Sarah, georgia, danielle and shannon feedbck letter
Initial ideas sheet milli lamptey
1. Initial Thoughts
Answer
Who I might work Rosie Anderson
with?
Park/ environmental area
Chosen area to
campaign for.
Local campaign –
how does this
place affect the
area?
Media Form 1:
Briefly outline
your campaign
ideas – name,
slogan, audience,
form etc
Media Form 2:
Briefly outline
your campaign
ideas – name,
slogan, audience,
form etc
How these 2
forms are
integrated (vital
for higher marks)
Intended target
audience
Why this
campaign suits
them.
It puts children’s safety at risk and
makes the community look
unattractive and messy.
Our campaign is to regenerate
parks and make people want to
visit.
Name: Baldock’s Community
Funding Campaign
Slogan: Making your town better
for you!
Audience: Young children and
teenagers.
Form: Poster
Our campaign is to regenerate
parks and make people want to
visit.
Name: Baldock’s Community
Funding Campaign
Slogan: Making your town better
for you!
Audience: Young children and
teenagers.
Form: Website
They are linked because they
both can contain a lot of
information and there are a lot of
different ways to present it. They
are both targeted at the younger
generation which is our target
audience.
Children and teenagers.
As we are regenerating a park we
feel that it would suit them and
mostly be in their interest because
from our research we found that
mainly children visited their local
parks often.
Explanation
Good ideas
We would like to focus on
improving the town for
children.
Our research showed that
most people didn’t like their
local parks because they
were unclean and unsafe.
We would like to do a poster
as one of our media forms
because we will be able to fit
a lot of information in to
them. You can put it
everywhere so people can
see it wherever they are.
We would like to make a
website as our second media
form because a lot of our
target audience are using
the internet and this would
attract their attention using
the right techniques.
These media forms will help
us to target our audience
because we know how to
make it interesting with
colours; font and
presentation because we are
in that age range ourselves.
They are the age group that
visit parks the most and get
the most out of it.
We want to regenerate it into
something that they would
want and enjoy.