Compositions Errors

1. TODAY'S PLAN
1: REVISION OF THE WRITING
2: READ YOUR WRITING TO THE CLASS
(OPCIONAL: ES POT FER DES DE LA
CADIRA O DAVANT DEL GRUP)

2. hellow

3. Hellou
Hello

4. I am not a hobbies

5. I am not a hobbies
I don't have hobbies.

6. -What did you do this summer?

7. -What did you do this summer?
-In the beach

8. -What did you do this summer?
-In the beach
-I have gone to the beach.

9. -What did you do this summer?
-In the beach
-I have gone to the beach.
s v complement (place)

10. -What are you going to do this course?
-In the 3o pemar

11. -What are you going to do this course?
-In the 3o pemar
-I'm going to do 3rd
of
PMAR.

12. Ay teys ar home

13. Ay teys ar home
I stayed at home

14. My hobbies is play basketball,
and eatting and slepping.

15. My hobbies is play basketball,
and eatting and slepping.
My hobbies are playing
basketball and eating and
sleeping.

16. I study this new course and learn

17. I study this new course and learn
This new course I am going to
study and learn

18. Weather like today is sunny
The weather today is sunny.

19. I have a short mouth

20. I have a short mouth
I have a small mouth

21. I went to my friends to the beach

22. I went to my friends to the beach
I went with my friends to the beach

23. I cleen my house

24. I cleen my house
I have cleaned my house

25. A new course hase study and homework

26. A new course hase study and homework
This new course I am going to study and
do homework.

27. I usually has photography

28. I usually has photography
I usually do photography.
I usually take photos.

29. I like woch TV

30. I like woch TV
I like to watch TV

31. At the weekends stayed in
my friends

32. At the weekends stayed in
my friends
At the weekends I meet my
friends
At the weekends I hang out
with my friends

33. I going today beach

34. I going today beach
I'm going to the beach

35. My name Ayoub

36. My name Ayoub
My name is Ayoub.

37. This new course is very happy

38. This new course is very happy
This new course I'm very happy

39. This play cart this my friends

40. This play cart this my friends
I have played cards with my
friends.

41. And this aprovar activitis this
exercis matematicas

42. this aprovar activitis this exercis
matematicas
I am going to pass the activities
and exercises of Maths.

43. I have 16 years old

44. I have 16 years old
I am 16 years old
I am 16

45. My hobbie is listen music

46. My hobbie is listen music
My hobby is listening to
music

47. Ready a horses

48. Ready a horses
Riding horses.

49. I have play, I have studi

50. I have play, I have studi
I have played, I have studied.

51. Triatló

52. Triatló
Triathlon

53. I sleeping and and shower
and homework

54. I sleeping and shower and
homework
I sleep, take a shower and
do homework