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Engaging students to express themselves,
learn about each other and strengthen their voice
WHY YWP IS NEEDED

 More than half of Vermont’s students cannot write at a
 proficient level ( the numbers are worse nationally) ...

           ... meaning they cannot adequately express
           themselves and cannot fully engage in learning.

 The lowest performers are boys from economically
 disadvantaged backgrounds.

 By neglecting their writing skills, we are helping them fail.
WHY YWP WORKS

 To help students write better, YWP:

     creates authentic audiences for student work;

     provides peer-to-peer learning environments;

     gives students a sense of purpose; and

     provides teachers with digital tools and mentoring.
WHAT YWP DOES

YWP began as a newspaper feature. As an independent
nonprofit, it now has four programs:

     YWP Newspaper Series

     youngwritersproject.org, a student-led writing
     community

     The Schools Project

     Workshops, training and events
THE CONTENT -
                  PUBLISHING STUDENT WORK




  But it all begins with an authentic audience ...

                                  ... greater than one.
THE DETAILS -
                      PUBLISHING STUDENT WORK


Each week, YWP publishes
work in 6 daily newspapers
and 3 weeklies.

  Since September, 2006,
  YWP has received 21,000
  submissions ...

     ... and published 3,700.
THE CONTENT -
                PUBLISHING STUDENT WORK




  And YWP works with other partners ...

           ... like Vermont Public Radio ...

    ... and arts organizations that present student
                     work on stage.
THE CONTENT -
                PUBLISHING STUDENT WORK




  Like the Vermont Symphony Orchestra ...

       Her ghost restlessly haunts
       the castle.
THE CONTENT -
                 PUBLISHING STUDENT WORK




  And unusual partners as well, like the Vermont
  Symphony Orchestra ...

       Her ghost restlessly haunts
       the castle.
THE DETAILS -
                      YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG


Civil, online space is the
primary authentic audience....

      3,500 active
      student users

      30,000 posts,
      75,000 comments
      a year

      50-75 college
      mentors a semester
THE CONTENT -
       YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG
THE CONTENT -
                       YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG



Teens write about
teen stuff... angst,
 school, sports,
humor, movies ....

   They create,
     imagine,
  collaborate ...
THE CONTENT -
                   YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG


And they
strengthen
their voice ....
THE CONTENT -
                   YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG


And they
strengthen
their voice ....
THE CONTENT -
       YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG




            They also engage in discussion
            on many topics ... like
            profanity.

              This query about profanity
              intended to “shock” yielded
              43 thoughtful comments ...
              and a community decision.
THE CONTENT -
                    YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG

And suicide...

  This was one of 150 posts
  after a 15-year-old high
  school student took his
  own life.

  “There are some things I
  don’t understand...”
THE CONTENT -
                    YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG

And suicide...

  This was one of 150 posts
  after a 15-year-old high
  school student took his
  own life.

  “There are some things I
  don’t understand...”
THE CONTENT -
                     YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG

                            Where I’m from
                            I am from the best days
                            And the worst.
 They also                  I am from a family of addiction
                            To things like weed

 create                     And worse such as coke and crack,
                            The hunger burning within
                            From watching the bigger people devour food,
 startling                  From garages and campers so cold
                            And many homes that didn't last long enough,
 pictures of                I am from the smiles of friends
                            The heys!

 their reality ...          And the how are you?'s?
                            The hugs I needed
                            To let out my sorrow and pain,
                            From friends who understood
                            And the family that cared to be around,
                            From trying to fight off problems,
                            From feeling unwanted,
                            The constant moving from home to home
                            From one family friends house to another,
                            I am from one out of five uncles that were really there
                            A father in jail most of my life
                            And grandmothers who disliked me for who my parents are
                            I am from many things
                            From good and bad,
                            But mostly
                            I am from me.
                            !
THE CONTENT -
                     YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG

                            Where I’m from
                            I am from the best days
                            And the worst.
 They also                  I am from a family of addiction
                            To things like weed

 create                     And worse such as coke and crack,
                            The hunger burning within
                            From watching the bigger people devour food,
 startling                  From garages and campers so cold
                            And many homes that didn't last long enough,
 pictures of                I am from the smiles of friends
                            The heys!

 their reality ...          And the how are you?'s?
                            The hugs I needed
                            To let out my sorrow and pain,
                            From friends who understood
                            And the family that cared to be around,
                            From trying to fight off problems,
                            From feeling unwanted,
                            The constant moving from home to home
                            From one family friends house to another,
                            I am from one out of five uncles that were really there
                            A father in jail most of my life
                            And grandmothers who disliked me for who my parents are
                            I am from many things
                            From good and bad,
                            But mostly
                            I am from me.
                            !
THE DETAILS -
                       YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG


 In civil, online space ...

      ... students wrote,
    provided supportive
       feedback, built
       community and
       collaborated ....

             ... on their own.
THE DETAILS -
                      THE SCHOOLS PROJECT



So YWP developed a
leading-edge, Web-
based writing
program that served
165 teachers and
6,500 students ...

     ... in 2009/10
THE DETAILS -
                      THE SCHOOLS PROJECT



In these classrooms
students ...

   share their
   homework ...
THE DETAILS -
                    THE SCHOOLS PROJECT




 give and receive
 feedback and
 help from each
 other ...
THE DETAILS -
              THE SCHOOLS PROJECT



... and
incorporate
multimedia
into their
writing.
THE DETAILS -
                            THE SCHOOLS PROJECT


Teachers, assign work ...

... make broad
suggestions for all to
see ...

... or send individual
assessments privately.
THE DETAILS -
                          THE SCHOOLS PROJECT


YWP helps teachers ...

    think differently,

   give more control to
   students,

   go to where students
   are engaged and

   integrate technology
   into curriculum.
THE DETAILS -
                               THE SCHOOLS PROJECT



 Teachers say taking their students online has ...

      transformed them ...
      given them new ideas ...
      made them more effective ...
      connected them more closely with their students.
      helped them integrate technology into curriculum.
THE IMPACT -
                              THE SCHOOLS PROJECT



 “Because I was inspired, challenged and forever changed,
 my students grew.”

 “Radically changed our teaching of writing.”

 “I’m more willing to just jump in and try something.”

 “Forced me into a constant state of reflection ... my
 teaching improved along the way.”
THE IMPACT -
                                THE SCHOOLS PROJECT




Students who write online ...

    gain a purposeful
    audience -- their peers;

    build supportive learning
    communities;

    try harder; and

    become better writers.
THE IMPACT -
               THE SCHOOLS PROJECT



Here is what
students
say...
THE IMPACT -
                                  THE SCHOOLS PROJECT




  Think of some adjectives to describe students’
  attitudes about writing in that video ...
THE IMPACT -
                                    THE SCHOOLS PROJECT




  Freedom ... motivated ... engaged ... confident ...
  inspired ... supportive ... intrigued ... empowered ...

                           ... Those are a few we’ve heard.

  Imagine; you are describing how kids feel about
  writing in school.
WHAT IS NEXT?


 There are steps you, as teachers, can take:

     Create audiences for your students’ best
     work ... the halls, school publications, a
     community event, your local newspaper ...
WHAT IS NEXT?


   Get your students online with blogs
   (wordpress.com, edublogs.org, pbwiki), social
   classrooms (Ning, 21classes) or in your school’s
   learning management system (Edu2.0, Moodle or
   GoogleDocs) ...
WHAT IS NEXT?



   Or, if you are in VT or NH, or you want to do an
   out-of-state pilot ....

                      ... give us a call.

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Ywp.org blc

  • 1. Engaging students to express themselves, learn about each other and strengthen their voice
  • 2. WHY YWP IS NEEDED More than half of Vermont’s students cannot write at a proficient level ( the numbers are worse nationally) ... ... meaning they cannot adequately express themselves and cannot fully engage in learning. The lowest performers are boys from economically disadvantaged backgrounds. By neglecting their writing skills, we are helping them fail.
  • 3. WHY YWP WORKS To help students write better, YWP: creates authentic audiences for student work; provides peer-to-peer learning environments; gives students a sense of purpose; and provides teachers with digital tools and mentoring.
  • 4. WHAT YWP DOES YWP began as a newspaper feature. As an independent nonprofit, it now has four programs: YWP Newspaper Series youngwritersproject.org, a student-led writing community The Schools Project Workshops, training and events
  • 5. THE CONTENT - PUBLISHING STUDENT WORK But it all begins with an authentic audience ... ... greater than one.
  • 6. THE DETAILS - PUBLISHING STUDENT WORK Each week, YWP publishes work in 6 daily newspapers and 3 weeklies. Since September, 2006, YWP has received 21,000 submissions ... ... and published 3,700.
  • 7. THE CONTENT - PUBLISHING STUDENT WORK And YWP works with other partners ... ... like Vermont Public Radio ... ... and arts organizations that present student work on stage.
  • 8. THE CONTENT - PUBLISHING STUDENT WORK Like the Vermont Symphony Orchestra ... Her ghost restlessly haunts the castle.
  • 9. THE CONTENT - PUBLISHING STUDENT WORK And unusual partners as well, like the Vermont Symphony Orchestra ... Her ghost restlessly haunts the castle.
  • 10. THE DETAILS - YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG Civil, online space is the primary authentic audience.... 3,500 active student users 30,000 posts, 75,000 comments a year 50-75 college mentors a semester
  • 11. THE CONTENT - YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG
  • 12. THE CONTENT - YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG Teens write about teen stuff... angst, school, sports, humor, movies .... They create, imagine, collaborate ...
  • 13. THE CONTENT - YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG And they strengthen their voice ....
  • 14. THE CONTENT - YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG And they strengthen their voice ....
  • 15. THE CONTENT - YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG They also engage in discussion on many topics ... like profanity. This query about profanity intended to “shock” yielded 43 thoughtful comments ... and a community decision.
  • 16. THE CONTENT - YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG And suicide... This was one of 150 posts after a 15-year-old high school student took his own life. “There are some things I don’t understand...”
  • 17. THE CONTENT - YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG And suicide... This was one of 150 posts after a 15-year-old high school student took his own life. “There are some things I don’t understand...”
  • 18. THE CONTENT - YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG Where I’m from I am from the best days And the worst. They also I am from a family of addiction To things like weed create And worse such as coke and crack, The hunger burning within From watching the bigger people devour food, startling From garages and campers so cold And many homes that didn't last long enough, pictures of I am from the smiles of friends The heys! their reality ... And the how are you?'s? The hugs I needed To let out my sorrow and pain, From friends who understood And the family that cared to be around, From trying to fight off problems, From feeling unwanted, The constant moving from home to home From one family friends house to another, I am from one out of five uncles that were really there A father in jail most of my life And grandmothers who disliked me for who my parents are I am from many things From good and bad, But mostly I am from me. !
  • 19. THE CONTENT - YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG Where I’m from I am from the best days And the worst. They also I am from a family of addiction To things like weed create And worse such as coke and crack, The hunger burning within From watching the bigger people devour food, startling From garages and campers so cold And many homes that didn't last long enough, pictures of I am from the smiles of friends The heys! their reality ... And the how are you?'s? The hugs I needed To let out my sorrow and pain, From friends who understood And the family that cared to be around, From trying to fight off problems, From feeling unwanted, The constant moving from home to home From one family friends house to another, I am from one out of five uncles that were really there A father in jail most of my life And grandmothers who disliked me for who my parents are I am from many things From good and bad, But mostly I am from me. !
  • 20. THE DETAILS - YOUNGWRITERSPROJECT.ORG In civil, online space ... ... students wrote, provided supportive feedback, built community and collaborated .... ... on their own.
  • 21. THE DETAILS - THE SCHOOLS PROJECT So YWP developed a leading-edge, Web- based writing program that served 165 teachers and 6,500 students ... ... in 2009/10
  • 22. THE DETAILS - THE SCHOOLS PROJECT In these classrooms students ... share their homework ...
  • 23. THE DETAILS - THE SCHOOLS PROJECT give and receive feedback and help from each other ...
  • 24. THE DETAILS - THE SCHOOLS PROJECT ... and incorporate multimedia into their writing.
  • 25. THE DETAILS - THE SCHOOLS PROJECT Teachers, assign work ... ... make broad suggestions for all to see ... ... or send individual assessments privately.
  • 26. THE DETAILS - THE SCHOOLS PROJECT YWP helps teachers ... think differently, give more control to students, go to where students are engaged and integrate technology into curriculum.
  • 27. THE DETAILS - THE SCHOOLS PROJECT Teachers say taking their students online has ... transformed them ... given them new ideas ... made them more effective ... connected them more closely with their students. helped them integrate technology into curriculum.
  • 28. THE IMPACT - THE SCHOOLS PROJECT “Because I was inspired, challenged and forever changed, my students grew.” “Radically changed our teaching of writing.” “I’m more willing to just jump in and try something.” “Forced me into a constant state of reflection ... my teaching improved along the way.”
  • 29. THE IMPACT - THE SCHOOLS PROJECT Students who write online ... gain a purposeful audience -- their peers; build supportive learning communities; try harder; and become better writers.
  • 30. THE IMPACT - THE SCHOOLS PROJECT Here is what students say...
  • 31. THE IMPACT - THE SCHOOLS PROJECT Think of some adjectives to describe students’ attitudes about writing in that video ...
  • 32. THE IMPACT - THE SCHOOLS PROJECT Freedom ... motivated ... engaged ... confident ... inspired ... supportive ... intrigued ... empowered ... ... Those are a few we’ve heard. Imagine; you are describing how kids feel about writing in school.
  • 33. WHAT IS NEXT? There are steps you, as teachers, can take: Create audiences for your students’ best work ... the halls, school publications, a community event, your local newspaper ...
  • 34. WHAT IS NEXT? Get your students online with blogs (wordpress.com, edublogs.org, pbwiki), social classrooms (Ning, 21classes) or in your school’s learning management system (Edu2.0, Moodle or GoogleDocs) ...
  • 35. WHAT IS NEXT? Or, if you are in VT or NH, or you want to do an out-of-state pilot .... ... give us a call.

Editor's Notes