In Your Own Words…

PARAPHRASING
By the End, You will
           Know…
o How to put a passage in
  your own words without
  changing the meaning
o The definition of
  Paraphrasing
o How to find the main idea
  of the text in order to
  paraphrase it
What is Paraphrasing???
o PARAPHRASING IS…
o A rewriting of text in your
  own words
o Used to clarify meaning
o Used to shorten a longer
  statement but keeps the
  main ideas
So How Do We Do It?

o Read the passage
  carefully              PARAPHRASE
o Decide the main            ME!
  ideas of the passage
o Highlight important
  words or phrases
o Put the main points
  in your own words
Example 1

 Passage from Book
• Ancient Egyptians
  believed that Osiris, a
  good and wise king, was
  the first pharaoh. He
  spread knowledge to
  other parts of the world,
  while his wife, Isis,
  ruled Egypt in his place.
Good Example 1
    ORIGINAL PASSAGE                                  PARAPHRASED
·    Ancient Egyptians believed                         PASSAGE
     that Osiris, a good and wise           ·        King Osiris was the first
     king, was the first pharaoh.                    pharaoh and spread
     He spread knowledge to                          knowledge. Queen Isis ruled
     other parts of the world,                       Egypt when he was gone.
     while his wife, Isis, ruled
     Egypt in his place.        HIGHLIGHTED
                               PASSAGE
                      Ancient Egyptians believed
                      that Osiris, a good and wise
                      king, was the first pharaoh.
                      He spread knowledge to
                      other parts of the world,
                      while his wife, Isis, ruled
                      Egypt in his place
Poor Example 1
      Original Passage
·   Ancient Egyptians believed
    that Osiris, a good and wise                    Poor Paraphrasing
    king, was the first pharaoh.
                                               ·   King Osiris was an ancient
    He spread knowledge to
                                                   Egyptian King and the first
    other parts of the world,
                                                   pharaoh. He was good and
    while his wife, Isis, ruled
                                                   wise because he spread
    Egypt in his place.
                                                   knowledge to other parts of
                Highlighted Passage                the world. His wife Isis ruled
              Ancient Egyptians believed           Egypt in his place.
              that Osiris, a good and wise
              king, was the first pharaoh.
              He spread knowledge to other
              parts of the world, while his
              wife, Isis, ruled Egypt in his
              place.
Example 2

                   Passage from Book
                 o Upon returning home,
                   Osiris was murdered by
                   his evil brother Set, who
                   cut Osiris’s body into
                   pieces and dumped it in
                   the Nile River. Isis
                   found the body and put
                   it back together by
Osiris and Set
                   winding linen bandages
                   around it.
Good Example 2
      Original Passage                                Paraphrased Passage
·   Upon returning home, Osiris
                                                      ·   Osiris’s brother Set killed
    was murdered by his evil
    brother, Set who cut his body                         Osiris by cutting his body
    into pieces and dumped it in                          into pieces, and Isis put the
    the Nile River. Isis found the                        body back together.
    body and put it back together                              Isis, Osiris’s
    by winding linen bandages                                  wife
    around it.
                                Highlighted Passage
                              Upon returning home, Osiris
                              was murdered by his evil
                              brother, Set who cut his body
                              into pieces and dumped it in
                              the Nile River. Isis found the
                              body and put it back together
                              by winding linen bandages
                              around it.
Poor Example 2
Original Passage
·   Upon returning home, Osiris
    was murdered by his evil
    brother, Set who cut his body                    Poor Paraphrasing
    into pieces and dumped it in
    the Nile River. Isis found the                   · Osiris was murdered and
    body and put it back together                      Isis found the body
    by winding linen bandages
    around it.
                      Highlighted Passage
                    Upon returning home, Osiris
                    was murdered by his evil
                    brother, Set who cut his body
                    into pieces and dumped it in
                    the Nile River. Isis found the
                    body and put it back together
                    by winding linen bandages
                    around it.
Your Turn

Remember the Rules          Passage from Book
o Read the passage         · In 1857, a British
  carefully                  expedition led by
o Find the main ideas        Richard Burton and
o Highlight important        John Speke set out to
  words or phrases           find the great lakes
o Put the main points in     shown on Ptolemy’s
  your own words             map. After reaching
                             Lake Tanganyika, the
                             two men split up
                             because Burton was ill.
Now You Try!

    Remember to highlight               Which one is the best?
       the right words                o Richard Burton and his friend
·    In 1857, a British expedition      looked for the great lakes
     led by Richard Burton and          shown on Ptolemy’s map.
     John Speke set out to find the     The men split up.
     great lakes shown on             o In 1857, Richard Burton and
     Ptolemy’s map. After               John Speke searched for the
     reaching Lake Tanganyika,          great lakes on Ptolemy’s
     the two men split up because       map, but they had to split up
     Burton was ill.                    when Burton was ill.
                                      o Two men from Britain
                                        looked for the great lakes but
                                        had to split up because one
                                        was ill.
Paraphrasing Perfection

    Practice your            Passage from Book
  paraphrasing Skills       · Speke discovered
     for Perfection           Victoria Nyanza and
o Read passage and write      was convinced that the
  passage down on piece       White Nile Flowed from
  of paper.                   it. A second expedition
                              proved him right when
o Highlight the key words
                              he found the outlet of
  in the passage.             the Nile at a waterfall
o Paraphrase the passage      which he named Ripon
  in your own words.          Falls.
…look like this?
      Original Passage
·   Speke discovered Victoria                        Paraphrased Passage
    Nyanza and was convinced                     ·   Speke discovered Victoria
    that the White Nile flowed                       Nyanza and found the outlet
    from it. A second expedition                     of the Nile which he called
    proved him right when he                         the Ripon Falls.
    found the outlet of the Nile at
    a waterfall which he named
    Ripon Falls.
                         Highlighted Passage
                      Speke discovered Victoria
                      Nyanza and was convinced that
                      the White Nile flowed from it.
                      A second expedition proved
                      him right when he found the
                      outlet of the Nile at a waterfall
                      which he named Ripon Falls.
CONGRATULATIONS!

  YOU HAVE
 SUCCESSFULLY
COMPLETED THIS
  LESSON ON
PARAPHRASING!
   REMEMBER
PRACTICE MAKES
    PERFECT!

Teaching Paraphrasing to students

  • 1.
    In Your OwnWords… PARAPHRASING
  • 2.
    By the End,You will Know… o How to put a passage in your own words without changing the meaning o The definition of Paraphrasing o How to find the main idea of the text in order to paraphrase it
  • 3.
    What is Paraphrasing??? oPARAPHRASING IS… o A rewriting of text in your own words o Used to clarify meaning o Used to shorten a longer statement but keeps the main ideas
  • 4.
    So How DoWe Do It? o Read the passage carefully PARAPHRASE o Decide the main ME! ideas of the passage o Highlight important words or phrases o Put the main points in your own words
  • 5.
    Example 1 Passagefrom Book • Ancient Egyptians believed that Osiris, a good and wise king, was the first pharaoh. He spread knowledge to other parts of the world, while his wife, Isis, ruled Egypt in his place.
  • 6.
    Good Example 1 ORIGINAL PASSAGE PARAPHRASED · Ancient Egyptians believed PASSAGE that Osiris, a good and wise · King Osiris was the first king, was the first pharaoh. pharaoh and spread He spread knowledge to knowledge. Queen Isis ruled other parts of the world, Egypt when he was gone. while his wife, Isis, ruled Egypt in his place. HIGHLIGHTED PASSAGE Ancient Egyptians believed that Osiris, a good and wise king, was the first pharaoh. He spread knowledge to other parts of the world, while his wife, Isis, ruled Egypt in his place
  • 7.
    Poor Example 1 Original Passage · Ancient Egyptians believed that Osiris, a good and wise Poor Paraphrasing king, was the first pharaoh. · King Osiris was an ancient He spread knowledge to Egyptian King and the first other parts of the world, pharaoh. He was good and while his wife, Isis, ruled wise because he spread Egypt in his place. knowledge to other parts of Highlighted Passage the world. His wife Isis ruled Ancient Egyptians believed Egypt in his place. that Osiris, a good and wise king, was the first pharaoh. He spread knowledge to other parts of the world, while his wife, Isis, ruled Egypt in his place.
  • 8.
    Example 2 Passage from Book o Upon returning home, Osiris was murdered by his evil brother Set, who cut Osiris’s body into pieces and dumped it in the Nile River. Isis found the body and put it back together by Osiris and Set winding linen bandages around it.
  • 9.
    Good Example 2 Original Passage Paraphrased Passage · Upon returning home, Osiris · Osiris’s brother Set killed was murdered by his evil brother, Set who cut his body Osiris by cutting his body into pieces and dumped it in into pieces, and Isis put the the Nile River. Isis found the body back together. body and put it back together Isis, Osiris’s by winding linen bandages wife around it. Highlighted Passage Upon returning home, Osiris was murdered by his evil brother, Set who cut his body into pieces and dumped it in the Nile River. Isis found the body and put it back together by winding linen bandages around it.
  • 10.
    Poor Example 2 OriginalPassage · Upon returning home, Osiris was murdered by his evil brother, Set who cut his body Poor Paraphrasing into pieces and dumped it in the Nile River. Isis found the · Osiris was murdered and body and put it back together Isis found the body by winding linen bandages around it. Highlighted Passage Upon returning home, Osiris was murdered by his evil brother, Set who cut his body into pieces and dumped it in the Nile River. Isis found the body and put it back together by winding linen bandages around it.
  • 11.
    Your Turn Remember theRules Passage from Book o Read the passage · In 1857, a British carefully expedition led by o Find the main ideas Richard Burton and o Highlight important John Speke set out to words or phrases find the great lakes o Put the main points in shown on Ptolemy’s your own words map. After reaching Lake Tanganyika, the two men split up because Burton was ill.
  • 12.
    Now You Try! Remember to highlight Which one is the best? the right words o Richard Burton and his friend · In 1857, a British expedition looked for the great lakes led by Richard Burton and shown on Ptolemy’s map. John Speke set out to find the The men split up. great lakes shown on o In 1857, Richard Burton and Ptolemy’s map. After John Speke searched for the reaching Lake Tanganyika, great lakes on Ptolemy’s the two men split up because map, but they had to split up Burton was ill. when Burton was ill. o Two men from Britain looked for the great lakes but had to split up because one was ill.
  • 13.
    Paraphrasing Perfection Practice your Passage from Book paraphrasing Skills · Speke discovered for Perfection Victoria Nyanza and o Read passage and write was convinced that the passage down on piece White Nile Flowed from of paper. it. A second expedition proved him right when o Highlight the key words he found the outlet of in the passage. the Nile at a waterfall o Paraphrase the passage which he named Ripon in your own words. Falls.
  • 14.
    …look like this? Original Passage · Speke discovered Victoria Paraphrased Passage Nyanza and was convinced · Speke discovered Victoria that the White Nile flowed Nyanza and found the outlet from it. A second expedition of the Nile which he called proved him right when he the Ripon Falls. found the outlet of the Nile at a waterfall which he named Ripon Falls. Highlighted Passage Speke discovered Victoria Nyanza and was convinced that the White Nile flowed from it. A second expedition proved him right when he found the outlet of the Nile at a waterfall which he named Ripon Falls.
  • 15.
    CONGRATULATIONS! YOUHAVE SUCCESSFULLY COMPLETED THIS LESSON ON PARAPHRASING! REMEMBER PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT!

Editor's Notes

  • #4 You may want to highlight the words, re-writing, clarify and shorten and keeps. These seem like keys words in the definition.
  • #5 Great graphic! Again, I would use highlights.
  • #9 Check the comma and the capital S after it. IS that correct?
  • #10 I like the noise that you added here for the paraphrased passage. Could you do that for the others?
  • #13 I think that some commas are needed in the paragraph. The use of color for the best is an effective strategy. But the heading could read - the purple one is best. So the reader does not have to guess. Also in these two practice slides the sentences are quite long, I am wondering if shorter sentences would be helpful to the students. Also, when you create the lesson plans, I think it would be good if students had copies of the text so that they could practice the highlighting. We’ll do this on Tuesday when we return.
  • #16 Fun.