The document discusses different writing techniques including question/quotation, onomatopoeia, alliteration, simile/metaphor, hyperbole/exaggeration, and personification. It provides an example story about a person whose best friend fooled them, and rewrites the story using each of the techniques. The rewritten story includes the friend making a crashing sound in the kitchen, feeling like a "broken lover" when learning the truth, exaggerating how a broken bowl felt like losing part of their life, and personifying the broken pieces as calling out for help.
3. My Best Friend
My best friend fooled me one
day and I was shocked!
( Plain writing)
Do you know that your best
friends can sometimes fool
you? Well, yes! My best friend
fooled me. (Using Question)
5. One day, he was making breakfast
and suddenly a loud sound came from
kitchen. I asked him what it was. He
said, it was from the next door.
(Plain writing)
One day, he was making breakfast
and suddenly “Crush”, a loud sound
came from kitchen. I asked him what
it was. “It is from next door”, my
friend said.
( Sound/ expression)
7. After some days, I went to empty my
dustbin. I felt something heavy.
Curiously I opened the dustbin and
saw my precious bowl into pieces!
( Plain writing)
After some days, I went to empty my
dirty dustbin. I felt something heavy.
Curiously I opened the dustbin. “Oh
No!” I saw my precious bowl broken
into pieces!
( Alliteration)
9. It was confirmed that my friend had
dropped that. He had not even told me
that day. I would have excused him.
Now I felt so sad. He had fooled me.
(Plain writing)
It was confirmed that my friend had
dropped that. He had not even told me
that day. I would have excused him.
Now I felt like a broken lover. It was
my mother’s gift. He had fooled me
that day! ( Simile)
11. I felt very sad. It was a precious gift
on my 21st birthday. Even worse than
that my best friend had fooled me!
( Plain writing)
I felt as if I have lost a part of my life
because it was a precious gift on my
21st birthday. Even worse than that
my best friend had fooled me!
(hyperbole or exaggeration)
13. I lost one precious gift of my beloved
mother. I can’t forget that day.
( Plain writing)
It seemed, those broken pieces were
calling me for help. I can’t forget the
day my best friend fooled me.
(Personification)
14. My Best Friend PLAIN WRITING
My best friend fooled me one day and I was shocked! One day, he was making
breakfast and suddenly a loud sound came from kitchen. I asked him what it was. He
said, it was from the next door. After some days, I went to empty my dustbin. I felt
something heavy. Curiously I opened the dustbin and saw my precious bowl into
pieces! It was confirmed that my friend had dropped that. He had not even told me that
day. I would have excused him. Now I felt so sad. He had fooled me. I felt very sad. It
was a precious gift on my 21st birthday. Even worse than that my best friend had fooled
me! I lost one precious gift of my beloved mother. I can’t forget that day.
My Best Friend WITH WRITER”S CRAFT
Do you know that your best friends can sometimes fool you? Well, yes! My best friend
fooled me. One day, he was making breakfast and suddenly “Crush”, a loud sound
came from kitchen. I asked him what it was. “It is from next door”, my friend said. After
some days, I went to empty my dirty dustbin. I felt something heavy. Curiously I opened
the dustbin. “Oh No!” I saw my precious bowl broken into pieces! It was confirmed that
my friend had dropped that. He had not even told me that day. I would have excused
him. Now I felt like a broken lover. It was my mother’s gift. He had fooled me that day! I
felt as if I have lost a part of my life because it was a precious gift on my 21st birthday.
Even worse than that my best friend had fooled me! It seemed, those broken pieces
were calling me for help. I can’t forget the day my best friend fooled me.