Slides for Day 13 in EWRT 211

1. LEAD EWRT 1A
Day 13
The Beginning of the End

2. Agenda
 Global Issues wrap-up.
 The Home Stretch (A pep talk, of
sorts).
 Madonnas wrap-up
 Thesis statement review
 Quote Sandwiches
 MLA Formatting
 Writing your outline
 Putting it all together
 Schedule for next week.

3. Global Issues Wrap-up
 To get credit for attendance at the
conference, please list the event(s)
that you attended during your
hour.
 Then write at least four sentences
that explain what you learned at
the conference.

4. Now you get to decide whether you
want to take this class again.
 If you expect to have a chance to pass
this class:
 Writing Familia next week with Paper 2.
 Monday, 3/12: prepare in-class for In-
Class Essay #2.
 Wednesday, 3/14: write In-Class Essay
#2.
 Monday, 3/19: Paper 3 draft due in
class.
 Wednesday, 3/21: Entire portfolio due
in class (no late portfolios accepted.)
 YOU CAN DO THIS.
 But you are going to have to commit
seriously to these last three weeks.

5. How can we summarize Madonnas?
The web of connections.

7. Quote Sandwiches
 BEFORE the quote:
 Where is the quote from?
 Who is speaking in the quote?
 What is the situation in the quote?
 AFTER the quote:
 Citation with page number.
 Paraphrase what the quote said.
 Explain how the quote supports
your POINT in this paragraph.
 Example:
In The Madonnas of Echo Park, Aurora describes how she fell in
love with English pop culture—especially the singer Morrissey.
She says, “If second-generation Mexicans could canonize a living
saint in Los Angeles, it’d be Morrissey. Like most of the Mexican
girls and gay boys I knew, I went through a vicious, life-
consuming Morrissey phase in high school, one that for a period
of time made me hate the queen of England and Margaret
Thatcher more than I hated the Los Angeles Police Department”
(Skyhorse 155). Aurora is saying that her love of Morrissey was,
in some ways, very traditionally Mexican. However, at the same
time, it also made her care more about the politics of England
than her own city. This shows how pop culture can connect and
disconnect us from our communities at the same time. Through
pop culture, it is possible to identify with people different from
you, while still remaining yourself.

8. Now you try it
 Sandwich the quote at right.
 First, explain:
 Where is it from?
 Who is speaking in the quote?
 What is the speaker talking about?
What is the situation/context?
 Then after the quote:
 Paraphrase what it is saying in your
own words.
 Explain the POINT about
GENTRIFICATION that this quote is
making.
 “I was thrilled at first when [the
white Westsiders] ushered those
dilapidated tiendas, lavanderías,
and taquerías out of the
neighborhood. [...] Now that these
gringo hipster stores are
everywhere, I’m not sure this is my
old neighborhood anymore.” (153)

9. MLA Essay Formatting

10. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8xAc4yZ8VSA

11. Margins and Formatting
 1” all around
 Go to “Layout” and
adjust margins or use
custom settings
 Times New Roman 12
 Indent body paragraphs
½ inch from the margin
Header: Last Name 1
 Double Click in
Header Area
 Type your last name
 Align right
 Go to “insert” and
click on “page
number”

12. Heading: Double Spaced
Your Name
Dr. Brian Malone
EWRT 211
28 February 2018
Title
 Original Title (not the title
of the novel or the prompt
number).
 No italics, bold, underline,
or quotation marks
 Centered on the page
 No extra spaces (just
double spaced after your
heading and before the
body of your text)

13. .5 inch

14. The Structure of Your Essay
Putting everything we’ve learned together.

15. Paper 2 Outline
(Due on Canvas this Friday, 3/2, by NOON)
 Your outline should include (if possible—but submit whatever you can come up
with):
 1. A possible thesis statement for your paper. What is the main point you want
to make in your paper? (Make sure your main point responds to the prompt.)
 2. A list of the body paragraphs you think you will need in your essay and what
the point you want to make in each body paragraph will be.
 3. For each proposed body paragraph in your outline, include a quote from
that book that you will use as evidence in that body paragraph. Don’t forget
to include the page number.
 You will need to pay attention to MY FEEDBACK on Canvas for this assignment.

16. Next Week’s Schedule: