3. Script Changes
We changed the “will you come here” in Tiffs line to “come
over here” and we made Phil say “What have you found”
instead of “What is that”
In the room scene we added a few words to the different
lines such as adding “question (line 3)”, “tonight (line 6 and
line 14)”, “ please and while (line 11)” and took out a line of
lexie which was “okay whatever you say”
We did these script changes in these scenes due to the fact
that it made it more natural as it did not look that scripted.
Another reason was because when our actors said their
lines a lot of it was improvised and said in a way that they
remembered it which was very similar to the script but not
exactly identical.
5. Storyboard Changes
We added the fox opening (logo) before shot one to
associate our film to our studio/production company
which is fox, representing brand identity.
We cut shot 5 short to before tiff started calling Phil
and jumped to shot 8 to show the badge. After shot 8
it went back to the rest of shot 5 when tiff was calling
Phil. We did this because when we were editing we
found that shot 8 looked quite random and didn’t fit
in its original place so we moved it to where it is now
and found out that it looked better there.
6. Storyboard Changes
We added another shot between shot 5 and 6 which
was a MS of Phil from the side of him saying “what
have you found.” We did this because we thought that
it would be better to see his face when he said it and
for him to say it right after Tiff calls him rather than
waiting, as it makes it look more realistic and natural.
It also adds more of a variety of different shots in this
scene rather than always seeing their bodies.
Instead of the cops putting the guns away in shot 7,
we made them just walk close to the object due to the
fact that we decided not to have the guns present in
the scene anymore.
7. Storyboard Changes
Shot 7 jumps to shot 9 due to the fact that we moved shot
8 and because it makes the actions look more fluid and
continuous. Also there is no more dialogue in Shot 9 since
it was Phil’s line that was said in the new shot between
shot 5 and 6.
We took out the dialogue in shot 25 due to the fact that it
was not really necessary and looked better without it when
we were editing.
We took out shot 26 and made it part of shot 27 due to the
fact that it made more sense to keep it in one shot and
when we were filming we found that shot 27 looked better.
When editing it also made it look more fluid and
continuous.
8. Storyboard Changes
We added a new shot within 27 which was a MS of Ali
looking in the mirror then went back to 27. We did this
because it was something our teacher suggested we do.
But most importantly because it showed what Lexie was
texting about and it made it more interesting due to the
fact that there was a gap between the texting and it wasn’t
just the texting going on for a long time.
We moved the dialogue of Ali where she says “Are you….”
to shot 28
Shot 32 was shot at a side angle not back due to the fact
that it made the shot look better and we liked it more.
