Class 20
EWRT 2
AGENDA
 Dates to Remember
 Make up Exam
 In-class writing: Self Assessment
 Drafting Essay #5
Dates to Remember


 Tuesday, Dec. 4:             Friday, Dec 7
   Make-up Exam                 Revised Essay due
   Self Assessment               (midnight)


                               Thursday, Dec 13: 9:15-
 Thursday, Dec 6:              11:15
   Meetings by appointment      Essay #5 due (paper or
    in my office.                 electronic)
   Self-Assessment due          Game of Thrones
    (midnight)                    Episode
Make-up Exam
When I come by, get the one
 exam you would like to make up.
You have 20 minutes to complete
 the exam.
In A Game of Thrones, you win or
 you die! Play Hard!
Self-Assessment Essay
 (150-300 words)
• The blogging post points (200) require self-
  assessment. Consider three aspects of your
  responses:
    • First, how many of the posts did you make?
    • Second, what was the quality of your response?
    • Third, how timely were your submissions?
• Write a short essay justifying your grade. This is an
  essay like any other, so make sure you have an
  intro, a thesis, body paragraphs, a counterargument
  if appropriate, and a conclusion. You must include a
  grade!

This is due midnight, Thursday, December 6.
Reading the Prompt
Writing the Thesis
Look for key words:
Argue, Explain, Discuss, Describe, Analyze, Exemplify, Compare
Explain what Thoreau meant by “Under a government which imprisons
any unjustly, the true place for a just man is also in a prison.”
Using one or two characters from A Game of Thrones, Explain how this
idea shows itself.
Argue for or against the character’s or characters’ moral and ethical
strength.
Argue for the wisdom of adhering to moral and ethical strength in
contemporary America.”
Use Examples from both the novel and society to support your
assertions.
For this prompt, your thesis would be focused on this part:

   “Argue for or against the character’s or characters’
    moral and ethical strength.

Then follow with the “So what” part:

   Then argue for the wisdom of adhering to moral and
    ethical strength in contemporary America.”
Look for key words: Argue, Explain, Discuss, Describe, Analyze, Compare

Argue that Plato’s “Allegory of the Cave” could be used as an accurate
description of mankind’s relationship to the Truth in A Game of Thrones.

Explain who or what represents the following people: people in
chairs, images, the fire, figures tending the fire, the sun, the truth-bringer.

Argue for how you could extend your application of the “Allegory” to
contemporary society.
For this one, you would focus here:

 Argue that Plato’s “Allegory of the Cave” could be used as an
  accurate description of mankind’s relationship to the Truth in A
  Game of Thrones.

Then add the so what part:

 Argue for how you could extend your application of the
  “Allegory” to contemporary society.
Look for key words:
Argue, Explain, Discuss, Describe, Analyze, Compare

Compare: Make sure you do compare each of the siblings
to Judith and William Shakespeare. You might want to set up
on paragraph that outlines the Shakespeare’s situation and
follow with the other sets of siblings.
Argue that their lives would be different w/o gender bias
Discuss: Extend your theories about A Game of Thrones to
modern society.
Argue that the limitations and opportunities still hold true for
women today.
Thesis
Argue that (and how) their lives would be different
  had gender not played a role in their fates.

So What?

Argue that these limitation and opportunities still hold
 (or don’t hold) true for women today
Drafting Essay #5: The Thesis

Please copy your question onto
 a piece of paper.


Directly below it, write a one
 sentence answer that addresses
 the argument portion of the
 prompt. This will be your thesis.
Outline
Introduction: Do I need to respond to a part of the prompt here?
Should I include a directed summary here

Thesis: One sentence directly answering the question

Body paragraphs: Do I need to respond to particular aspects of the prompt?
Which?
What topic sentences can I use that directly support my thesis?
Which textual evidence will I use to both establish my theoretical framework
(A World of Ideas) and to support my argument (A Game of Thrones).

Conclusion: Can I extend my analysis of A Game of Thrones to contemporary
society? Do I need a different type of conclusion? Which?
Essay #5
When you have a clear
 thesis, you may work on your
 essay.
I will be around to ask and
 answer questions
Homework
 Essay #5

 Finish your revision (due Friday night at midnight)

 Remember, we will not have a formal meeting
  on Thursday. I will be available for conferences in
  my office during class hours. I do suggest making
  an appointment if you want to see me.

 See you in class on Thursday, December 13th at
  9:15!

Class 20

  • 1.
  • 2.
    AGENDA  Dates toRemember  Make up Exam  In-class writing: Self Assessment  Drafting Essay #5
  • 3.
    Dates to Remember Tuesday, Dec. 4:  Friday, Dec 7  Make-up Exam  Revised Essay due  Self Assessment (midnight)  Thursday, Dec 13: 9:15-  Thursday, Dec 6: 11:15  Meetings by appointment  Essay #5 due (paper or in my office. electronic)  Self-Assessment due  Game of Thrones (midnight) Episode
  • 4.
    Make-up Exam When Icome by, get the one exam you would like to make up. You have 20 minutes to complete the exam. In A Game of Thrones, you win or you die! Play Hard!
  • 5.
    Self-Assessment Essay (150-300words) • The blogging post points (200) require self- assessment. Consider three aspects of your responses: • First, how many of the posts did you make? • Second, what was the quality of your response? • Third, how timely were your submissions? • Write a short essay justifying your grade. This is an essay like any other, so make sure you have an intro, a thesis, body paragraphs, a counterargument if appropriate, and a conclusion. You must include a grade! This is due midnight, Thursday, December 6.
  • 6.
  • 7.
    Look for keywords: Argue, Explain, Discuss, Describe, Analyze, Exemplify, Compare Explain what Thoreau meant by “Under a government which imprisons any unjustly, the true place for a just man is also in a prison.” Using one or two characters from A Game of Thrones, Explain how this idea shows itself. Argue for or against the character’s or characters’ moral and ethical strength. Argue for the wisdom of adhering to moral and ethical strength in contemporary America.” Use Examples from both the novel and society to support your assertions.
  • 8.
    For this prompt,your thesis would be focused on this part: “Argue for or against the character’s or characters’ moral and ethical strength. Then follow with the “So what” part: Then argue for the wisdom of adhering to moral and ethical strength in contemporary America.”
  • 9.
    Look for keywords: Argue, Explain, Discuss, Describe, Analyze, Compare Argue that Plato’s “Allegory of the Cave” could be used as an accurate description of mankind’s relationship to the Truth in A Game of Thrones. Explain who or what represents the following people: people in chairs, images, the fire, figures tending the fire, the sun, the truth-bringer. Argue for how you could extend your application of the “Allegory” to contemporary society.
  • 10.
    For this one,you would focus here:  Argue that Plato’s “Allegory of the Cave” could be used as an accurate description of mankind’s relationship to the Truth in A Game of Thrones. Then add the so what part:  Argue for how you could extend your application of the “Allegory” to contemporary society.
  • 11.
    Look for keywords: Argue, Explain, Discuss, Describe, Analyze, Compare Compare: Make sure you do compare each of the siblings to Judith and William Shakespeare. You might want to set up on paragraph that outlines the Shakespeare’s situation and follow with the other sets of siblings. Argue that their lives would be different w/o gender bias Discuss: Extend your theories about A Game of Thrones to modern society. Argue that the limitations and opportunities still hold true for women today.
  • 12.
    Thesis Argue that (andhow) their lives would be different had gender not played a role in their fates. So What? Argue that these limitation and opportunities still hold (or don’t hold) true for women today
  • 13.
    Drafting Essay #5:The Thesis Please copy your question onto a piece of paper. Directly below it, write a one sentence answer that addresses the argument portion of the prompt. This will be your thesis.
  • 14.
    Outline Introduction: Do Ineed to respond to a part of the prompt here? Should I include a directed summary here Thesis: One sentence directly answering the question Body paragraphs: Do I need to respond to particular aspects of the prompt? Which? What topic sentences can I use that directly support my thesis? Which textual evidence will I use to both establish my theoretical framework (A World of Ideas) and to support my argument (A Game of Thrones). Conclusion: Can I extend my analysis of A Game of Thrones to contemporary society? Do I need a different type of conclusion? Which?
  • 15.
    Essay #5 When youhave a clear thesis, you may work on your essay. I will be around to ask and answer questions
  • 16.
    Homework  Essay #5 Finish your revision (due Friday night at midnight)  Remember, we will not have a formal meeting on Thursday. I will be available for conferences in my office during class hours. I do suggest making an appointment if you want to see me.  See you in class on Thursday, December 13th at 9:15!