This document outlines the agenda for an English writing class. It includes a vocabulary game, a presentation on using appositives in writing, and an in-class writing assignment to draft a concept essay. Students will learn how to focus their concept, develop categories and types, and create an outline to structure their essay. The goal is for students to leave with an outline to guide their writing.
The Argumentative Paragraph. This is a summary about important topics to keep in mind when writing an argumentative paragraph. From establishing pros and cons to writing refutation. It includes examples as illustrations.
The Argumentative Paragraph. This is a summary about important topics to keep in mind when writing an argumentative paragraph. From establishing pros and cons to writing refutation. It includes examples as illustrations.
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Instructions for the second essay
Read the instructions carefully so that you can properly write the second assigned essay of the second unit. The due date for this essay is May /12/ 2016.
The text should be following a Microsoft Word format, a letter size twelve (12) and a spacing of one and a half (1.5) between sentences (or line spacing in the paragraph options). The extension of the work should not be less than three (3) pages or greater than five (5) pages of content (not title page or cover of any kind is required).
At the end of your essay you will list the References used (for more information see the text I sent regarding the instructions for writing an essay for this class). Plagiarism will not be tolerated.
The written essay should be a product that reflects your understanding and interpretation (substantiated with arguments, evidence and reasoning, expressed in a clear, consistent, and accurate matter) of the assigned readings and discussions in class. Do not use Internet sources and limit yourself to the assigned texts, the discussion in class and your own argumentative capabilities.
Instructions
In this second unit we have discussed some of the main qualitative methods of research in Psychology, focusing on how these methods open new and critical possibilities regarding a more in-depth inquiry that pays attention to constructivist, anthropological, phenomenological, discursive and other "alternative" elements (different from mainstream psychology and strict quantitative methods) in specific situations of daily life. Bearing this in mind:
Discuss the importance of these qualitative approaches of inquiry in building and sustaining a "critical psychology" that is interested in understanding how:
1) knowledge is produced, used and appropriated (depending on the different functions of knowledge and its contexts, including psychology) from a constructivist view that questions the fallacy of objectivity (or the "world as given")
2) experience is framed and signified (depending on the social, cultural and particular context of the group or individual), which critically questions the fallacy of the centrality of the individual.
3) the underlying ideologies, discourses and relations of power oppress, stigmatize or alienate certain sections of society, which assumes the importance of studying the uses of language and knowledge (which are not neutral or "objective").
Take into account the following when elaborating the essay:
1. You will notice that there are three (3) interests in these approaches of inquiry. I am interested in that you at least elaborate one of them. In essence, the three of them are
inter-related, so elaborating any of them in-depth will be enough for the purposes of this
essay.
2. There’s several theoretical frameworks (from constructivist and feminist theories to
colonial and ethnological theories) and methods (ranging from ground theory to analysis of
discourse and narrative analysis) that you can choose fro.
2. AGENDA
Presentation Vocabulary (14-18)
Vocab Game (1-18)
Presentation:
Appositives: Explaining the concept 178-79
Anecdotes
Discussion:
Reviewing The Focus
Reviewing the Basic Features
Reviewing the outline
In-Class Writing: Drafting the Concept Essay
3. The Game
• With your group, discuss the words on the
next slide for five or so minutes and prepare
to compete
• Each team will send one member to the
board in rotation.
• I will read a definition
• The first team member to write the correct
definition on the board scores a point for
their team.
• The team with the highest score at the end
of the game earns not only the glory of
winning but also five extra participation
points.
7. A Sentence Strategy: Appositives
177-79
An appositive is a noun or pronoun that, along
with modifiers, gives more information about
another noun or pronoun. Here is an example
from Ngo’s concept essay (the appositive is in
italics and the noun it refers to is underlined):
Cannibalism, the act of human beings eating
human flesh(Sagan 2), has a long history and
continues to hold interest and create
controversy. (Ngo paragraph 5)
8. By placing the definition in an appositive phrase
right after the word it defines, this sentence locates
the definition exactly where readers need it. Writers
explaining concepts rely on appositives because
they serve many different purposes needed in
concept essays, as the following examples
demonstrate. (Again, the appositive is in italics and
the noun it refers to is underlined.)
Defining a New Term
Some researchers believe hyperthymics may be at
increased risk of depression or hypomania, a mild
variant of mania (Friedman, Paragraph 5).
Cannibalism can be broken down into two main
categories: exocannibalism, the eating of outsiders
of foreigners, and endocannibalism, the eating of
members of one’s own social group (Shipman 70).
(Ngo paragraph, 6)
9. Introducing a New Term
Each person carries in his or her mind a
unique subliminal guide to the ideal
partner, a “love map.” (Toufexis,
paragraph 17)
Giving Credentials of Experts
• “Love is a natural high,” observes Anthony Walsh,
author of The Science of Love: Understanding Love
and Its Effects on Mind and Body. (Toufexis,
paragraph 10)
10. Identifying People and Things
When I was in high school I read the Robert Browning
Poem ‘My Last Duchess.’ In it, the narrator said he
killed is wife, the duchess, because . . .(Friedman,
Paragraph 2).
Giving Examples or Specifics
Some 2,400 years ago, Hippocrates proposed that a
mixture of four basic humors—blood, phlegm, yellow
bile, and black bile—determined human
temperament…(Friedman, paragraph 6)
11. Practice writing appositives:
Try to write five good
sentences
Cannibalism, the act of human beings eating human
flesh(Sagan 2), has a long history and continues to hold
interest and create controversy. (Ngo paragraph 5)
Each person carries in his or her mind a unique subliminal
guide to the ideal partner, a “love map.” (Toufexis,
paragraph 17)
Some 2,400 years ago, Hippocrates proposed that a
mixture of four basic humors—blood, phlegm, yellow bile,
and black bile—determined human
temperament…(Friedman, paragraph 6)
14. Short Anecdotes
[S]ome South American tribes kill their victims to
be served as part of funeral rituals, with human
sacrifices denoting that the deceased was held
in high honor.
Unlike the Bangalas, however, the Indians
sacrifice only one victim instead of many in a
single ritual.
15. Brainstorming
Write down some ideas for what
kind of extended anecdote you
might include in your essay
introduction.
Write down two or three short
anecdotes you might use to
support your body paragraphs.
16. Do you have a
plan to focus
your essay?
Take a look at what you have so
far: do you have a Concept? A
Definition? A focus for your
concept? Categories? Types?
17. Focusing your Concept
Remember, choose your concept, and then limit it. For example, if you
are writing your essay about the concept of games, focus on one kind of
game, like playground games.
Then split your limited concept into two or three categories: Using the
games example, we might say games with a ball and games without a
ball.
Then identify two or three types that fall under each of the categories.
For example, you might use kids games with a ball, teenager’s games
with a ball, and adult games with a ball. You could use the same three
type for “games without a ball.”
18. Concept: Games
Limiter: Playground Games
Category 1:
Games with a ball
Types
Kids’ games with a ball
Teenagers’ games with a
ball
Adults’ games with a ball.
Category 2:
Games without a ball
Types
Kids’ games without a ball
Teenagers’ games without
a ball
Adults’ games without a
ball.
19. Then provide an example of each kind.
.
Games: Playground games:
With a ball (kids, teens, adults);
Without a ball (kids, teens, adults)
Find examples of each type:
a kids game played with a
ball (kick ball; four square;
tether ball)
a teen game played with a
ball (basketball, soccer,
baseball or fast pitch)
and an adult game with a
ball (slo-pitch or lawn
bowling).
a kids game played
without a ball (tag, hide
and go seek)
a teen game played
without a ball (kick the
can, red rover)
an adult game played
without a ball (cribbage,
chess, checkers at the
park)
20. Concept Essay: Basic Features
A Focused Explanation
Effective writers narrow the general concept, providing an explanation that is
focused on an aspect of the concept likely to be of interest to readers.
A Readable plan
divides the information into clearly distinguishable topics
forecasts the topics
presents the topics in a logical order
gives readers cues or road signs to guide them, such as topic sentences,
transitions, and summaries
Appropriate Explanatory Strategies
21. Tips for writing your essay
Begin with a long anecdote to draw the reader into your essay.
Write a thesis that includes all of the categories you will discuss.
Use examples and definitions to make your point.
Use appositives to describe nouns and eliminate wordiness.
Take a look at what you have so far: do you have a Concept? A
Definition? A focus for your concept? Categories? Types?
Do you have your thesis?
22. Work on your outline for the
in-class essay at our next
meeting
Introduction
Extended Anecdote
Thesis
Category 1
Type 1
Type 2
Type 3
Category 2
Type 1
Type 2
Type 3
Repeat if Necessary
Conclusion
23. Homework
Read: HG through chapter 24
Post #12 Post a list of five appositive phrases you wrote to use in
your essay.
Study: Vocab (1-18)
Bring: A one page outline for your in-class essay, pen or pencil,
and paper.