West Thames College

1. Mansour Ahaidi
Unit 63 Script writing for moving image faction
Jealousy, redemption, conflict, forgiveness Ideology
Mark was severing a 6 years sentence. He had previous confection GBH
and demonic valance.
Mark was in love with someone called Jane for the past 10 years as a childhood
they were very close. Doing college together, doing activities together. When
they got older Jane felt in love with someone else called David Jones.
One day Mark wanted to purpose to Jane. Mark decided to take Jane out to
restaurant and he purposed to her by showing the diamond crystal ring for
marriage however Jane did not accept it as Jane replied to Mark that she was in
love with someone else called David Jones and my family is getting us married
sorry.
In the restaurant everyone was looking at Mark and few kids where laughing.
Mark got very upset and slap across Jane’s face and wake out of the restaurant.
The Next Day
Jane’s family got ready to meet up with David Jones family to talk about Janes
Marriage. While they where talking about marriage Mark was at home and
feeling jealously and very upset and started drinking alcohol. Mark went to the
restaurant where Jane and her family was and killed David Jones through his
heart. Jane screamed and shouts at Mark.
The police came and arrested Mark up to six years. During his time in jail he felt
very upset and called Jane to ask for forgiveness and wanted his redemption.
However Jane did not accept his apologises and replayed to Mark “ I hope you die
like you called my true love David Jones”.