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1. THE PRESSURES OF BEING A STUDENT
INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH:
Since people are in their childhood, it is an obligation to start the student’s life,
which contributes to achieve our aims, as children and young people. Because in this long
called study period we have several tasks to develop. Some of these tasks are looking for
help to discover our vocation, and others motivate us to improve our critical thinking.
Furthermore, we have to follow a line of behavior, which is considered the correct one. It
implies to be aware of academic issues, to be an active student as well as a responsible
person. However, is it having good results in the current society that we have created?
Consequently, the pressures of being a student take part of our lives in terms of obligations
we must meet, decisions we have to make and behavior we need to follow, according to the
today society.
TS1:
As an initial point, academic obligations are a huge pressure that students have to meet in
order to cope with them.
TS2:
Besides, since childhood we realize that it is important to make decisions, mainly at school.
TS3:
Finally, beginning our ‘student life’ is a good stimulus to behave properly.