Unit 3 Emotional Intelligence and Spiritual Intelligence.pdf
The script for our film noir opening sequence.
1. Script
Written By: Travis Dockerty, James Vickers, Ben Scandrett and Demi Eykyn.
2. EXT- Bank
Scene 1
Camera angle at floor. Convict spits on floor then stomps on it (ECU) of shoe.
(MCU) of man. Turns away back faces the camera.
Scene 2
(ELS) of mysterious man about to cross the street, on the other side of the street
the convict looks up recognises this man.
CONVICT
Hey you. Jimmy.
Scene 3
Bus drives past and Jimmy disappears. Convict runs over frantically searching for
Jimmy puts head in hands and screams.
Scene 4 - INT
(MCU-MLS) Of convict walking, convict walks down corridor (LS). (POV) Walking
through door and sitting down on chair.
(Stick to 180 degree rule)
PAROLE OFFICER
3. Good evening Jake
Taking his feet off the desk, knocking several empty bottles over.
CONVICT
Alright
PAROLE OFFICER
How you doing?
CONVICT
Fine
PAROLE OFFICER
How you finding life on the outside?
CONVICT
Fine
PAROLE OFFICER
How was your day?
CONVICT
Saw Jimmy
PAROLE OFFICER
Who’s Jimmy?
Convict pulls out shisha pen offers Parole Officer a puff he declines. He takes a
deep puff and blows smoke into camera.
Scene 4 – Flashback – EXT - light jazz music playing in the background
Smoke slowly rolling faint in back ground. Police sirens start blasting.
Background action of two men dressed in black balaclavas one carrying a bag and
shot gun one just running. Both men chuck off balaclavas and carry on running men
can know be seen as convict and Jimmy (Convict with bag and shotgun). Run past
camera and approach low wall. Convict carrying bag throws it over and gives Jimmy
a leg up on the wall.
(CU) on Convict face
JIMMY
4. Give us the gun!
CONVICT
Hurry [giving him the gun]
Jimmy jumps down the other side and Convict jumps over to see Jimmy holding gun
aimed at him and holding bag of money. (Low shot on the floor)
CONVICT
What the fuck Jimmy?
JIMMY
Just stay here and I won’t shoot.
CONVICT
Alright calm down.
Convict jumps for gun but Jimmy sees it about to happen stands back and Convict
falls on floor.
JIMMY
You should have listened
Jimmy hits Convict on the head with stock of gun knocking him out. Jimmy runs off,
a few seconds later and a cop arrest Convict. (End of flashback)
Scene 5 - INT
Parole 0fficer buzzing on telecom to assistant (180 degree rule)
Parole officer
Whisky, 2 glasses
Parole Officer (MCU) of him pulling out draw, (CU) of gun in draw
Femme Fatale comes in putting her wedding ring on as she leans against the door
waiting to come in. Hands them whiskey being provocative to convict then leaves.
Parole Officer looks at his watch.
PAROLE OFFICER
The sessions over
5. Femme Fatale walks in grabs convict by the shirt pulls him out of the door into a
closet door slams (CU) (sexual noises)
Scene 6
Parole Officer kicks the door open of his office then kicks over his chair and
grabs the gun from his draw and loads it. (MCU)