Class 20 
EWRT 2
AGENDA 
End of Quarter Plan 
Make up Vocabulary Exam 
 In-class writing: Self Assessment 
 Drafting Essay #5
End of Quarter Plan: M/W 
Today: Class 20 
 Make-up Exam 
 Self Assessment 
 Class 21 
Meetings by 
appointment in my 
office. 
 Friday, Week 11 
 Self-Assessment due before noon 
 Revised Essay due before noon 
 Class 22: 25 participation 
points 
 Game of Thrones Episode 
 Final discussion 
 Final (Tuesday 12/09): Final 
Paper due
End of Quarter Plan: T/TH 
Today: Class 20 
 Make-up Exam 
 Self Assessment 
 Class 21 
 Meetings by 
appointment in my 
office. 
 Friday, Week 11 
 Self-Assessment due before noon 
 Revised Essay due before noon 
 Final: Class 22: (Thursday 
12/11 7-9 am) 25 participation 
points 
 Final due before class begins. 
 Game of Thrones Episode 
 Final discussion
Make-up Exam 
When I come by, get the one exam 
you would like to make up. 
You have 20 minutes to complete the 
exam. 
In A Game of Thrones, you win or you 
die! Play Hard!
Self-Assessment 
• The website post points (150) require self-assessment. 
Consider three aspects of your 
responses: 
• First, how many of the posts did you make? 
• Second, what was the quality of your 
response? 
• Third, how timely were your submissions? 
• Write a brief justification of your grade. You may 
send this as an email to 
palmoreessaysubmission@gmail.com. 
• Due Friday, Week 11
Reading the Prompt 
Writing A Thesis
Look for key words: Argue, Explain, Discuss, Describe, Analyze, 
Exemplify, Compare 
Explain what Thoreau meant by “Under a government which imprisons any 
unjustly, the true place for a just man is also in a prison.” 
Using one or two characters from A Game of Thrones, Explain how this idea 
shows itself. 
Argue for or against the character’s or characters’ moral and ethical strength. 
Argue for the wisdom of adhering to moral and ethical strength in 
contemporary America.” 
Use Examples from both the novel and society to support your assertions.
For this prompt, your thesis would be focused on this part: 
“Argue for or against the character’s or characters’ moral 
and ethical strength. 
Then argue for the wisdom of adhering to moral and ethical 
strength in contemporary America.”
Look for key words: Argue, Explain, Discuss, Describe, Analyze, Compare 
Argue that Plato’s “Allegory of the Cave” could be used as an accurate 
description of mankind’s relationship to the Truth in A Game of Thrones. 
Explain who or what represents the following people: people in chairs, 
images, the fire, figures tending the fire, the sun, the truth-bringer. 
Argue for how you could extend your application of the “Allegory” to 
contemporary society.
For this one, you would focus here: 
 Argue that Plato’s “Allegory of the Cave” could be used as an accurate 
description of mankind’s relationship to the Truth in A Game of 
Thrones. 
 Argue for how you could extend your application of the “Allegory” to 
contemporary society.
Look for key words: Argue, Explain, Discuss, Describe, 
Analyze, Compare 
Compare: Make sure you do compare each of the siblings to 
Judith and William Shakespeare. You might want to set up on 
paragraph that outlines the Shakespeare’s situation and follow 
with the other sets of siblings. 
Argue that their lives would be different w/o gender bias 
Discuss: Extend your theories about A Game of Thrones to 
modern society. 
Argue that the limitations and opportunities still hold true for 
women today.
Thesis 
Argue that (and how) their lives would be different had 
gender not played a role in their fates. 
So What? 
Argue that these limitation and opportunities still hold (or 
don’t hold) true for women today
Essay #5: The Thesis 
Please copy your question onto a 
piece of paper. 
Directly below it, write a one 
sentence answer that addresses 
the argument portion of the prompt. 
This will be your thesis.
Outline 
 Introduction: Do I need to respond to a part of the prompt here? 
 Should I include a directed summary here? 
 Thesis: One sentence directly answering the question 
 Body paragraphs: Do I need to respond to particular aspects of the 
prompt? Which? 
 What topic sentences can I use that directly support my thesis? 
 Which textual evidence will I use to both establish my theoretical 
framework (A World of Ideas) and to support my argument (A Game of 
Thrones)? 
 Conclusion: Can I extend my analysis of A Game of Thrones to 
contemporary society? Do I need a different type of conclusion? Which?
Essay #5 
When you have a clear thesis, 
you may work on your essay. 
I will be around to ask and 
answer questions
Homework 
 The Last Post #37: Outline and Thesis for Essay 5 
 Finish your revision: Due Friday, Week 11 before 
noon. 
Work on essay #5: Due before the final class begins. 
Remember, we will not have a formal meeting for 
class 21. Instead, I will be available for conferences 
in my office during class hours. I suggest making an 
appointment.

Ewrt 2 class 20

  • 1.
  • 2.
    AGENDA End ofQuarter Plan Make up Vocabulary Exam  In-class writing: Self Assessment  Drafting Essay #5
  • 3.
    End of QuarterPlan: M/W Today: Class 20  Make-up Exam  Self Assessment  Class 21 Meetings by appointment in my office.  Friday, Week 11  Self-Assessment due before noon  Revised Essay due before noon  Class 22: 25 participation points  Game of Thrones Episode  Final discussion  Final (Tuesday 12/09): Final Paper due
  • 4.
    End of QuarterPlan: T/TH Today: Class 20  Make-up Exam  Self Assessment  Class 21  Meetings by appointment in my office.  Friday, Week 11  Self-Assessment due before noon  Revised Essay due before noon  Final: Class 22: (Thursday 12/11 7-9 am) 25 participation points  Final due before class begins.  Game of Thrones Episode  Final discussion
  • 5.
    Make-up Exam WhenI come by, get the one exam you would like to make up. You have 20 minutes to complete the exam. In A Game of Thrones, you win or you die! Play Hard!
  • 6.
    Self-Assessment • Thewebsite post points (150) require self-assessment. Consider three aspects of your responses: • First, how many of the posts did you make? • Second, what was the quality of your response? • Third, how timely were your submissions? • Write a brief justification of your grade. You may send this as an email to palmoreessaysubmission@gmail.com. • Due Friday, Week 11
  • 7.
    Reading the Prompt Writing A Thesis
  • 8.
    Look for keywords: Argue, Explain, Discuss, Describe, Analyze, Exemplify, Compare Explain what Thoreau meant by “Under a government which imprisons any unjustly, the true place for a just man is also in a prison.” Using one or two characters from A Game of Thrones, Explain how this idea shows itself. Argue for or against the character’s or characters’ moral and ethical strength. Argue for the wisdom of adhering to moral and ethical strength in contemporary America.” Use Examples from both the novel and society to support your assertions.
  • 9.
    For this prompt,your thesis would be focused on this part: “Argue for or against the character’s or characters’ moral and ethical strength. Then argue for the wisdom of adhering to moral and ethical strength in contemporary America.”
  • 10.
    Look for keywords: Argue, Explain, Discuss, Describe, Analyze, Compare Argue that Plato’s “Allegory of the Cave” could be used as an accurate description of mankind’s relationship to the Truth in A Game of Thrones. Explain who or what represents the following people: people in chairs, images, the fire, figures tending the fire, the sun, the truth-bringer. Argue for how you could extend your application of the “Allegory” to contemporary society.
  • 11.
    For this one,you would focus here:  Argue that Plato’s “Allegory of the Cave” could be used as an accurate description of mankind’s relationship to the Truth in A Game of Thrones.  Argue for how you could extend your application of the “Allegory” to contemporary society.
  • 12.
    Look for keywords: Argue, Explain, Discuss, Describe, Analyze, Compare Compare: Make sure you do compare each of the siblings to Judith and William Shakespeare. You might want to set up on paragraph that outlines the Shakespeare’s situation and follow with the other sets of siblings. Argue that their lives would be different w/o gender bias Discuss: Extend your theories about A Game of Thrones to modern society. Argue that the limitations and opportunities still hold true for women today.
  • 13.
    Thesis Argue that(and how) their lives would be different had gender not played a role in their fates. So What? Argue that these limitation and opportunities still hold (or don’t hold) true for women today
  • 14.
    Essay #5: TheThesis Please copy your question onto a piece of paper. Directly below it, write a one sentence answer that addresses the argument portion of the prompt. This will be your thesis.
  • 15.
    Outline  Introduction:Do I need to respond to a part of the prompt here?  Should I include a directed summary here?  Thesis: One sentence directly answering the question  Body paragraphs: Do I need to respond to particular aspects of the prompt? Which?  What topic sentences can I use that directly support my thesis?  Which textual evidence will I use to both establish my theoretical framework (A World of Ideas) and to support my argument (A Game of Thrones)?  Conclusion: Can I extend my analysis of A Game of Thrones to contemporary society? Do I need a different type of conclusion? Which?
  • 16.
    Essay #5 Whenyou have a clear thesis, you may work on your essay. I will be around to ask and answer questions
  • 17.
    Homework  TheLast Post #37: Outline and Thesis for Essay 5  Finish your revision: Due Friday, Week 11 before noon. Work on essay #5: Due before the final class begins. Remember, we will not have a formal meeting for class 21. Instead, I will be available for conferences in my office during class hours. I suggest making an appointment.