Web Summit brings together the people and companies who redefine the global #tech industry. Of course, #ITMAGINATION will be there, too!
Scan the QR code from our brochures to apply for Innovation Discovery workshop at our house of innovators! The brochures can be found at the Polska Agencja Rozwoju Przedsiębiorczości stand during the event.
5. ITMAGINATION can help you to
Benefit from tailor-made innovations for your business
Transform your data into insights that make a
differenceEnhance user experiences across your digital
channels
Boost your sales
6. IMAGINE THE BEST TEAM
Data is like oil.
With proper refinement, it
can really boost the speed
of your business.
18. Innovation Workshop
.
Sign up at:
www.itmagination.com/innovation-discovery
APPLY NOW!
Discover a new world with ITMAGINATION,
where innovation is a service.
I’ve made minor changes to the text on the slide but I’d actually suggest a slightly larger set of changes:
My suggestion for this page would be:
ITMAGINATION can help you to: / We empower you to: / ITMAGINATION empowers you to:
- Benefit from tailor-made innovations for your business
- Transform your data into insights that make a difference
- Enhance user experiences across your digital channels
- Boost your sales
Minor changes to content here and corrected alignment/justification.
Offer is the wrong word here. Change this to either:
Solutions we provide:
We can empower you with:
Minor changes to text (punctuation) and widening of text box to avoid a short text being split across three lines.
It feels like this is missing a header (like Slides 7 and 5). Consider the following:
ITMAGINATION encourages innovation with:
We help foster innovation through:
Would benefit from a header. Consider the following:
Boost your team through:
ITMAGINATION supports you with:
ITMAGINATION empowers you with:
As per previous slides, consider the following options as headers:
Data services that deliver business value:
Transforming your data through:
Extracting value from your data with:
Generating valuable insights through:
I’ve made the minimum-required changes to this quote, but something is not quite right (it just reads a little awkwardly and I think the ”globally” doesn’t quite fit).
Consider the following alternatives:
We care about our customers and their customers
We are committed to creating value for our customers (and their customers).
We care about our customers and are committed to creating value for them.
We are committed to delivering solutions that empower our customers to grow. Globally. (Globally is optional).
We are committed to delivering technology solutions that deliver real business value.
”Top-notch” is slightly colloquali (old English or Indian English – but not US English). Also, I’m not sure about the ”affordable price” aspect. ”Delivering value” would seem to indicate the right approach to capturing cost vs. benefit.
Consider changing this text to:
Our goal is to deliver
best-in-class technology solutions at an affordable price,
and with a human touch.
Our goal is to deliver
best-in-class technology solutions
that create value for businesses and people.
Our goal is to deliver
best-in-class technology solutions
with a human touch.
We believe in
best-in-class technology solutions
delivered by people, for people.
Slight adjustments to punctuation and removal of ”at ITMAGINATION” from title as nobody else has this and it’s obvious from the context.
There was a typo in ”Apply”, which has been fixed but I’m not sure this is the right word (It implies you could be rejected, like a Job Application).
Consider changing this to:
Request your (smaller, blue text)
INNOVATION WORKSHOP (larger, yellow text)
I’ve also made some minor adjustments to the layout and punctuation of the text. It would be good if you could make the URL pop out more.
I’m not sure about this text.
How about:
I’m here at WEB SUMMIT.
Ask me how ITMAGINATION can empower your business to innovate.