1. What have you learned
from your audience
feedback?
Evaluation Question 3
2. Screening
Using a projector in an auditorium, I exhibited my final
products and invited my peers and teachers to sit in on
the viewing.
Proceeding the screening of both of my adverts and the
sponsorship sequence I held a 5 minute Q&A where
the audience posed some questions to me about the
production.
3. Questions
I also handed out a questionnaire created by myself to
the audience to fill out after watching the products.
By carrying out the Q&A and the reflection sheets I
handed out, I wanted to gauge the audiences opinion
and received both positive and negative comments to
take in mind.
The next 4 slides are some examples of the response I
got on my filled out questionnaires.
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8. ‘The Circus Is In Town’ -
Feedback
Most viewers thought the Circus advert was good but
did not like the soundtrack that accompanied it which
was originally Lily Juniper – ‘True Colours’.
They felt it did not represent the brand correctly as it
was an old song that would not appeal to my target
audience and was too stereotypical for the bran.
Upon reflection they were correct and I looked further
into soundtracks which is when I came up with the idea
of using ‘Fix You’ and using the build up in the song to
my advantage.
9. ‘The Circus Is In Town’ -
Feedback
In my advert I started it off with a depressing walk
through a forest in which I eventually come to a circus
and my demeanor changes.
The audience liked this idea but thought that I should
change the colour scheme as I was walking and put a
depressing effect on it so that the audience is more
aware of the change.
However, I was recommended not to overdo this
change as it could look too obvious so I went on Final
Cut and used an effect but toned down the level of it.
10. ‘Let Your Colour Out’ -
Feedback
In one of the examples shown there was a comment that
said the faces needed to be in a more spontaneous order
and sped up to have more of an effect.
Looking back on my advert I realised that due to me taking
the photos in a certain order of boys and girls that there
were far too many of the same gender in a row.
In terms of the timing, I originally only had 30 photos so
needed them to last long in order for the advert to reach my
original quota of 20-30 seconds.
This comment inspired me to double my photos so I shot 30
more people the next day and put it together so each cut
was twice as quick and this had a very positive effect.
11. ‘Let Your Colour Out’ -
Feedback
Next, the general consensus was that my old ending
that just had ‘Let Your Youth Out’ with the brand’s logo,
a bird, above it should be changed and that I needed to
name the brand as it was a relatively unknown
company so would not be recognised just by the logo.
This gave me the idea of having the name of the
company change into the bird in a smooth transition to
finish the advert.
Following this, I came up with the ‘Let Your Colour Out’
to be part of the transition so it would accompany the
bird and provide a thought provoking ending.
13. Sponsorship Sequence -
Feedback
I decided to show my draft sequences as well as my
final sequence to show the progression I had made so
far to my audience.
The general feedback was good but some thought I
should have a wider range of colours that I throw to
really highlight the ‘floods’ in the brand name.
I then went to do the shots again with two more colours
and it added to the sequence in a positive manner.
14. Sponsorship Sequence -
Feedback
In the first instance, I had a male voice in the
background saying the name of the brand and what I
was sponsoring.
Wisely it was mentioned to me that with a male voice
and only male characters in the sequence it might
seem like a male-centered brand, which was not what
the brand stood for as it is uni-sex clothing.
Having re-done the shots twice already I decided to
instead of doing it again with a girl, I changed the male
voice to a female voice which sounded far better and
gave a superior balance to the sequence.
15. Final Screening
I hosted a smaller 2nd screening after I amended my
pieces and that audience seemed to think the changes
were definitely for the better.
I am very thankful that I was able to screen all of my
products and get feedback from up to 30 people so I
could improve my products and get a range of opinions
on them.
Without this, my adverts and sponsorship sequence
would not have the same level of quality that they do
now.