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 Step 1: Read the original passages.
 Step 2: Choose the best paraphrase from the choices given and mark it "Best."
 Step 3: Mark the others "Too sim." for too similar, "No cit." if there is no in-text
citation, or "Inc./lnacc." for incomplete and/or inaccurate information.
 The first one has been done for you as an example.
 Source: Page 16 of a three-page
article in the October 15, 2003,
issue of Space Science magazine.
The title of the at1icle is
"Manned Mars Flight: Impossible
Dream?" The author is Patrick
Clinton, a NASA (National
Aeronautics and Space
Administration) physician.
 Living aboard a space station in
orbit around Earth for months at
a time poses problems for
astronauts' bodies as well as for
their minds.
A. An article in Space Science magazine
rep0l1s that lengthy space station duty
may lead to physical and mental
problems for astronauts (Clinton 16).
[BEST]
B. An article in Space Science magazine
reports that astronauts who live
aboard space stations for long periods
of time may experience physical as
well as mental problems. [No Cit.]
C. An article in Space Science reports
that living in a space station orbiting
Earth for a long time can cause
difficulties for astronauts' bodies and
minds (Clinton 16). [Too Sim.]
D. An article in Space Science reports
that astronauts will become physically
sick and have mental problems if they
visit a space station (Clinton 16).
[Inacc.]
 Source: Page 16 of the same article
in passage 1.
 One major problem is maintaining
astronauts' physical health. Medical
treatment may be days or even
weeks away, as there may not be a
doctor on board. Illnesses such as
appendicitis or ulcers, routinely
treated on Earth, could be fatal in
space because of the delay in getting
to a doctor.
A. NASA physician Patrick Clinton states that
one problem is astronauts' physical health.
With no doctor on board, common illnesses
like appendicitis and ulcers could be fatal to
astronauts because it would take too long to
get them back to Earth.
B. NASA physician Patrick Clinton states that
keeping the astronauts physically healthy is
one problem. If the crew does not include a
doctor, the delay in getting treatment for an
ordinary illness, such as appendicitis or
ulcers, could mean death (16).
C. NASA physician Patrick Clinton states that
the physical health of astronauts is a huge
problem. Spaceships do not usually have
medical doctors among the crew, so
astronauts who get appendicitis on a long
space journey will die (16).
D. NASA physician Patrick Clinton states that
one big problem is keeping astronauts in
good physical health. Medical treatment
might take days or weeks to get because
there may not be a doctor on the spaceship.
Ordinary illnesses such as appendicitis and
ulcers could be deadly because it would take
too long to get to a doctor (16).
 Source: Page 17 of the same article
as in passages 1 and 2.
 Another health problem is the
potential for bone deterioration. In a
weightless environment, the body
produces less calcium. Astronauts
must exercise at least three hours a
day to prevent bone loss.
A. Another problem is the possibility of bone
loss, according to NASA physician Patrick
Clinton. In weightless space, the body
makes less calcium. Astronauts have to
exercise a minimum of three hours a day to
avoid losing bone (17).
B. According to NASA physician Patrick
Clinton, weight can be a problem.
Astronauts must take extra calcium and
exercise at least three hours a day to keep
from gaining weight and to prevent bone
damage (17).
C. According to NASA physician Patrick
Clinton, astronauts could suffer bone loss.
Being weightless causes the body to lose
calcium, which is important for strength, so
exercising at least three hours daily is
necessary to keep their bones strong.
D. According to NASA physician Patrick
Clinton, astronauts also face possible bone
loss. Because weightlessness causes the
body to lose calcium, exercising at least
three hours daily is necessary to keep their
bones strong (17).
 Source: Page 18 of a three-page
article in the October 15,2003,
issue of Space Science magazine.
The title of the article is
"Manned Mars Flight:
Impossible Dream?" The author
is Patrick Clinton, a NASA
physician.
A second major problem is
maintaining astronauts'
mental health. Being confined
for long periods of time in
dark and hostile space
undoubtedly produces anxiety.
Loneliness and boredom are
other psychological concerns.
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Paraphrasing Practice.pptx

  • 1.
  • 2.  Step 1: Read the original passages.  Step 2: Choose the best paraphrase from the choices given and mark it "Best."  Step 3: Mark the others "Too sim." for too similar, "No cit." if there is no in-text citation, or "Inc./lnacc." for incomplete and/or inaccurate information.  The first one has been done for you as an example.
  • 3.  Source: Page 16 of a three-page article in the October 15, 2003, issue of Space Science magazine. The title of the at1icle is "Manned Mars Flight: Impossible Dream?" The author is Patrick Clinton, a NASA (National Aeronautics and Space Administration) physician.  Living aboard a space station in orbit around Earth for months at a time poses problems for astronauts' bodies as well as for their minds. A. An article in Space Science magazine rep0l1s that lengthy space station duty may lead to physical and mental problems for astronauts (Clinton 16). [BEST] B. An article in Space Science magazine reports that astronauts who live aboard space stations for long periods of time may experience physical as well as mental problems. [No Cit.] C. An article in Space Science reports that living in a space station orbiting Earth for a long time can cause difficulties for astronauts' bodies and minds (Clinton 16). [Too Sim.] D. An article in Space Science reports that astronauts will become physically sick and have mental problems if they visit a space station (Clinton 16). [Inacc.]
  • 4.  Source: Page 16 of the same article in passage 1.  One major problem is maintaining astronauts' physical health. Medical treatment may be days or even weeks away, as there may not be a doctor on board. Illnesses such as appendicitis or ulcers, routinely treated on Earth, could be fatal in space because of the delay in getting to a doctor. A. NASA physician Patrick Clinton states that one problem is astronauts' physical health. With no doctor on board, common illnesses like appendicitis and ulcers could be fatal to astronauts because it would take too long to get them back to Earth. B. NASA physician Patrick Clinton states that keeping the astronauts physically healthy is one problem. If the crew does not include a doctor, the delay in getting treatment for an ordinary illness, such as appendicitis or ulcers, could mean death (16). C. NASA physician Patrick Clinton states that the physical health of astronauts is a huge problem. Spaceships do not usually have medical doctors among the crew, so astronauts who get appendicitis on a long space journey will die (16). D. NASA physician Patrick Clinton states that one big problem is keeping astronauts in good physical health. Medical treatment might take days or weeks to get because there may not be a doctor on the spaceship. Ordinary illnesses such as appendicitis and ulcers could be deadly because it would take too long to get to a doctor (16).
  • 5.
  • 6.  Source: Page 17 of the same article as in passages 1 and 2.  Another health problem is the potential for bone deterioration. In a weightless environment, the body produces less calcium. Astronauts must exercise at least three hours a day to prevent bone loss. A. Another problem is the possibility of bone loss, according to NASA physician Patrick Clinton. In weightless space, the body makes less calcium. Astronauts have to exercise a minimum of three hours a day to avoid losing bone (17). B. According to NASA physician Patrick Clinton, weight can be a problem. Astronauts must take extra calcium and exercise at least three hours a day to keep from gaining weight and to prevent bone damage (17). C. According to NASA physician Patrick Clinton, astronauts could suffer bone loss. Being weightless causes the body to lose calcium, which is important for strength, so exercising at least three hours daily is necessary to keep their bones strong. D. According to NASA physician Patrick Clinton, astronauts also face possible bone loss. Because weightlessness causes the body to lose calcium, exercising at least three hours daily is necessary to keep their bones strong (17).
  • 7.
  • 8.  Source: Page 18 of a three-page article in the October 15,2003, issue of Space Science magazine. The title of the article is "Manned Mars Flight: Impossible Dream?" The author is Patrick Clinton, a NASA physician. A second major problem is maintaining astronauts' mental health. Being confined for long periods of time in dark and hostile space undoubtedly produces anxiety. Loneliness and boredom are other psychological concerns.