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Feedback we received from our
target audience
Xheni

2. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved
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Feedback we received from our
target audience
Sayana

3. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved
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Feedback we received from our
target audience
Susan

4. Sanel and Kaya
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Feedback we received from our
target audience
Marcin

5. Summary of what our target audience said M
Overall most of them do enjoy watching thriller
films as they like the thought of being scared.
Also they find it interesting to see what the
spirits will do next to the character in while film.
Also none of our audience thought that our
opening sequence was complicated and they
liked our theme concept. However some said
that would like us to film in the dark.

6. Kaya
Characters N
How have you developed your characters since draft 1?
• We developed our character to be less dark and a lot more relatable to a wider range of
our target audience
• We made the character one age rather than a variety so its less confusing
• The clown and doll have been developed into a spiritual characters who rather than look
like the dolls to 2 girls with a doll and clown toys.

7. Kaya
Characters N
Actor 1: Character 1:
Sanel Homer Laura Hibbitt
Age: Age:
17 19

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Kaya
Characters N
Inspirational pictures
Tired eyes
Clothes that don’t stand
out

9. Kaya
Characters N
Costume and props
Mascara
Blush
Tired eyes
Pale skin
Coloured top
Messy hair
Blue jeans Brown cardigan

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Kaya
Characters N
Mise –en-scene
Name – Laura Hibbit
Gender – Female
Age – 19
Costume – Brown cardigan, jeans, top
Props – None
Make-up – Mascara, tired eyes, blush
Stereotype – Normal smart girl, average
Facial expression – Scared, shock
Body language – Gentle, awkward
Representation – Typical teenage youth. A smart girl who’s abit
popular around her area

11. Kaya
Characters N
Actor 2: Character 2:
Gia Alveranga Cilia Elizabeth Carter
Age: Age:
17 104

12. Kaya
Characters N
Inspirational pictures
Plain white dress little Pale white face with
girls used to wear black circles around
eyes

13. Kaya
Characters N
Costume and props
£3.19 £1.99
- White

14. Kaya
Characters N
Mise –en-scene
Name – Cilia Elizabeth Carter
Gender – Female
Age – 104
Costume – White dress
Props – None
Make-up – Pale black eyes
Stereotype – Little girl
Facial expression – face doesn't move much, giggling
Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, straight face
Representation – A dead little girl from the 1800’s

15. Kaya
Characters N
Actor 3: Character 3:
Mary Elizabeth Carter
Rahel Fasil
Age: Age:
16 105

16. Kaya
Characters N
Inspirational pictures
Plain white dress little Pale white face with
girls used to wear black circles around
eyes

17. Kaya
Characters N
Costume and props
£3.19 £1.99
- White

18. Kaya
Characters N
Mise –en-scene
Name – Mary Elizabeth Carter
Gender – Female
Age – 105
Costume – White dress
Props – None
Make-up – Pale black eyes
Stereotype – Little girl
Facial expression – face doesn't move much, giggling
Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, straight face
Representation – A dead little girl from the 1800’s

19. Kaya
Location O

20. Kaya
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What is this location?
This is where the whole opening sequence will be filmed
Is it always accessible?
This location is always accessible as its one of the group members
home and will always be open for filming
Health and safely.
• Getting to bus to the house
• Road safety when crossing roads
• Walking to the house
• Getting run over
• Bus crash