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Theses
FEATURES OF A STRONG INTRODUCTION AND THESIS
• A strong intro offers a SURPRISING, ORIGINAL, and THOUGHT-PROVOKING
thesis.
• A strong intro provides only as much CONTEXT as a reader needs to grasp
the meaning of the thesis— no less, and no more.
• A strong thesis RESPONDS to the WHOLE QUESTION; it doesn’t simply
restate the question or respond to parts of it.
• A strong thesis makes a DEBATABLE CLAIM about the MEANING of the
artifact; it’s not a statement of simple fact.
• A strong thesis not only makes a debatable claim but provides the
REASONING behind that claim.
• A strong thesis is SPECIFIC enough that readers clearly understand
precisely what the writer is arguing.
• A strong thesis LOGICALLY CONNECTS all of its key ideas.
FEATURES OF A STRONG INTRODUCTION AND THESIS
• Surprising, original, and thought-provoking?
• Right amount of context?
• Responds to the whole question?
• Debatable claims about meaning?
• Provides reasoning?
• Suitably specific?
• All ideas are logically connected?
Analysis
WRITING ANALYSES
An analysis paragraph should show how a specific piece of directly presented
evidence supports and develops your thesis.
One good way to organizing a paragraph of analysis (though it’s not the only good
way):
• State your claim.
• Present the relevant evidence.
• Draw upon the concepts you’re using to show how the evidence supports your
claim.
• Indicate what the argument you’ve made in this paragraph contributes to your
thesis overall.
Bad ways to organize a paragraph of analysis include:
• Summarizing rather analyzing.
• Neglecting to present the evidence, or at least not directly.
• Neglecting to use the conceptual terminology.
• Cramming multiple claims and/or pieces of evidence into a single paragraph.
FEATURES OF A STRONG ANALYTIC PARAGRAPH
• Argumentative claim clearly stated? YES = 
• Relevant evidence presented as directly as possible? YES = 
• Use Hunt’s terms and concepts? YES = 
• Connecti to thesis? YES = 
• Is it more summary than analysis? 
• Does it include multiple claims or pieces of evidence? 

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Theses and analyses

  • 2. FEATURES OF A STRONG INTRODUCTION AND THESIS • A strong intro offers a SURPRISING, ORIGINAL, and THOUGHT-PROVOKING thesis. • A strong intro provides only as much CONTEXT as a reader needs to grasp the meaning of the thesis— no less, and no more. • A strong thesis RESPONDS to the WHOLE QUESTION; it doesn’t simply restate the question or respond to parts of it. • A strong thesis makes a DEBATABLE CLAIM about the MEANING of the artifact; it’s not a statement of simple fact. • A strong thesis not only makes a debatable claim but provides the REASONING behind that claim. • A strong thesis is SPECIFIC enough that readers clearly understand precisely what the writer is arguing. • A strong thesis LOGICALLY CONNECTS all of its key ideas.
  • 3. FEATURES OF A STRONG INTRODUCTION AND THESIS • Surprising, original, and thought-provoking? • Right amount of context? • Responds to the whole question? • Debatable claims about meaning? • Provides reasoning? • Suitably specific? • All ideas are logically connected?
  • 5. WRITING ANALYSES An analysis paragraph should show how a specific piece of directly presented evidence supports and develops your thesis. One good way to organizing a paragraph of analysis (though it’s not the only good way): • State your claim. • Present the relevant evidence. • Draw upon the concepts you’re using to show how the evidence supports your claim. • Indicate what the argument you’ve made in this paragraph contributes to your thesis overall. Bad ways to organize a paragraph of analysis include: • Summarizing rather analyzing. • Neglecting to present the evidence, or at least not directly. • Neglecting to use the conceptual terminology. • Cramming multiple claims and/or pieces of evidence into a single paragraph.
  • 6. FEATURES OF A STRONG ANALYTIC PARAGRAPH • Argumentative claim clearly stated? YES =  • Relevant evidence presented as directly as possible? YES =  • Use Hunt’s terms and concepts? YES =  • Connecti to thesis? YES =  • Is it more summary than analysis?  • Does it include multiple claims or pieces of evidence? 