This document summarizes feedback on the first draft of a double page magazine spread. Reviewers liked the color scheme and how arrows moved through the pages, finding it captivating. However, they thought the page looked slightly empty and could be more complete. While the image and font choices made it look like a hip hop magazine, the content was deemed more suitable for an older audience of 18-21 year olds. Page numbers were a nice authentic touch. Reviewers suggested adding something else to fill out the page.

1. Double Page Spread – Audience Feedback First/Second Draft.
This is technically
the firstdraftfor
my double page
spread. They said
that they liked the
colour scheme and
the way in which
the arrows move
through the page
they said it is
captivating and it
finally looks like a
real magazine. They
thought that the
page still looks slightly empty and that there should be something else to make
the page look and feel complete. The use of the image makes it look like a hip
hop magazinehowever her dress code subverts slightly. They thoughtthat in
most magazines they have the quotes in italics however they thought that by
keeping the fontthe way it is it makes it look more like a hip hop/R&B
magazine. The colour scheme is more suited for the target audience of
between the gages of 15-18 however thecontent is what makes it more
suitable for those who are 18-21. Thestory its self is a typical story that most
artists have which conforms to the lifestyle of an artist. The picture I have used
was liked because it looks like she looking into the story which is almost like
looking into her past. They liked the fact that there was page numbers at the
sides of the magazine.