1. 0:09 Darlin', darlin', doesn't have a problem
0:14 Lyin' to herself 'cause her liquor's top shelf
0:19 It's alarmin', honestly, how charming she can be
0:24 Fooling everyone, tellin' 'em she's having fun
From 0:09-0:24 its going to come in showing her
bad part of her life. Her other life which is filled
with depression, drugs alcohol, misery etc.
At the beginning of this paragraph I will also film a
clapper board.
2. 0:28 She says, "You don't wanna be like me
0:31 Don't wanna see all the things I've seen
0:33 I'm dyin', I'm dyin'“
0:28-0:31 this part she’s speaking directly to the
audience on video, so the audience know that this
is what she wants us to see. Looking normal at this
point.
0:33 Flashback to where she is slitting her wrists
but it is not a video
3. 0:38 She says, "You don't wanna get this way
0:41 Famous and dumb at an early age
0:43 Lyin', I'm lyin'“
0:38 this part she’s speaking directly to the
audience on video, so the audience know that this
is what she wants us to see. Looking normal at this
point.
0:43. At lyin’, im lyin’ she going to be crying next to
the toilet with smudged mascara and makeup.
4. 0:48 The boys, the girls, they all like Carmen
0:52 She gives them butterflies, bats her cartoon
eyes
0:57 She laughs like God, her mind's like a diamond
1:02 Audio tune lies, she's still shining
1:08 Like lightning, whoa, like lightning
The chorus is going to have her singing in the
bathroom with smudged mascara to the camera
with different angles. Each chorus will be different
shots at different times. In-between every other
line there will also show her being happy living a
‘normal’ life to everyone else. Helping show
contrast between the two lives she lives in.
5. 1:17 Carmen, Carmen, stayin' up till mornin'
1:21 Only seventeen but she walks the streets so
mean
1:26 It's alarmin', truly, how disarmin' you can be
1:31 Eatin' soft ice cream, Coney Island queen
Between 1:17-1:26 its going to show her getting
ready to go out and walk the streets at night
illustrating the lyrics of the song. At 1:26 to the
end of the 1:31 line it will show her in her garden
being happy with an ice-cream. Like the chorus
to contrast between her 2 lives.
6. 1:36 She says, "You don't wanna be like me
1:38 Lookin' for fun, gettin' high for free
1:41 I'm dyin', I'm dyin'“
1:36 this part she’s speaking directly to the
audience on video, so the audience know that this
is what she wants us to see. Looking normal at this
point.
1:38 where it goes back to another flashback of her
doing m-kat.
7. 1:45 She says, "You don't wanna get this way
1:48 Streetwalk at night, and a star by day
1:50 It's tirin', tirin''‘
1:45 this part she’s speaking directly to the
audience on video, so the audience know that this
is what she wants us to see. Looking normal at this
point.
1:50 it will show her downing a glass of vodka then
on the second ‘tirin’ the audience will see her
passed out on the bed.
8. 1:55 The boys, the girls, they all like Carmen
2:00 She gives them butterflies, bats her cartoon
eyes
2:05 She laughs like God, her mind's like a diamond
2:10 Audio tune lies, she's still shining
2:15 Like lightning, whoa, like lightning
The chorus is going to have her singing in the
bathroom with smudged mascara to the camera
with different angles. Each chorus will be different
shots at different times. In-between every other
line there will also show her being happy living a
‘normal’ life to everyone else. Helping show
contrast between the two lives she lives in.
9. 2:24 Baby's all dressed up with nowhere to go
2:29 That's the little story of the girl you know
2:33 Relyin' on the kindness of strangers
2:38 Tyin' cherry knots, smilin', doin' party favors
2:44 Put your red dress on, put your lipstick on
2:48 Sing your song, song, now, the camera's on
2:53 And you're alive again
In this paragraph we will see her getting ready to go out
doing her makeup, hair, getting changed etc. At the end in
the line 2:53 we will see her forcing a smile making it clear
to us that in the happy scenes she's putting it on and she's
not actually the happy girl everyone thinks she is.
10. 2:58 Mon amour, je sais que tu m'aimes aussi
3:02 Tu as besoin de moi
3:05 Tu as besoin de moi dans ta vie
3:09 Tu ne peux vivre sans moi
3:12 Et je mourrai sans toi
3:14 Je tuerais pour to
2:58- 3:14 She is singing into the camera directly to
the audience again speaking this french
monologue. It will have different angles again.
11. 3:16 The boys, the girls, they all like Carmen
3:21 She gives them butterflies, bats her cartoon
eyes
3:26 She laughs like God, her mind's like a diamond
3:31 Audio tune lies, she's still shining
3:36 Like lightning, whoa, like lightning
3:46 Like lightning, whoa, like lightning
The chorus is going to have her singing in the
bathroom with smudged mascara to the camera
with different angles. Each chorus will be different
shots at different times. In-between every other
line there will also show her being happy living a
‘normal’ life to everyone else. Helping show
contrast between the two lives she lives in.
12. 3:55 Darling, darlin', doesn't have a problem
4:00 Lyin' to herself 'cause her liquour's top shelf
3:55- 4:00 we are brought back to the beginning
scenes of her doing the drugs and it shows a close
up on her passed out then a long shot from the
outside of the bathroom, again showing her passed
out.