The audience feedback we got from our class when showing them our presentation.

1. Audience Feedback

2. Is this idea suitable for our
target audience?
 Yes, the setting appeals to the target audience
 Yes, suitable for target audience because
students will respond well to entropic
elements, finding it almost comical. The masks will
go down a treat.
 Yes, I believe it is suitable for the chosen age
sector. It has ideas and styles that are known to
be quite popular with older teens.
 I think that if you make a more adult version of
Alice in wonderland, otherwise it is a bit too
fairytale for 16-25.

3. What do you think about
our idea?
 You could use a few more locations, like fields or
urban, but it’s a very good idea and creative.
 Original idea screams creativity I’m very
impressed, the combination of location and
costume make the dream more realistic.
 Good idea, the mixture of dream and reality is an
idea that interests many, and it makes videos
much more interesting to the viewer.
 I think it’s a clever perspective.

4. Does it sound achievable
with college equipment?
 Use drama costumes for a more abstract
atmosphere. May need good software – final cut
express.
 Yes/no as some of the special effects may not be
achievable with college cameras, however the
general filming seems possible.
 Partly, with the equipment available it may be
difficult to make reality and dream seem different.
Black and white for the dream world may be a
suggestion.
 Yes but will be different to change into dreams from
reality.

5. Does it sound plausible and
will it sell?
 Maybe have some performance based shots.
 I think that the video would sell to your target
audience because it sounds like a lot of fun to
watch.
 To the target audience I think it would sell well.
 Yes as you have obviously put a lot of research
into it.

6. What do you think about or
locations?
 Possible locations –
castle, streets, hospital, abandoned shacks.
 Yes, perfect location for the whole trippy, Alice in
wonderland theme, well done!
 Yes, the forest setting fits perfectly with the style
of the song.
 Possible locations – Church Stretton forest, lakes
etc.

7. Summary
 Overall, I think that the feedback was very
positive, and I have confidence that the video
will sell well, and be enjoyed by the target
audience.
 A clear issue is showing the transition between
dream world and reality. I like the idea of black
and white for the dream world, but this will have
to be discussed with the group.
 Also, some of the possible other locations
suggested have presented interesting ideas, and
we will follow this up and add in different
locations.