The document provides feedback on a first draft of a film pitch. People who reviewed the draft provided "WWW" and "EBI" feedback, which stands for "What went well" and "Even better if" to give both positive comments and suggestions for improvement. The feedback aimed to highlight strengths while also offering constructive criticism to strengthen areas for potential growth.

1. Feedback on first draft
of my Film Pitch
Fatima Kadhem

2. The website I used:
People who gave feedback for my first draft
gave WWW and EBI –which mean ‘What
went well’ and ‘Even better if’.
-Giving positive comments but also things I
could improve on.