversational tone of the essay  Using “O.K.” and “Let’s” rather than the more formal “let us.” Focusing the Plan
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    Focusing the Plan What She Does What She Does Not Do  She focuses on certain scientific aspects of romantic love, specifically the evolutionary biology and neurochemistry of love between adult human heterosexual mates.  By keeping to her focus, she is able to present information that is unfamiliar, and therefore interesting, to her readers.  Because she wants to emphasize love as a tool to promote reproduction, she does NOT include same-sex love, or nonsexual love between friends and family members  She does NOT discuss views on love by various religions or cultures. A logical plan
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    A Logical Plan She provides clues for the reader  Introduction of topic  Thesis  Forecast  Transitions
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    Introduction of Concept:Paragraph 1: She announces that she is writing about “romantic love,” a concept that she will address with “scientific precision.” Thesis: Paragraph 2: What seems on the surface to be irrational, intoxicated behavior is in fact part of nature’s master strategy—a vital force that has helped humans survive, thrive, and multiply through thousands of years” Forecast: In paragraph two: “Love rests firmly on the foundations of evolution, biology, and chemistry.” Toufexis also uses transitions to let the readers know when she is leaving one topic and going to another: here is the transition from biology to neurochemistry:
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    The Concept Essay  Topic: Write an essay about a concept from The Hunger Games that interests you and that you want to study further. When you have a good understanding of the concept you have chosen, explain it to your readers, considering carefully what they might already know about it and how your essay might add to what they know. In-Class Essay #3 3-5 pages 125 points possible You may use a page of notes You must have a Dictionary or other defining source and at least two quotations that exemplify your concept from The Hunger Games.
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    Equality, Legal, Skill,Hunger, Cold, Friendship, Safety, Justice, Fair play, Class, Game, Play, Power, Identity, Strength, Competition, Sacrifice, Spectacle, Schadenfreude (happiness derived from others’ misfortunes), Fear, Privilege, Topics to Consider:
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    In-Class Writing: Consider topics for your essay from The Hunger Games.  Make a list of four different possibilities.  Write paragraphs for two of them, sketching out what you already know about the concept..
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    Homework  Read:HG through chapter 19; SMG 148- 163  Post #8 Finish and post your in-class writing; then, find a good definition for your concept. It can be from a dictionary or an encyclopedia.  Post #9: Name the two concepts about which you wrote paragraphs. Find a few lines from The Hunger Games that illustrate each concept. Copy them into your post, and then explain how the example demonstrates, defines, or embodies the concept. (include page numbers)  Bring: SMG to Class  Study: Vocabulary 10-13