1. WRITING
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CENSORSHIP
Censorship is growing up day by day on YouTube. Not only deleting videos but also
deleting YouTube's channels. But, what is good and what is bad with this
censorship?
On the one hand, this censorship protects minors of their access to contests
unsuitable for their age. For example, extremely violent videos or with sexual content
that a child can't understand.
Also, YouTube's censorship avoids violating the fundamental rights of individuals.
Prohibiting the dissemination of videos that ridicule or attack to the dignity of others.
On the other hand, YouTube has begun to exceed on his censorship. It has begun to
prohibit the dissemination of any video or sound that doesn't have copyrights
permissions. For example, cannot use background music in your own videos if you
haven't rights on this music. Even, when the use of that music doesn't affect anyone.
Similarly, they censor videos with the complaint of any person who considers that a
video should be removed. For example, if you talk about a famous, this video could
be eliminated.
In my opinion, Youtube shouldn't censoring videos of TV shows, music, etc. because
of not having copyright's permissions. Actually, it's an advertising form to these
programs and artists. After all, it's a way to unite the audience with similar tastes
Very good
Corrections:
WRITING
____________________________________
CENSORSHIP
Censorship is growing up day by day on YouTube. Not only deleting videos but also
deleting YouTube's channels. But, what is good and what is bad with this
censorship?
On the one hand, this censorship protects minors from access to contents unsuitable
for their age. For example, extremely violent videos or with sexual content that a
child can't understand.

2. Also, YouTube's censorship avoids violating the fundamental rights of individuals.
Prohibiting the dissemination of videos that ridicule or attack the dignity of others.
On the other hand, YouTube has begun to take this censorship too far. It has begun
to prohibit the dissemination of any video or sound that doesn't have copyrights
permissions. For example, you cannot use background music in your own videos if
you haven't rights on this music. Even when the use of that music doesn't affect
anyone.
Similarly, they censor videos with the complaint of any person who considers that a
video should be removed. For example, if you talk about a celebrity, this video could
be eliminated.
In my opinion, Youtube shouldn't censor videos of TV shows, music, etc. because
one has no copyright permission. Actually, it's a way of advertising these programs
and artists. After all, it's a way to unite the audience with similar tastes
Alberto Salgado Pérez