1. My Birthday Present
By Sarah McDonald
LA hr:3
Me and my parents were heading into the parking lot of Buffalo
Wild Wings. As we pulled in I was ready to push the car door open
and rush into Buffalo Wild Wings. When I got in there I was
anxiously waiting for my parents to come. I was hoping that we
were able to get a table right away because the faster we got a
table the faster I could open my birthday present! The waiter
asked us if we wanted a table inside or outside. We chose to sit
outside. As we sat down I just smiled at them anxiously waiting for
them to realize what I wanted, but they just smiled back keeping
me in suspense. I have waited long enough, so i finally just said,"
Can I please just open my present!" Then my dad told me that I
would have to wait until we were done eating.The waiter came and
took our orders and came back with our food twenty minutes
later.I gobbled up some of my food and decided to save the rest for
later. While I waited for my parents to finish up, I took my present
and looked at it tyring to guess what it was. I thought it was a
phone but no way they get me one when I was turning ten!
Finally when my parents finished there meal it was
time for me to open my present! I gradually grasped the present
and started to open it up. When I was finished taking off the
wrapping paper I noticed it was a phone!!!! My eyes got wide with
surprise and I hugged my parents and thanked them probably
twenty times. I was so excited, i opened it and closed it and again
and again! This was definitely the best birthday ever!!!:)
My costume will horrify people. My hair is as gray as a tornado. My eyes are
as beady as an owls. My face is even more scary. It is as white as a ghost
on a dark and scary Halloween night. I have a scar on my face and I have

2. black under my eyes. My scar,a tethered ,scaring off all the trick-er tr echo
creep to my house to get candy. My shirt, all ripped up as if a lion came and
ripped it up. My skirt will be curtains falling down so long also like a
skyscraper. My shoes will be as black as a black cat or like the dark cloud
that stays above my house on Halloween night. I scare all the kids like a
monster in their closet! I also love books!!