1 ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY FOR SEDENTARY LIFESTYLES THESE ARE THE INSTRUCTORS REMARKS AFTER GRADING AND GIVING ME A ZERO/100. PLEASE CORRECT THIS DOCUMENT FOR ME. THANKS. I HAVE ALSO ATTACHED A Turnitin Report in pdf format. Hi, Jude. Your Turnitin report showed that 74% of your draft matches sources that were not cited properly. Please review the plagiarism tutorial in the syllabus, and review the APA materials on how to cite sources. Paraphrase your sources whenever possible; this shows you understand the material and can restate it in your own words. This also enables you to claim ownership of the language while still giving credit for the ideas. When you use source material verbatim, make sure to place it in quotation marks. Avoid copying and pasting large chunks of text. Even if you include proper citations, your essay will lack originality. Please review the attached Turnitin report so you can see which sections need attention. I will review your draft and update your score once you've rewritten it in your own words and cited sources properly. Please note the late policy in the syllabus. Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks. Annotated Bibliography for Sedentary Lifestyles Jude Kum DeVry University Sedentary lifestyle is predominant in our everyday life be it in workplace, school, social or homes and the fact is we have got accustomed to sitting down and doing many things forgetting the impact this is causing to our health. People fail to realize how valuable exercise is in their life and especially in improving their health and well-being. Sitting down on the computer with all focused attention and forgetting that we need to get up and even eat cause problems to many people. Guedes, N.G., Lopes, M.V., Leite de Araujo, T. Moreira, R.P. and Martins, L.C. G. (2010). Predictive Factors of the Nursing Diagnosis Sedentary Lifestyle in People with High Blood Pressure. Public Health Nursing. Vol. 28 No. 2, p. 193-200. Wiley Periodicals, Inc. The research question for the study conducted by Guesdes, et al (2010) is based on the following: 1.what is the result of the defining characteristics and related factors of sedentary lifestyle diagnosis in patients with high blood pressure? 2. What are the predictive value and possible predictors of the nursing diagnosis sedentary lifestyle in patients with high blood pressure? The study looked at the validation of diagnostic groupings of the population being studied including aspects of their clinical situations. The study looked at diagnosis resulting from insufficient physical activity, intolerance of activity, fatigue, impaired physical mobility, self-care deficit. My assessment: Using this article, I will bring out the important indicators and useful predictors for identification of sedentary lifestyle; demonstrated the benefits of physical fitness, verbalized preferences for activities that are to accomplish real training or exercises. I will point out appr.

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ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY FOR SEDENTARY
LIFESTYLES
THESE ARE THE INSTRUCTORS REMARKS AFTER
GRADING AND GIVING ME A ZERO/100. PLEASE
CORRECT THIS DOCUMENT FOR ME. THANKS.
I HAVE ALSO ATTACHED A Turnitin Report in pdf format.
Hi, Jude. Your Turnitin report showed that 74% of your draft
matches sources that were not cited properly. Please review the
plagiarism tutorial in the syllabus, and review the APA
materials on how to cite sources. Paraphrase your sources
whenever possible; this shows you understand the material and
can restate it in your own words. This also enables you to claim
ownership of the language while still giving credit for the ideas.
When you use source material verbatim, make sure to place it in
quotation marks. Avoid copying and pasting large chunks of
text. Even if you include proper citations, your essay will lack
originality. Please review the attached Turnitin report so you
can see which sections need attention. I will review your draft
and update your score once you've rewritten it in your own
words and cited sources properly. Please note the late policy in
the syllabus. Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks.

2. Annotated Bibliography for Sedentary Lifestyles
Jude Kum
DeVry University
Sedentary lifestyle is predominant in our everyday life be it in
workplace, school, social or homes and the fact is we have got
accustomed to sitting down and doing many things forgetting
the impact this is causing to our health. People fail to realize
how valuable exercise is in their life and especially in
improving their health and well-being. Sitting down on the
computer with all focused attention and forgetting that we need
to get up and even eat cause problems to many people.
Guedes, N.G., Lopes, M.V., Leite de Araujo, T. Moreira, R.P.
and Martins, L.C. G. (2010). Predictive Factors of the Nursing
Diagnosis Sedentary Lifestyle in People with High Blood
Pressure. Public Health Nursing. Vol. 28 No. 2, p. 193-200.

3. Wiley Periodicals, Inc.
The research question for the study conducted by Guesdes, et al
(2010) is based on the following: 1.what is the result of the
defining characteristics and related factors of sedentary lifestyle
diagnosis in patients with high blood pressure? 2. What are the
predictive value and possible predictors of the nursing diagnosis
sedentary lifestyle in patients with high blood pressure? The
study looked at the validation of diagnostic groupings of the
population being studied including aspects of their clinical
situations. The study looked at diagnosis resulting from
insufficient physical activity, intolerance of activity, fatigue,
impaired physical mobility, self-care deficit.
My assessment: Using this article, I will bring out the important
indicators and useful predictors for identification of sedentary
lifestyle; demonstrated the benefits of physical fitness,
verbalized preferences for activities that are to accomplish real
training or exercises. I will point out appropriate measures
needed to be undertaken by individuals to reverse situations
caused by sedentary lifestyle ultimately leading to causes of
health problems.
Villagran Pérez, S., Novalbos-Ruiz, J., Rodríguez-Martín, A.,
Martínez-Nieto, J., & Lechuga-Sancho, A. (2013). Implications
of family socioeconomic level on risk behaviors in child-youth
obesity. Nutricion Hospitalaria, 28(6), 1951-1960.
doi:10.3305/nutr hosp.v28in06.6848
This study gathers together dietary behavior, physical activity
and sedentary lifestyle in relation to the family socioeconomic
status in a sample of Spanish children. It also uses a population-
based cross-sectional study of 3-16 years children, derived
using a single "family socioeconomic level" indicator (FSEL)
from the level of studies, professional category and work
situation of both parents. It discusses how families with higher

4. FSEL quartile were related to healthy dietary habits such as
having breakfast, 5 meals per day and less snacking. The FSEL
was related also to the consumption of whole grains, dairy
products and fruits, but not to vegetables, meat or fish.
According to this article, the greatest risk of excess weight was
found in girls >6 years old, with a low FSEL, sedentary habits,
that snack frequently and eat few proteins.
My assessment: I will use this in the body of my essay because
family socioeconomic status seems to determine the level of
physical activity, sedentary lifestyle and dietary behavior. The
elaboration of a simple socioeconomic indicator may be useful
to study factors involved in child obesity.
Bunker, J. (2014). Hypertension: diagnosis, assessment and
management. Nursing Standard, 28(42), 50-59.
This article reviews the management of primary hypertension in
adults, with reference to the National Institute for Health and
Care Excellence guidelines. Hypertension is a serious and
common condition, the prevalence of which is set to rise given
the increase in the ageing population, sedentarylifestyles and
obesity. Diagnosis using clinic, ambulatory and home blood
pressure (BP) monitoring, risk factors, BP targets, lifestyle
advice, drug treatment and patient education are also discussed.
My assessment: I will use this information because it ties up
with my first article with discusses the effect of sedentary
lifestyles on hypertension.
Almeida, A., Joao, D., Rolao, A., Monteiro-Grillo, I., Camilo,
M., & Ravasco, P. (2013). Excessive adiposity and sedentary
lifestyles are prevalent in cancer patients; a pilot study.
Nutricion Hospitalaria, 28(5), 1468-1474.
doi:10.3305/nh.2013.28.5.6690
This article discusses how cancer etiology is multifactorial and
goes on to further show how risk factors comprise obesity,
central adiposity, physical inactivity and excessive/ deficient

5. intake of foods and/or nutrients with procarcinogenic/
protective effects. The authors aim to analyze the pattern of
nutritional status, food intake and physical activity in a cohort
of cancer patients. This study was conducted in 64 outpatients
referred for Radiotherapy. Central obesity, which indicates
moderate/high cardio-metabolic risk, was found in 78% of
patients. Food frequency analysis showed a poor intake in
vegetables and a high intake in meat and carbohydrates.
Physical inactivity was prevalent.
My assessment: Since this article is tied with sedentary
lifestyles, and shows a high prevalence of overweight/obesity,
excessive fat mass and central obesity, and an inadequate diet,
poor in protective foods and excessive in deleterious ones.
Thus, these patients exhibit a high risk pattern for cancer
development and for a poorer prognosis. The implementation of
measures to promote balanced and protective diets and to
encourage physical activity practice is urgently needed.
Kyröläinen, H., Santtila, M., Nindl, B., & Vasankari, T. (2010).
Physical fitness profiles of young men associations between
physical fitness, obesity and health. Sports Medicine, 40(11),
907-920. doi:10.2165/11536570-000000000-00000
These authors discusses physical activity and its effects on
obesity and health, showing that regular physical activity
combined with improved physical fitness reduces the risk of
obesity and several metabolic problems (e.g. diabetes mellitus,
metabolic syndrome, heart disease) and also improves overall
health. It also goes on to reveal how there is only limited
scientific information available concerning the changes in the
physical fitness profiles of youth. It is obvious that only slight
changes observed in endurance-type physical activity can also
be observed in aerobic capacity. Today and in the future, a
major public health concern for teenage and young adults is the
combination of increasing body fatness together with decreasing
physical fitness. In order to evaluate overall fitness level, it is

6. particularly essential to examine both aerobic and
neuromuscular fitness. Therefore, in clinical practice work and
health behavior education, a person's physical fitness should be
measured more frequently with various measures. Furthermore,
population-based surveys should be combined with regular
measurement of physical fitness to study sedentarylifestyles,
particularly in young people.
My assessment: This article presents a review of current
physical fitness profiles of male children, adolescents and
young adults, which hopefully initiates further studies in this
relevant scientific field. In addition, the importance of physical
fitness level is evaluated in relation to obesity and health.
Continued efforts to foster improved physical fitness and
healthy lifestylesshould be encouraged to combat these trends.
Such efforts should include frequent and objective assessment
of physical fitness rather than solely relying on subjective
assessment of physical activity.
Reiser, L., & Schlenk, E. (2009). Clinical use of physical
activity measures. Journal Of The American Academy Of Nurse
Practitioners, 21(2), 87-94. doi:10.1111/j.1745-
7599.2008.00389.x
According to this article, physical activity is a lifestyle factor
that is a key focus in chronic disease-related research,
prevention, and interventions. Healthy People 2010 set goals of
decreasing the prevalence of preventable diseases by
encouraging healthier lifestyle patterns. Shifts toward
more sedentary lifestyles have resulted in increases in life-
limiting disease states, including obesity, diabetes, heart
disease, cancer, and osteoporosis. Physical activity
measurements have been used widely in research studies but are
less commonly used in primary care. Measuring individuals'

7. physical activity levels as part of the health assessment will
enhance the provider's ability to engage in health promotion and
suggest health protection interventions.
My assessment: The strengths, weaknesses, and potential
applications to practice of physical activity measures are
summarized in an effort to familiarize nurse practitioners (NPs)
with commonly used tools and encourage integration of physical
activity assessment into their current practice. I will use this
article in the body of my paper to explain how NPs are in an
ideal position to promote health by encouraging appropriate
amounts of physical activity. Screening, health promotion, and
disease prevention are part of the core competencies of NP
practice established by the National Organization of Nurse
Practitioner Faculties. Increased knowledge of physical activity
measures will enhance the NP's ability to evaluate relevant
physical activity research for use in evidence-based practice.
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Almeida, Ana Isabel; João, Dina Raquel; Rolão,
Andreia; Monteiro-Grillo, Isabel; Camilo, Maria
and Ravasco, Paulo. "Excessive adiposity and
sedentary lifestyles are prevalent in cancer
patients; a pilot study", Nutricion Hospitalaria,
2013.
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Villagran Pérez, Sergio; Novalbos-Ruiz, José
Pedro; Rodríguez-Martín, Amelia; Martínez-
Nieto, José Manuel and Lechuga-Sancho,
Alfonso María. "Implications of family
socioeconomic level on risk behaviors in child-
youth obesity", Nutricion Hospitalaria, 2013.
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