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Yolonda Alston

Eng 101

Professor Alicia Bolton

30 July 2012

                      Strength and weakness of annotated bibliography

       My annotated bibliography is based on my five sourcesI used to do my research paper

on. We had to have five sources which were two articles, one film-on-demand, one e-book,

and one physical book. We also had to summarize, evaluates, and explain how the source will

be used in our research paper.

       My weakness in this essay was In-text citations were not formatted and framed

correctly. My evaluation of each source was not logical and well-explained. I still had some

trouble with using second-person and the correct use of grammar and word choices. My

summary of each source was not thorough explain. My introduction could have been a little bit

more clearly explain of my purpose to write a research paper.

       My strength is how the source is used in the essay by logical and well-explained

paragraph. The essay is well-organized and the transitions flow is perfect than the other two

essay I did. My evaluation was adequate/ effective to each of my source. I explain how

relevance the issue related to today world.

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Bibliography self revise

  • 1. Yolonda Alston Eng 101 Professor Alicia Bolton 30 July 2012 Strength and weakness of annotated bibliography My annotated bibliography is based on my five sourcesI used to do my research paper on. We had to have five sources which were two articles, one film-on-demand, one e-book, and one physical book. We also had to summarize, evaluates, and explain how the source will be used in our research paper. My weakness in this essay was In-text citations were not formatted and framed correctly. My evaluation of each source was not logical and well-explained. I still had some trouble with using second-person and the correct use of grammar and word choices. My summary of each source was not thorough explain. My introduction could have been a little bit more clearly explain of my purpose to write a research paper. My strength is how the source is used in the essay by logical and well-explained paragraph. The essay is well-organized and the transitions flow is perfect than the other two essay I did. My evaluation was adequate/ effective to each of my source. I explain how relevance the issue related to today world.