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After presenting to our
 media class, teacher
and teaching assistants
   we then received
 thoughts feeling and
potential ideas for our
         video.
           ---
   We received both
 negative and positive
comments throughout
     the feedback.
Positive
 We were told that our idea was well
thought out and something that some
   class members said they would
          definitely watch.

                  ---

   However this was mostly girls who
 expressed there liking to our idea. This
 showed our group that we need to add
something that may appeal to a males as
well as females. It also showed us that we
   were happy with our idea and look
          forward to executing it.
Constructive Criticism
Some of our peers said they didn’t like the
  ending of our video which showed our
    female characters boyfriend dying.
                     ---
 Suggestions: it was suggested to us that
  instead of showing the male character
  dying, we should have something that
symbolizes his death, for example a grave
 stone or the laying down of flowers. The
 feedback group said that this would add
 mystery and would make the video look
             more professional
                     ---
 As a group we felt this was very true and
       did not want to take away the
professionalism away from the video and
   will definitely be taking this idea on
                    board
Constructive Criticism
  Members of the feedback group also
expressed a dislike to the video being in
                 colour.

 They expressed that black and white
suited the feel of the video and would go
          better with the song

When presenting, we presented the idea
  of both a colour video and black and
white video. There was a strong dislike to
colour this helped us make our decision
  as our feedback group are our target
                audience
Constructive
       Criticism
  Members of the feedback group
   also expressed a dislike to the
       video being in colour.
                  --
  They expressed that black and
 white suited the feel of the video
and would go better with the song
                  --
When presenting, we presented the
  idea of both a colour video and
black and white video. There was a
strong dislike to colour this helped
    us make our decision as our
   feedback group are our target
             audience
The general consensus
 amongst the group is that we
 are going to take on all ideas
 from the feedback session on
  board and incorporate them
within our music video. So we
   will shoot in monochrome
(black and white) and we will
not show the death of the male
   character within the video.

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Audinece feeback after treatment

  • 1. After presenting to our media class, teacher and teaching assistants we then received thoughts feeling and potential ideas for our video. --- We received both negative and positive comments throughout the feedback.
  • 2. Positive We were told that our idea was well thought out and something that some class members said they would definitely watch. --- However this was mostly girls who expressed there liking to our idea. This showed our group that we need to add something that may appeal to a males as well as females. It also showed us that we were happy with our idea and look forward to executing it.
  • 3. Constructive Criticism Some of our peers said they didn’t like the ending of our video which showed our female characters boyfriend dying. --- Suggestions: it was suggested to us that instead of showing the male character dying, we should have something that symbolizes his death, for example a grave stone or the laying down of flowers. The feedback group said that this would add mystery and would make the video look more professional --- As a group we felt this was very true and did not want to take away the professionalism away from the video and will definitely be taking this idea on board
  • 4. Constructive Criticism Members of the feedback group also expressed a dislike to the video being in colour. They expressed that black and white suited the feel of the video and would go better with the song When presenting, we presented the idea of both a colour video and black and white video. There was a strong dislike to colour this helped us make our decision as our feedback group are our target audience
  • 5. Constructive Criticism Members of the feedback group also expressed a dislike to the video being in colour. -- They expressed that black and white suited the feel of the video and would go better with the song -- When presenting, we presented the idea of both a colour video and black and white video. There was a strong dislike to colour this helped us make our decision as our feedback group are our target audience
  • 6. The general consensus amongst the group is that we are going to take on all ideas from the feedback session on board and incorporate them within our music video. So we will shoot in monochrome (black and white) and we will not show the death of the male character within the video.