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   Seminars

  Presented by Nigel Veal
Please take part!
for IELTS

Writing Task 2
Task 2: Write an essay discussing an
argument or a point of view, using a
minimum of 250 words.
Time allowed:
 40 minutes
Make sure your writing


f       cuses
    on the reader
• Do not use contractions such as can’t, I’ll,
don’t or abbreviations such as eg.
• Do not use slang such as kids, guys or stuff.
• Do not make personal comments directly to
your reader, such as I hope you like my essay.
1. the topic


Understand

             2. the task
Topic
It is inevitable that as technology develops
so traditional culture will be lost.
Technology and tradition are incompatible.
Task

To what extent do you agree or
 disagree with this statement?
Plan your essay
Section            Plan for sample Task 2 essay
The introduction   State viewpoint:
                   Strongly disagree, technology and tradition are compatible.
The body           Support this viewpoint:
                   Argument 1: in many countries they live side by side, eg Japan.
                   Argument 2: throughout history, technology has been
                   incorporated into traditional cultures, eg the introduction of
                   tractors.
                   Argument 3: technology can preserve traditional cultures, eg
                   ancient manuscripts, artifacts.

The conclusion     Re-state viewpoint:

                   Traditional cultures are not necessarily lost through the
                   development of technology.
Paraphrase the question stem!
Nowadays
State your viewpoint
In my opinion, I think…
In order to predict, practise using modal verbs of possibility.
For example, the world may/might/could/improve (if there
were a world government).
Write in paragraphs
The body of your essay

Reason 1 First/First of all… One reason for this
                             viewpoint is that…
Reason 2 Second…             In addition…
Reason 3 Third/Finally…      Another reason is
                             that…
Opinion essays
The issue                     What should we do about the traffic?
The writer expresses her      I think we can improve the traffic problem by
viewpoint about this issue.   improving public transport.
She proposes a suggestion.    The government should build an underground
She draw a conclusion.        train system.
She puts forward arguments Many people would leave their cars at home and
to support her claim.      use the train if it were reliable and cheap.
                           Improving public transport is more efficient and
                           better for the environment.
She quotes evidence to        The government’s own surveys in 2012
support her claim.            concluded that over 20% of people would use a
                              new train system regularly.
She argues against someone I don’t agree with the government that we must
else’s claims.             build roads to solve the traffic problem. More
                           roads will lead to more cars.
Support your opinion with reasons.

Support your reasons with examples.
Words in argumentative texts
an opinion        a fact        a viewpoint        a stance      a position
to argue for        to argue against          to put forward an argument
to claim       to make a claim       to support       to prove     to imply
to indicate    to show
evidence       an implication
to conclude        to draw a conclusion           to come to a conclusion
Balanced argument essay
Example of a balanced argument essay
Statement             For                              Against
School uniforms       • Uniforms are expensive so    • If students wear a uniform,
should be abolished     not having to buy them saves   they won’t pressure their
in all schools          money.                         parents to buy designer/
                                                       fashionable clothes that some
                                                       families can’t afford.
                      • Children can show their        • Wearing a uniform can foster
                        individuality.                   a sense of pride in their
                                                         school.
                      • Wearing a uniform will         • Students will always find a
                        prevent students being           way to pass judgment on
                        judged on the way they look.     their peers.
Task 2 assessment criteria
1. Task Response
2. Coherence and Cohesion
3. Lexical Resource
4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Cohesive phrases include wordings like:

Because of this, …
As this shows, …
As can clearly be seen from this example, …
It is clear that…
Thus, the idea that…
To illustrate this, …
After analyzing both points of view, …
Without a doubt, this causes…
Linking parts of your essay together
consequently      on the other hand
                  because
                 because           moreover
                                   moreover
                 in the same way
                 in the same way   other wise
                                   other wise

Expressing contrast                 Adding further support
but                                 in addition
however                             also
nevertheless                        furthermore
yet

Expressing similarities             Expressing conditions
likewise                            if
similarly                           unless
                                    when
                                    whether

Providing reasons                   Stating results
in order to                         thus
so as not to                        as a result
so that                             so
Besides
Be careful
Although governments have a role to play,
but it is ultimately individuals who need to
be persuaded to choose more sustainable
forms of transport.
Paraphrasing
excessive number of = too many
leads to = causes
many problems = numerous problems
in order to = so as to
tackle these problems = solve these problems
Traffic Problems
Countable and uncountable nouns
        advice advance
         advice
          fact pollution
           money toxin
        transport traffic
       transport      traffic
       knowledge news
     progress
     progress machinery
     information research
   travel dollar journey
    travel
         vehicle politics
                 equipment
       report equipment
              machine
exhaust fumes
exhausted smoke
Man, I’m exhausted!
Think of your essay as a sandwich
Vary your sentence
     structure
Gerunds are very versatile
If a person appears to be relatively wealthy, perhaps
owning an expensive car, living in a nice house and
                          living
generally enjoying a high standard of living, then
most people would say this person is successful.
Passing exams or completing a course
can be considered successful activities.
Another type of success can be achieved
simply by doing one’s own particular
job effectively.
Don’t try to translate your ideas from
     Vietnamese into English!
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Active Learning_Bí quyết luyện thi viết IELTS

  • 1. Active Learning Seminars Presented by Nigel Veal
  • 4. Task 2: Write an essay discussing an argument or a point of view, using a minimum of 250 words.
  • 6. Make sure your writing f cuses on the reader
  • 7. • Do not use contractions such as can’t, I’ll, don’t or abbreviations such as eg. • Do not use slang such as kids, guys or stuff. • Do not make personal comments directly to your reader, such as I hope you like my essay.
  • 9. Topic It is inevitable that as technology develops so traditional culture will be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible.
  • 10. Task To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
  • 12. Section Plan for sample Task 2 essay The introduction State viewpoint: Strongly disagree, technology and tradition are compatible. The body Support this viewpoint: Argument 1: in many countries they live side by side, eg Japan. Argument 2: throughout history, technology has been incorporated into traditional cultures, eg the introduction of tractors. Argument 3: technology can preserve traditional cultures, eg ancient manuscripts, artifacts. The conclusion Re-state viewpoint: Traditional cultures are not necessarily lost through the development of technology.
  • 16. In my opinion, I think…
  • 17. In order to predict, practise using modal verbs of possibility. For example, the world may/might/could/improve (if there were a world government).
  • 19. The body of your essay Reason 1 First/First of all… One reason for this viewpoint is that… Reason 2 Second… In addition… Reason 3 Third/Finally… Another reason is that…
  • 21. The issue What should we do about the traffic? The writer expresses her I think we can improve the traffic problem by viewpoint about this issue. improving public transport. She proposes a suggestion. The government should build an underground She draw a conclusion. train system. She puts forward arguments Many people would leave their cars at home and to support her claim. use the train if it were reliable and cheap. Improving public transport is more efficient and better for the environment. She quotes evidence to The government’s own surveys in 2012 support her claim. concluded that over 20% of people would use a new train system regularly. She argues against someone I don’t agree with the government that we must else’s claims. build roads to solve the traffic problem. More roads will lead to more cars.
  • 22. Support your opinion with reasons. Support your reasons with examples.
  • 23. Words in argumentative texts an opinion a fact a viewpoint a stance a position to argue for to argue against to put forward an argument to claim to make a claim to support to prove to imply to indicate to show evidence an implication to conclude to draw a conclusion to come to a conclusion
  • 25. Example of a balanced argument essay Statement For Against School uniforms • Uniforms are expensive so • If students wear a uniform, should be abolished not having to buy them saves they won’t pressure their in all schools money. parents to buy designer/ fashionable clothes that some families can’t afford. • Children can show their • Wearing a uniform can foster individuality. a sense of pride in their school. • Wearing a uniform will • Students will always find a prevent students being way to pass judgment on judged on the way they look. their peers.
  • 26. Task 2 assessment criteria 1. Task Response 2. Coherence and Cohesion 3. Lexical Resource 4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy
  • 27. Cohesive phrases include wordings like: Because of this, … As this shows, … As can clearly be seen from this example, … It is clear that… Thus, the idea that… To illustrate this, … After analyzing both points of view, … Without a doubt, this causes…
  • 28. Linking parts of your essay together
  • 29. consequently on the other hand because because moreover moreover in the same way in the same way other wise other wise Expressing contrast Adding further support but in addition however also nevertheless furthermore yet Expressing similarities Expressing conditions likewise if similarly unless when whether Providing reasons Stating results in order to thus so as not to as a result so that so
  • 32. Although governments have a role to play, but it is ultimately individuals who need to be persuaded to choose more sustainable forms of transport.
  • 33. Paraphrasing excessive number of = too many leads to = causes many problems = numerous problems in order to = so as to tackle these problems = solve these problems
  • 35. Countable and uncountable nouns advice advance advice fact pollution money toxin transport traffic transport traffic knowledge news progress progress machinery information research travel dollar journey travel vehicle politics equipment report equipment machine
  • 38.
  • 39. Think of your essay as a sandwich
  • 40. Vary your sentence structure
  • 41. Gerunds are very versatile
  • 42. If a person appears to be relatively wealthy, perhaps owning an expensive car, living in a nice house and living generally enjoying a high standard of living, then most people would say this person is successful.
  • 43. Passing exams or completing a course can be considered successful activities.
  • 44. Another type of success can be achieved simply by doing one’s own particular job effectively.
  • 45. Don’t try to translate your ideas from Vietnamese into English!
  • 47. English is your to Success!