The document summarizes audience feedback on a music video. Viewers liked the black and white cinematography, camera work, editing, and how it fit the song. They found the video convincing because it was filmed and cut well and matched the mood and message of the music. Some criticisms were that the artist didn't look like they were singing and there was too much repetitive walking. Based on this feedback, the creators concluded they should improve the lip syncing and add more scenes related to the train to make the story clearer and video more engaging.

1. Audience Feedback

2. Audience Feedback
• We finished the rough draft of our music
video, and in order to get a wide variety
of feedback, we showed our video to a
group of students and asked them:
1. What do you like about our video?
2. How convincing is our music video?
Why?
3. Any criticisms of the video?

3. Audience Feedback
• We collected all the results and looked at
the feedback and came up with a list of
the responses we got most often for each
question

4. What do you like about our video?
• Black and White
• Good camera work and editing
• Fits the song
• Overlapping storylines
• The varied shots
• It flows well
• Skyshot

5. What do you like about our video?
• Time lapse
• Realistic, deep and relatable
• Simple but effective
• Storyline easy to follow
• Establishing shots
• Journey of the character
• Paper catching fire

6. How convincing is our music video?
Why?
Most common responses:
• ‘Very, good use of camera’
• ‘Very, runs smoothly’
• ‘Very, it all made sense’
• ‘Filmed really well, flows’
• ‘Goes well with the music’
• ‘Black and white filter made mood more
convincing’
• ‘Went well with the message of the song’
• ‘Very, looked like an actual music video’

7. Any criticisms of the video?
• Doesn’t look like he’s singing
• Artist need to look at camera more
• Lip syncing
• Artist needs to open his mouth more
• Lots of random walking
• Repetetive
• Too much walking around, needs other stuff
• Not very clear reason behind story

8. Conclusion
• From the feedback from our audience we can
see that the Black and White filter and the
timelapse are one of the best parts of the video.
• After viewing the comments of the criticisms
section we concluded that the lip sync needed to
be jiggled slightly to be more time with the
music. We also think that we should add in more
scenes to do with the train to make the video
more interesting and make more sense.