2nd part

1. Some of the assistants agreed that it should not be
compulsory.
Some of the attendants agreed that it should not be
compulsory.
…prestigious people as presidents or the scientific
community reach their best moment not before their
forties or even later.
…prestigious people such as presidents or the
scientific community are at the peak of their
(intellectual) powers in their forties or even later.
Without the voice of experience, companies incomes
are appealed to decrease.
Without the voice of experience, companies’ income
is bound to decrease.
I personally think that older workers have invaluable
experience and skills only achieved with time, that
are both beneficial for the company and youth.
I personally think that older workers have invaluable
experience and skills only achieved with time that
are beneficial both for the company and young
people / the young.

2. This measure will certainly assure the incorporation
of young people to workforce, bringing illusion and
ambition to some areas in which the boredom and
monotony uses to prevail.
This measure will certainly ensure the incorporation
of young people to the workforce, bringing
enthusiasm and ambition to some areas in which
boredom and monotony usually prevail.
While some experts as prof. Miller bold claim that the
answer of this problem is setting the retirement age
at 55 we have to consider the consequences of this
action.
While some experts such as prof. Miller boldly claim
that the answer of this problem is setting the
retirement age at 55 we have to consider the
consequences of this measure / proposal / policy.
First, we have the problem of making this retirement
compulsory or not. It is without saying that work is
not only a way to earn money but an aim in itself.
First comes the question of making this retirement
compulsory or not. It goes without saying that work
is not only a way to earn money but an aim in itself.

3. Since 2008, the world is living one of the worse
financial crisis from all times…
Since 2008, the world is going through /
experiencing one of the worst financial crises of all
times…
Even though it is a good point in which the
governments should pay more attention, is the
society the one interested in the early retirement.
Even though it is a good point to which the
governments should pay more attention (pay heed),
it is society that is interested in early retirement.
From my point of view, older people have the
experience of years working for the company, whose
achievement is only possible with time, and
experience is a richer characteristic than energy
From my point of view, older people have the
experience of years working for the company, and
such an achievement is only possible with time, and
experience is more valuable a characteristic than
vitality
Old people deserve to spend their last years without
the stress that work means, being unfair to have
them in their jobs such a long time

4. Old people deserve to spend their last years without
the stress that work entails, as/since it is unfair to
maintain/keep them in their jobs such a long time
Even though all I said I cannot share this
economist’s view
Despite / In spite of all the above-mentioned ideas /
of everything mentioned above I cannot share this
economist’s view
But another important fact that should be also
discussed is how to provide happiness and peace to
this people if they were retired at the age of 55.
But another important fact that should also be
discussed is how to provide happiness and peace to
these people if they retired at the age of 55.
Thomas R. Smith who talked about some of the
things he proposes the EU countries should do to
increase their economy.
Thomas R. Smith talked about some of the things he
proposes the EU countries (should) do to
improve/enhance their economy.