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Presented by Meghan Shanahan and Nathan Sellers
All of the critiques that we analyzed followed a general format, with the 
exception of a few details from “A Girl is a Half-Formed Thing” as it wasn’t 
the script of a play, but a critique of a book. 
The General Format; 
Location the play was performed 
Background information on the play 
Information on audience/reaction of audience 
Structure of the writing/critique of subject matter 
Pros and cons of writing/Purpose of the writing 
Comparisons to other playwriting 
Conclusions made by the critic
What I immediately noticed about the review of A Girl is a 
Half-Formed Thing was that it presented the novel in an interesting 
light, and one that seemed to mimic the feel of the novel itself. It 
was informative and gave a broad general scope of the novel, but it 
wasn't just a summary or a review. It allowed me to truly 
understand what the text's shortcomings and achievements were 
while also telling parts of the story. There didn't seem to be a set 
"format” as much as other reviews, so much as it seemed to allow a 
flow of words and literary devices while presenting information 
that would be helpful to those who read the review. 
This critique used many direct quotes, and the main 
character is revealed as a young girl struggling to understand why 
her family is so strict regarding religion and her rebellion against it. 
The author’s development of characters seems profound despite a 
cliché story, and while her style wasn't "brought up from scratch" it 
didn't need to be to find success.
While the structures of our other critiques were 
straightforward, this one is written to mimic the style 
of the book. 
Since this example from The New Yorker is critiquing a 
book instead of a play’s script, it’s expected that the 
format would be different 
The mimicry of format allows readers to have a better 
connection to the writing and makes them more likely 
to understand references to the novel in context
The Chicago Tribune provides a well-rounded critique of a 
newer play from the writers of the television satire “South Park” and 
offers a deeper view onto something that some would consider vulgar. 
It starts off by describing what kind of audience this play is most likely 
to attract, which in this case, was much of the audience it's authors 
already have from the hit Comedy Central show and all of those 
individuals are looking for a cheap laugh and are most likely not the 
harshest of critics for a musical. 
While this was their most interesting point, they also go on to 
describe the cast members, the pros and cons of the show, and 
presenting how well it was all put together. The play itself touches on 
subject matter that no other production is willing to include, and 
many consider the shock humor crude and something unwelcome to 
the Broadway, so the critic is intent on showing the value of this. With 
reviews like this promoting this production, it's only assumed that 
there would be opposition (such as this critique) to such a touchy 
satire despite overwhelming ticket sales, so it often depends on the 
audience when it comes to deciding if it’s brilliant or brash.
The Book of Mormon is a unique play in the sense that 
there are two distinct audiences that would be 
interested in seeing it. 
“South Park” fan base audience – generally just looking 
for a quick laugh 
Broadway “regulars – typically more critical of the 
content of the play and how it is portrayed 
Because of these two audiences, the critic is careful to 
include specifics about the writing that both would find 
enjoyable or displeasing
Although the length of my article: "Not Exactly Preaching to the Choir", is 
not one of notable aspects, it does do a good job at analyzing the very Off- 
Off Broadway, Queens even, play: "Get Mad at Sin". At the beginning he 
mentions where the play is and how that may effect how the crowd might 
receive the play. Historical context is given next, that the reader may have 
not known before. He then describes the play itself in just a paragraph. 
Although this isn't much, he knows what he is doing. 
Somehow I feel like I know I can see this play being performed... 
Perhaps it's the fact that I've seen pastors preach, and it's a one man type 
act so there isn't much left to the imagination. He then explains how 
much, to a certain degree, the director's genius. Finally, he explains how 
the audience won't "(throw) out their miniskirts to avoid the sinful 
repercussions, but the sound of the audience did tell a story". This 
suggests that they audience was somewhat allowed to think about their 
personal choices, with respect to why they do what they do; self-determination 
for their own actions and those of others and why they do 
things. "Listen closely and you might have heard a type of conversation".
Unlike the previous critiques, this one actually 
describes the impact of the play on the audience in the 
perspective of a moral to be learned 
Because of the genre of the play, being a sort of one-man 
act, it’s purpose is based around emotion and a lesson 
that’s being portrayed 
This is effortlessly woven into the rest of the critique and 
adds a new dimension to the summary of the writing
Jones, Chris. "The Book on "The Book" -- Chicago Tribune." The Book on "The Book" 
The Chicago Tribune, 20 Dec. 2012. Web. 12 Oct. 2014. 
<http://graphics.chicagotribune.com/mormon/review.html>. 
Mahne, Theodore. "Vulgar and Tasteless 'Book of Mormon' Opens Broadway Series at 
Saenger." 
NOLA.com. NOLA, 17 Oct. 2013. Web. 12 Oct. 2014. 
<http://www.nola.com/arts/index.ssf/2013/10-vulgar_and_tasteless_book_of_m.html>. 
Zinoman, Jason. "Not Exactly Preaching to the Choir." 
The New York Times. The New York Times, 1 June 2010. Web. 16 Oct. 2014. 
<http://www.nytimes.com/2010/06/02/theater/reviews/02getmad.html>. 
Wood, James. "Useless Prayers." New Yorker 29 Sept. 2014: 80-82. Print.

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A Critique of Playwriting

  • 1. Presented by Meghan Shanahan and Nathan Sellers
  • 2. All of the critiques that we analyzed followed a general format, with the exception of a few details from “A Girl is a Half-Formed Thing” as it wasn’t the script of a play, but a critique of a book. The General Format; Location the play was performed Background information on the play Information on audience/reaction of audience Structure of the writing/critique of subject matter Pros and cons of writing/Purpose of the writing Comparisons to other playwriting Conclusions made by the critic
  • 3. What I immediately noticed about the review of A Girl is a Half-Formed Thing was that it presented the novel in an interesting light, and one that seemed to mimic the feel of the novel itself. It was informative and gave a broad general scope of the novel, but it wasn't just a summary or a review. It allowed me to truly understand what the text's shortcomings and achievements were while also telling parts of the story. There didn't seem to be a set "format” as much as other reviews, so much as it seemed to allow a flow of words and literary devices while presenting information that would be helpful to those who read the review. This critique used many direct quotes, and the main character is revealed as a young girl struggling to understand why her family is so strict regarding religion and her rebellion against it. The author’s development of characters seems profound despite a cliché story, and while her style wasn't "brought up from scratch" it didn't need to be to find success.
  • 4. While the structures of our other critiques were straightforward, this one is written to mimic the style of the book. Since this example from The New Yorker is critiquing a book instead of a play’s script, it’s expected that the format would be different The mimicry of format allows readers to have a better connection to the writing and makes them more likely to understand references to the novel in context
  • 5. The Chicago Tribune provides a well-rounded critique of a newer play from the writers of the television satire “South Park” and offers a deeper view onto something that some would consider vulgar. It starts off by describing what kind of audience this play is most likely to attract, which in this case, was much of the audience it's authors already have from the hit Comedy Central show and all of those individuals are looking for a cheap laugh and are most likely not the harshest of critics for a musical. While this was their most interesting point, they also go on to describe the cast members, the pros and cons of the show, and presenting how well it was all put together. The play itself touches on subject matter that no other production is willing to include, and many consider the shock humor crude and something unwelcome to the Broadway, so the critic is intent on showing the value of this. With reviews like this promoting this production, it's only assumed that there would be opposition (such as this critique) to such a touchy satire despite overwhelming ticket sales, so it often depends on the audience when it comes to deciding if it’s brilliant or brash.
  • 6. The Book of Mormon is a unique play in the sense that there are two distinct audiences that would be interested in seeing it. “South Park” fan base audience – generally just looking for a quick laugh Broadway “regulars – typically more critical of the content of the play and how it is portrayed Because of these two audiences, the critic is careful to include specifics about the writing that both would find enjoyable or displeasing
  • 7. Although the length of my article: "Not Exactly Preaching to the Choir", is not one of notable aspects, it does do a good job at analyzing the very Off- Off Broadway, Queens even, play: "Get Mad at Sin". At the beginning he mentions where the play is and how that may effect how the crowd might receive the play. Historical context is given next, that the reader may have not known before. He then describes the play itself in just a paragraph. Although this isn't much, he knows what he is doing. Somehow I feel like I know I can see this play being performed... Perhaps it's the fact that I've seen pastors preach, and it's a one man type act so there isn't much left to the imagination. He then explains how much, to a certain degree, the director's genius. Finally, he explains how the audience won't "(throw) out their miniskirts to avoid the sinful repercussions, but the sound of the audience did tell a story". This suggests that they audience was somewhat allowed to think about their personal choices, with respect to why they do what they do; self-determination for their own actions and those of others and why they do things. "Listen closely and you might have heard a type of conversation".
  • 8. Unlike the previous critiques, this one actually describes the impact of the play on the audience in the perspective of a moral to be learned Because of the genre of the play, being a sort of one-man act, it’s purpose is based around emotion and a lesson that’s being portrayed This is effortlessly woven into the rest of the critique and adds a new dimension to the summary of the writing
  • 9. Jones, Chris. "The Book on "The Book" -- Chicago Tribune." The Book on "The Book" The Chicago Tribune, 20 Dec. 2012. Web. 12 Oct. 2014. <http://graphics.chicagotribune.com/mormon/review.html>. Mahne, Theodore. "Vulgar and Tasteless 'Book of Mormon' Opens Broadway Series at Saenger." NOLA.com. NOLA, 17 Oct. 2013. Web. 12 Oct. 2014. <http://www.nola.com/arts/index.ssf/2013/10-vulgar_and_tasteless_book_of_m.html>. Zinoman, Jason. "Not Exactly Preaching to the Choir." The New York Times. The New York Times, 1 June 2010. Web. 16 Oct. 2014. <http://www.nytimes.com/2010/06/02/theater/reviews/02getmad.html>. Wood, James. "Useless Prayers." New Yorker 29 Sept. 2014: 80-82. Print.