Employers today are looking to hire individuals who are ambitious, problem-solvers, go-getters, leaders, and team players. They want professionals who take initiative and are not afraid to get out of their comfort zone to get the job done. Competition, in the workplace is real and only high achieving employees will qualify for the next promotion. Corporations are thinking about the future and they are looking for educated, experienced, and mature individuals who think strategically to innovate and create the new products and services for the new generation of consumers.
Therefore, I have to ask you to consider what type of employee are you? How do you see yourself? How would your peers and/or Supervisor describe you as a person, an employee, and a co-worker? What are you doing today to qualify for the next career advancement opportunity or the next business venture? What steps are you taking today to achieve your goals tomorrow? Are you the ideal candidate or the best entrepreneur? If yes, why?
ENC1101 Milestone 3
Based on what you learned in Module 2, construct the title for your essay. Answer each question by filling in all of the required spaces below.
What is the essay’s subject?
Write it in the box below.
What are you arguing about the essay’s subject? Answer this question in the box below.
How difficult it was to communicate with far away relatives.
Comparing the differences of sending postal mail that would take weeks, to now having Facebook which sending and receiving messages are quicker.
Put the 2 boxes above together to create a coherent title. Write your title in the space below:
Letters of Joy Arrive Sooner in the Modern World.
How does the title represent your paper’s purpose and thesis? Answer this question in the space below:
The title represents how now in the modern world you can share special moments quicker than in previous eras. For example, you no longer need to wait for months to receive news or even pictures from faraway relatives. Our modern technology like Facebook allows us to instantly share and view these special moments.
Remember to save your attachment as follows and upload it to the appropriate dropbox in D2L:
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ENC1101 Milestone 2
For your second essay milestone, you will construct your essay’s audience hook (about 5 sentences) and thesis statement (the last sentence of your introduction that contains 3 parts: the paper’s subject, the paper’s main argument about its subject, and 2 supporting points). Your thesis should be only 1 sentence in length. Fill in the required boxes below.
Audience Hook (about 5 fully developed sentences). Write your sentences in this box:
Dear younger me, remember how exciting it was to receive letters from far away relatives? Or receiving that one letter from your relatives in Texas saying that your cousin was expecting their first baby. And, how long those letters took back and forth. Or after he was born how long it took.
Employers today are looking to hire individuals who are ambitious,.docx
1. Employers today are looking to hire individuals who are
ambitious, problem-solvers, go-getters, leaders, and team
players. They want professionals who take initiative and are not
afraid to get out of their comfort zone to get the job
done. Competition, in the workplace is real and only high
achieving employees will qualify for the next promotion.
Corporations are thinking about the future and they are looking
for educated, experienced, and mature individuals who think
strategically to innovate and create the new products and
services for the new generation of consumers.
Therefore, I have to ask you to consider what type of employee
are you? How do you see yourself? How would your peers
and/or Supervisor describe you as a person, an employee, and a
co-worker? What are you doing today to qualify for the next
career advancement opportunity or the next business venture?
What steps are you taking today to achieve your goals
tomorrow? Are you the ideal candidate or the best entrepreneur?
If yes, why?
ENC1101 Milestone 3
Based on what you learned in Module 2, construct the title for
your essay. Answer each question by filling in all of the
required spaces below.
What is the essay’s subject?
Write it in the box below.
What are you arguing about the essay’s subject? Answer this
question in the box below.
How difficult it was to communicate with far away relatives.
Comparing the differences of sending postal mail that would
take weeks, to now having Facebook which sending and
2. receiving messages are quicker.
Put the 2 boxes above together to create a coherent title. Write
your title in the space below:
Letters of Joy Arrive Sooner in the Modern World.
How does the title represent your paper’s purpose and thesis?
Answer this question in the space below:
The title represents how now in the modern world you can share
special moments quicker than in previous eras. For example,
you no longer need to wait for months to receive news or even
pictures from faraway relatives. Our modern technology like
Facebook allows us to instantly share and view these special
moments.
Remember to save your attachment as follows and upload it to
the appropriate dropbox in D2L:
First Name-Last Name-E1-M3
ENC1101 Milestone 2
For your second essay milestone, you will construct your
essay’s audience hook (about 5 sentences) and thesis statement
(the last sentence of your introduction that contains 3 parts: the
paper’s subject, the paper’s main argument about its subject,
and 2 supporting points). Your thesis should be only 1 sentence
in length. Fill in the required boxes below.
Audience Hook (about 5 fully developed sentences). Write your
3. sentences in this box:
Dear younger me, remember how exciting it was to receive
letters from far away relatives? Or receiving that one letter from
your relatives in Texas saying that your cousin was expecting
their first baby. And, how long those letters took back and
forth. Or after he was born how long it took to meet him? Well,
technology has made changes and it for the better. There is a
platform called Facebook, instead of waiting for weeks for a
response now it only takes seconds. But wait there is more, this
platform even has picture capabilities. Being able to see your
family more often is not a dilemma anymore. The kids can know
whom their uncle is without having to wait for months to meet.
Thesis (1 sentence comprised of 3 elements:
· the paper’s subject
· the paper’s main argument about its subject
· 2 supporting points)
Write your thesis statement in this box:
All in all, Facebook has made a huge impact in our life’s it has
giving us the ability to communicate like never before and share
special moments that before would take an eternity now we can
post pictures that you can see instantly, and we can send instant
messages even miles away, no need to wait for the mail or a
visit.
4. Remember to save your attachment as follows and upload it to
the appropriate dropbox in D2L:
First Name-Last Name-E1-M2
ENC1101 Milestone 4
Taking into consideration the feedback you received on your
introduction milestone, construct the next significant piece of
your paper, the first body paragraph. Make sure you use the four
elements noted in Module 3 (topic sentence [based on the
thesis], claim, proof of claim [evidence], example).
Write your thesis statement in the space below. Remember, your
thesis should be 1 sentence comprised of 3 elements: the
paper’s subject, the paper’s main argument about its subject,
and 2 supporting points.
All in all, Facebook has made a huge impact in our life’s it has
giving us the ability to communicate like never before and share
special moments that before would take an eternity now we can
post pictures that you can see instantly, and we can send instant
messages even miles away, no need to wait for the mail or a
visit.
Topic Sentence
(Write 1 topic sentence in the column to the right.)
5. The Facebook platform has giving families the ability to
communicate endlessly with just one click.
Claim
(Write your claim in the column to the right.)
Having Facebook has been a blessing to most families. Being
able to communicate with each other, instead of waiting for
weeks for the mail to arrive.
Evidence
(Write your evidence in the column to the right.)
In the 1990’s The United States Postal Service used Amtrak to
carry mail (16). Depending in the state that you lived in, it
would be the time that you needed to wait to hear from friends
and family.
In February 2004, in Cambridge, MA a platform called The
Facebook was launched (“A brief history of Facebook”).
Facebook crew rapidly and started joining family in ways that
6. we wouldn’t imagine.
Example
(Provide your example in the column to the right.)
Communicating with faraway relatives was exhausting. Looking
back at June 2003. We received a letter from an uncle that lived
in Texas. The letter said, “Dear Raul, I’m happy to announce
that my wife and I are expecting a new born child. Back then all
of our communications would be through the United States
Postal Service. After a couple of months went by we received
another postal letter saying that my cousin was born. All of this
communication would take weeks sometime months. However,
there is a new platform that has great new features to
communicate at an easier and faster pace.
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