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personal narrative rough draft
My example:
          My pet chicken, Harriet
The outside story:                         The inside story:
1. Family got chickens. They were all      1.   I was a lonely kid. The chickens
    twitchy and jittery, except Harriet.        were good company for me; they
    Harriet warmed up to me; I                  gave me joy!
    earned her trust.
                                           2.   I really grew to love Harriet. We
2. We were good friends, she would              became attached. I looked
   find me and let me pick her up.              forward to seeing her every day.

                                           3. I was horrified. How could this be?
3. Pulled up to driveway to see that
                                                My heart was sad, though I was
   Harriet was killed when my dogs
                                                also grateful for the times we
   got out and ate her! Soon
                                                had together. Having a pet
   enough, I made a new chicken
                                                chicken will be a fond memory
   friend, Chicken Little.
                                                forever.
My beloved Harriet…
        For many years growing up, my family had a thing with farm
animals. We spent many a weekend at the Saturday auction, traipsing
home with new chickens, ducks, or geese in toe. It was all pretty normal
and unspecial, you could say…until Harriet came along.
        Most of the chickens we had were twitchy, startled little creatures
who resisted any sort of contact with us. But Harriet, Harriet was
different. Unlike the others, she warmed up to me and would eat from
my hand. She even let me pet her and pick her up in my arms. For an
often-bored, only child like me, having a pet chicken greet me after
school was like a dream come true. It didn’t take long for me and Harriet
to grow a unique bond between us.
        Sadly though, our friendship couldn’t last long. Another animal my
family took a liking to were dogs – and not just any dogs, hunting dogs.
So you can imagine what happened when, every once in a while, our dogs
escaped from their cages and found a bunch of little birds roaming fancy-
free around the yard. Yep. Dinner. And that’s exactly what happened the
day Harriet died. I didn’t blame our dogs; they didn’t know. But I vowed
to always remember Harriet and the gift of friendship she gave. Other
chickens came along, but none quite like my little Rhode-Island Red
hen, Harriet. And see? It’s been 16 years and yet, every once in a while, I
still find myself talking about her.
By Friday…
•   Rough drafts due
•   2-3 paragraphs
•   Neatly typed or handwritten
•   Double-spaced (skip lines!)
•   Proofread

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Personal narrative rough draft

  • 2. My example: My pet chicken, Harriet The outside story: The inside story: 1. Family got chickens. They were all 1. I was a lonely kid. The chickens twitchy and jittery, except Harriet. were good company for me; they Harriet warmed up to me; I gave me joy! earned her trust. 2. I really grew to love Harriet. We 2. We were good friends, she would became attached. I looked find me and let me pick her up. forward to seeing her every day. 3. I was horrified. How could this be? 3. Pulled up to driveway to see that My heart was sad, though I was Harriet was killed when my dogs also grateful for the times we got out and ate her! Soon had together. Having a pet enough, I made a new chicken chicken will be a fond memory friend, Chicken Little. forever.
  • 3. My beloved Harriet… For many years growing up, my family had a thing with farm animals. We spent many a weekend at the Saturday auction, traipsing home with new chickens, ducks, or geese in toe. It was all pretty normal and unspecial, you could say…until Harriet came along. Most of the chickens we had were twitchy, startled little creatures who resisted any sort of contact with us. But Harriet, Harriet was different. Unlike the others, she warmed up to me and would eat from my hand. She even let me pet her and pick her up in my arms. For an often-bored, only child like me, having a pet chicken greet me after school was like a dream come true. It didn’t take long for me and Harriet to grow a unique bond between us. Sadly though, our friendship couldn’t last long. Another animal my family took a liking to were dogs – and not just any dogs, hunting dogs. So you can imagine what happened when, every once in a while, our dogs escaped from their cages and found a bunch of little birds roaming fancy- free around the yard. Yep. Dinner. And that’s exactly what happened the day Harriet died. I didn’t blame our dogs; they didn’t know. But I vowed to always remember Harriet and the gift of friendship she gave. Other chickens came along, but none quite like my little Rhode-Island Red hen, Harriet. And see? It’s been 16 years and yet, every once in a while, I still find myself talking about her.
  • 4. By Friday… • Rough drafts due • 2-3 paragraphs • Neatly typed or handwritten • Double-spaced (skip lines!) • Proofread