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1. Here is myevidence of sendingthe final scripttoshortof the weekandtheirreply.
ClientinterviewswithMissMaughn
1. January 6 2020 -The shot numbersforthe shootingscriptneedtobe in the lefthand
column,andthere are a fewgrammatical mistakeswhichneedtobe corrected. Thisis
importantthatit iscorrectedas it couldcause confusionwiththe actorswhenthey are
readingthe script.It isalsoimportantthat itis changedbecause itisn’tveryprofessional to
have a script withgrammatical mistakes.
2. January13 2020- You needtoput the scene descriptionwhere itissetnexttoeach act, the
descriptionsof the charactersare doingneedtobe putto the leftof the page and notin the
centre,anda lotof the INTand EXT on midscene descriptionneedstobe removedasit
doesn’tneedtobe there.itisimportanttohave the textpositioningrightbecause itneeds to
be in a professionalformat.Itisalsoimportantthatthe INTand EXT is correct as itcould
cause more confusionduringproduction.
AfterreceivingthisfeedbackImade the correct changesto myscript and shootingscriptandsentit
off to short of the week- showninthe imagesabove.