Personal Statement Rough Draft 1

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Personal Statement Rough Draft 1

  1. 1. Rough Draft 1
  2. 2.  Have your story checked by a member of your group. Write “corrected by: <your name>” somewhere on the page where you have room to write notes. Answer any questions asked in complete sentences under your name.
  3. 3.  Does it give a background to the story being told? Does the background belong to the story being told?
  4. 4.  Is there a story being told? Is the story told well? Explain.
  5. 5.  These Personal Statements are supposed to be stories that defines who they are. Explain what the author is trying to say about their character through their story. Is it explained well? Explain. Can you tell which prompt they wrote about? If so, which one? Did they write about it well?
  6. 6.  Handwritten? In three paragraphs? Given a correct heading and title? Written in black or blue ink? Persuasive?
  7. 7.  Explain three things that you thought were good in their essay.
  8. 8.  Give and explain three recommendations on three parts of their personal statement that can use work.
  9. 9.  When a personal statement was checked, give it back to the author. Authors: Consider the notes made for you, and rewrite your story into rough draft 2. Have Rough Draft 2 typed & ready to be checked by next time.

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