1. February 24, 2010

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4. Writing Support for Paragraphs The first step in writing a paragraph is making a point (Topic Sentence) The second step is supporting that point with specific evidence.

5. Writing Support for Paragraphs Supporting reasons and details should support and explain the writer’s point of view be specific enough that the reader can really “see” and imagine the writers details and examples

6. Writing Support for Paragraphs Read paragraph A and B on p. 47 and 48.

7. Activity, p. 49-50 Each of the five points is followed by two possible details. For each point, we will take turns reading the choices aloud. We will discuss which choice provides specific details.

8. Activity, p. 61 Rewrite the sentences, replacing the underlined words with more specific words. Read Example. Student Sentences: At the shopping center, we visited several stores. At the shopping center, we visited Safeway, London Drugs, ToysRus, and a Payless shoes. . . . .Roots, Nike, and Superstore.

9. Activity, p. 61 Sunday is my day to take care of chores. . . . cleaning, laundry and preparing Sunday dinner for my parents. . . .vacuuming the floors, cleaning the kitchen and throwing away trash. Lola enjoys various activities in her spare time. . . . playing guitar and using the computer. . . . playing electric guitar and using the computer to chat with friends.

10. Activity, p. 61 I spent most of my afternoon doing homework. . . . .reading a news article from last class, brainstorming for a paragraph, and studying for dictation. We returned home from vacation to discover that several pests had invaded the house. . . . bed bugs, cockroaches, and centipedes . . .

11. How to make sentences more specific Use exact names Use lively verbs (powerful) Use descriptive words (modifiers) before nouns Use words that relate to the five senses: sight, hearing, taste, smell, and touch

12. Activity, p. 63 The lunch was assembled of poor quality food. Today’s spoiled salmon sandwich which I prepared three days ago was sick. The lunch was very spicy, halfway cooked and very watery. 2. John saw a wild pig in the jungle and it bolted away when the bullet hit its back.

13. Activity, p. 63 (Cont’d.) 3. While I was playing hockey I suffered a left leg fracture which changed my life forever. 4. Our English instructor snuck (shuffled, wandered) into to our tiny classroom slowly and nervously. 5.The new model of Canon copy machine we just bought blew up with smoke suddenly. 6.The crowd of young red Canadian hockey fans * grew resltess minute after minute watching the first competition between Canada and the United States in 18 months at BC Place.

14. Activity 6.3, (Cont’d.) 7.I took a warm bath and had a cup of green tea and watched the Olympic games. 8.Yestereday afternoon, when I decided to clean my small room, I found everything was cluttered with piles of english grammar books, dictionaries, school papers, 24-hours newspapers and fashion magazines. 9. An angry six year old boy threw the ball into the window. (hurled, catapulted, . . . ) 10. The drunken driver shouted and tore the ticket the police gave him.

15. Activity, p. 64 I could tell I was coming down with the flu. - I had 38 degree celsius fever - I had a runny nose - My whole body was aching 2. The food at the cafeteria was terrible yesterday -the broccoli was a little overcooked -some shrimp were still frozen -only spicy potatoes, no rice, no noodles 3. I had car problems recently. -I had a flat tire -a few days after the engine broke down -and then this weekend someone broke the window

16. When your money gets tight, there are several ways to economize. -you can shop when you get a flyer -you can use your credit card and you will have some time to pay it back later. -you can plan to shop until there are sales. -you can use public transit -try to make your lunch instead of going to a restaurant -stop using credit cards; use cash Some people are dangerously distracted when they drive -talk on their cell phone and send text message -some ladies drive while putting makeup on -eat foods such as noodles and rice while driving

18. “The Possibility of Evil” – Other Vocabulary Are there any other words would it be good to discuss? chipper (adj.) – happy, perky Ex: He was in a chipper mood this morning. amused (adj.) – entertained, experienced enjoyment Ex: The young boy was amused by the circus. amusing (adj.)– funny, entertaining Ex: The circus was amusing.

19. “The Possibility of Evil” – Other Vocabulary daintily (adv.) dainty (adj.) – delicately, elegantly Ex: She held her teacup daintily, which her little finger sticking out. g gracefully (adv.) – with style or beauty engrave (v.) – etch – scratch a design into the surface ask after – ask about sloppiness (n.) – messiness, cluttered, untidiness sloppy (adj.) sloppily (adv.)

20. “The Possibility of Evil” Before you read the story, what did you think the title might suggest? Now that you have read the story, what do you think the title suggests? What about the word “possibility” in particular? What about the line in the top right hand corner?

21. “The Possibility of Evil” – Discussion Point of view Is the story told from first person or third person? Third person – the writer is an outsider using “She” to narrate the story. Setting Where and when is the story set? How does this setting affect the story? Small town. Everyone knows one another – knows about each other’s lives. Characters Is the main character flat or round? How much do we know about her? We know she is sneaky, organized, two-faced, deceitful, judgemental, neat, clean, proud, so we could say she is round. dynamic or static? Not enough information. What about the other charcters? We don’t know much about them. Flat.

22. “The Possibility of Evil”– Discussion Conflict What kind of conflict(s) is/are present in the story? internal or external? External. Character vs. Society. Outcome Is the ending positive or negative for the main character? Negative. Theme What is the author’s message about people who act like the main character? The author disapproves of people like Miss Strangeworth. She may also be saying Someone who does harm to others can be harmed in turn Sometimes people believe they are doing good, but there is evil in their actions

23. Homework Questions for The Possibility of Evil. Due Monday, March 1st. Outline and rough draft of a paragraph on the topic “My proudest accomplishment.” Do as much as you can for Monday.