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Please have your HW (pgs. 102-103, practice B+C) ready to submit.


   Writing 2
   IECP
   Fall 2012
   Nikki Mattson
Agenda
•   Idiom
•   Sentence combining
•   IELTS rubrics and examples
•   Blog commenting etiquette
•   Process paragraph writing
Practicing Compound and Complex Sentences


• Pg. 103 Try It Out! On a separate piece of
  paper. I will collect one paper from each
  student, but you may discuss the answers with
  one other student if you like.

• GOAL: Combine the sentences into one
  sentence. There is more than one way to do
  this.
IELTS Rubrics and Examples
•   1) review the rubric
•   2) What does “task response” mean? How can you get a high score
    in this category?
•   3) What does “coherence and cohesion” mean? ? How can you get
    a high score in this category?
•   4) What does “lexical resource” mean? ? How can you get a high
    score in this category?
•   5) What does “grammatical range and accuracy” mean? Hoe can
    you get a high score in this category?
IELTS samples
• Read each sample and discuss which score you
  think each example should receive and why.
• Make a list of five descriptors from the rubric that
  you think describe each example. (example: 1)
  addresses all parts of the task, 2) sequences
  information logically….
Blog Etiquette
• Read the article out loud with a partner.
  (take turns reading the paragraphs)
• Read Nikki’s introduction and write 3
  “good etiquette” comments and 3 “poor
  etiquette” comments
Process Paragraph Writing
• 125 words minimum (-1 point for ever 10 words
  below)

Humor
• how to drive a teacher crazy
• how to lose ten pounds in two days
• how to kill a houseplant
• how to not make any American friends

Serious
• how to be a successful student at the IECP
• how to have the best visit when visiting your native country
• how to learn about American culture
• how to make American friends
Computer Labs
• Polluck 201 (131 computers)
• Thomas 424 (11 computers)
• Boucke 103 (37 computers)
HW
• HW: comment on five descriptive
  paragraphs, post your process paragraph
  (before the next class), print your process
  paragraph and bring it to class

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D ay 14

  • 1. Please have your HW (pgs. 102-103, practice B+C) ready to submit. Writing 2 IECP Fall 2012 Nikki Mattson
  • 2. Agenda • Idiom • Sentence combining • IELTS rubrics and examples • Blog commenting etiquette • Process paragraph writing
  • 3.
  • 4. Practicing Compound and Complex Sentences • Pg. 103 Try It Out! On a separate piece of paper. I will collect one paper from each student, but you may discuss the answers with one other student if you like. • GOAL: Combine the sentences into one sentence. There is more than one way to do this.
  • 5. IELTS Rubrics and Examples • 1) review the rubric • 2) What does “task response” mean? How can you get a high score in this category? • 3) What does “coherence and cohesion” mean? ? How can you get a high score in this category? • 4) What does “lexical resource” mean? ? How can you get a high score in this category? • 5) What does “grammatical range and accuracy” mean? Hoe can you get a high score in this category?
  • 6. IELTS samples • Read each sample and discuss which score you think each example should receive and why. • Make a list of five descriptors from the rubric that you think describe each example. (example: 1) addresses all parts of the task, 2) sequences information logically….
  • 7. Blog Etiquette • Read the article out loud with a partner. (take turns reading the paragraphs) • Read Nikki’s introduction and write 3 “good etiquette” comments and 3 “poor etiquette” comments
  • 8. Process Paragraph Writing • 125 words minimum (-1 point for ever 10 words below) Humor • how to drive a teacher crazy • how to lose ten pounds in two days • how to kill a houseplant • how to not make any American friends Serious • how to be a successful student at the IECP • how to have the best visit when visiting your native country • how to learn about American culture • how to make American friends
  • 9. Computer Labs • Polluck 201 (131 computers) • Thomas 424 (11 computers) • Boucke 103 (37 computers)
  • 10. HW • HW: comment on five descriptive paragraphs, post your process paragraph (before the next class), print your process paragraph and bring it to class