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1. Feedback Log
13/12 - Meeting 1:
 Change layout on one piece of dialogue, unnecessary double spacing
 Change ‘is’ to ‘looks’ for better instruction
 Maybe explain piece of actors stage directions more to ‘stops what she is doing’ or
‘Sam stops what she is doing and turns a shade of pale
 Change ‘today’ to ‘it’s today’ to be more clear.
 Explain pets return in more detail to be clearer and convey ideas more.
17/12/ - Meeting 2:
 Change the word ‘pet’ to an animal to make it easier to read and more personable.