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1. Regarding the skills, I am doing judo in my free time
since I was four years old…
With regard to my skill set, I have been doing judo in my
free time since I was four years old…
Climbed the social ladder on the group, I’m actually the
person who prepares the outdoors activities such as
riskly trips to mountain’s river, wall’s climbing, treasuer’s
findings on the city…
I climbed the social ladder in/within the group, I’m
currently the person who prepares (the) outdoor
activities such as risky trips to mountain river, wall
climbing, treasure hunting in the city…
As the extrovert person I am, I have great aptitudes to
interact with people.
As an extrovert / as the extroverted person I am, I have
great aptitudes to interact with people.
Finally I would like to add how useful experience it would
be for me, because I would like to be an artist in the
future
Finally I would like to add how useful an experience it
would be for me / how useful this experience would be
for me, because I would like to be an artist in the future
Other examples of this structure:
1. Listen, he’s not that good a teacher after all…

2. 2. He’s such an amazing writer…. You wouldn’t
believe how amazing a writer he is
If your couple has to be in the office you will automaticly
get the responsability of all this kind of problems
If your partner has to be at the office you will
automatically be responsible for all these kinds of
problems
This is the reasson why women are working from home
they not only have to make the work for their companies
but also being worried about all the problems in the
house
This is the reason why women are working from home,
they not only have to do the work for their companies
but also worry about all the problems in the household
We feel comfortably speaking with people wearing our
best clothes making up in order to people see us going
out of our house and living the life
We feel comfortable speaking with people, wearing our
best clothes, wearing make-up in order for people to see
/ so that people see us going out (of our house) and
enjoying life.
They have to deal with lack of structure of the time until
wake up to stop to work in the evening

3. They have to deal with a lack of structure in their
schedule from the moment they wake up until they stop
working in the evening
The rest of the evening is not very productive between
baths and dinner
The rest of the evening is not very productive what with
baths, checking the/your children’s homework and dinner.
When the family is at home and probably the employee
would like to be and share with them, also when
unexpecting visitors come home such as the employee's
friends, it is easy to get distracted
When the family is at home and the employee would
probably like to share some quality time with them, or
when unexpected visitors come home such as the
employee's friends, it is easy to get distracted.
New jobs have appeared that make unnecessary to move
from the own home
New jobs have appeared that make it unnecessary to
move from your own home / New jobs have appeared
that make moving from one’s own home unnecessary.
Switching from open-space offices and crowded meetings
to individual home-office happens to be a too big change
for someones

4. Switching from open-space offices and crowded meetings
to individual home-offices happens to be too big a
change for some people
My survivance experience is widely and variety
My survival experience is wide and varied
Nowadays due to the technological revolution we are a
part of, there are many works that can be done from
home
Nowadays due to the technological revolution we are a
part of, there are many jobs / tasks that can be done
from home
Nowadays is still more important the phisical apparence
than the good job you make
Nowadays your physical appearance is still more
important than the good job you do / how good a job
you do / how good at your job you are
Tutorialspoint has also a coding ground for each
language so it makes the user able to try to make an
exercise without installing an application or programme
Tutorialspoint also has a coding ground for each
language enabling the user to do an exercise without
installing an application or programme

5. Moreover, your timetable can fix to your lifestyle so you
can organize your own working life
Moreover, your timetable can fix to your lifestyle so you
can organize your own working life
On the other hand, if you work from home you can get
involved in family issues and you spend more time in
these instead of working
I'm actually pasionated by adventure and all sort of risk
activities
Consequently, I feel absolutely prepared (physically and
psichologically) to live with only basic supplies not only
for six months but also for a year
Furthermore, my passion is the Nature
I saw your incredible advertisement on Discovery
Channel yesterday and I don't want to lose the
opportunity to participate in
Thinking about what to tell you about me, I remembered
my first journey to the mountains with my parents, they
taught me everything I know about how to survive in the
wildness...

6. I can say that I find your reality extremely moving and
gripping I get hooked with your last edition
When I was younger I use to go to the forest and I
learned a lot of skills to survive in extremely conditions