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Basketball vs. Soccer Essay
Comparison and Contrast Essay Basketball and soccer are two of the most played and enjoyable
sports in the world. They both have professional leagues that attract millions of audience. People
can watch both of them on television, but also play them for recreation and health. Basketball
and soccer games are interesting, good for the body, and healthy, but they are also different in
many ways. In both Soccer and Basketball the game is played with teams. Soccer has eleven
players on the field at one for each team, whereas in basketball you only have five on the court for
each team. (1) There are only five positions for a basketball games that includes two guards, two
forwards, and one center.(1) On the other hand, soccer has many...show more content...
Another aspect between these two sports is equipment. The first difference is the field these two
sports play in. Soccer is played on a natural or artificial grass that is 120 yards long and 80 yards
wide. (1) Basketball is played on a wooden floor 94 feet long and 50 feet wide. (1) These two
sports are played with a ball; however, the ball is different in each sport. Soccer regularly uses a
thickly padded, smooth leather ball with black and white spots on it; basketball typically uses an
orange leather ball. (2) Soccer and basketball require different equipment for athletes to compete.
These two sports are similar in many ways. People love basketball and soccer because it contains
competitiveness. Both of these sports motivate people to stay healthy and fit. (2) Also both
sports have one objective and that is to score more points than the opposing team to win games.
(1)Every league has playoffs for the best teams to compete against each other. Competing in the
playoffs will show the best team and the best team is rewarded with a championship trophy. In
conclusion, soccer and basketball are good sports to play. Some might say basketball is only for
tall people; however people of all heights can enjoy it if they put in the extra effort in any sport.
Also some might say soccer leads to many injuries; nevertheless our technology is so advanced that
it can help
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Essay about Crime
Crime
In general the definition of a crime is an act punishable by law, usually considered an evil act.
Crime refers to many types of misconduct forbidden by law. Crimes include such things as murder,
stealing a car, resisting arrest, possession or dealing of illegal drugs, being nude in public , drunk
driving, and bank robbery. Crime is an act that has been timeless and has been committed practically
since the start of time. For example, ever since Cain killed his brother Abel (B.C.), people being
charged with witchcraft in the 1600's, prostitution, to the current crimes of modern day(A.D.). Even
though crime has existed throughout time it has progressed and branched out taking many types
forms....show more content...
Crimes are frequently classified according to their seriousness as felonies or misdemeanors.
Generally, felonies are more serious than misdemeanors. Under the federal criminal law system,
felonies are crimes for which the punishment is death or imprisonment for more than a year. A
misdemeanor is punishable by a fine or by imprisonment for less than a year. In most states persons
convicted of felonies are sent to state prisons, while those guilty of misdemeanors serve their
sentence in city, or county jails, or correction houses.
Crimes against people include assault, kidnapping, murder, and sexual attacks. Such crimes usually
bring severe punishments. Crimes against property include arson, automobile theft, burglary,
embezzlement, forgery, fraud, larceny, and vandalism. In most cases, these crimes carry lighter
penalties than the crimes set against the person. Robbery is the crime most difficult to classify. The
law considers robbery a crime against the person or against the property, according to the case.
Robbery may involve simply stealing property from another person, but when a personal encounter
occurs between the robber and his victim, it may include violence and bodily harm. This usually
occurs during muggings or other strong–arm robberies.
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Essay on Listening for Understanding
Listening for Understanding
Listening is an important form of communication. Unfortunately, many people who do not know
how to listen believe they can listen well. They often say "I have been doing this all of my life of
course I can listen". Listening is not inherited, or a personality trait, it is a skill that must be worked
on and practiced.
Anybody can become a good listener if they are committed to learn how and are willing to work
hard. The first mistake that people tend to make when listening is to not make any type of
comments while listening. They tend to just stand there and listen while the speaker talks. This can
become very frustrating for the speaker and the listener. While the speaker may feel like he isn't being
...show more content...
Try to listen to what the speaker is trying to say and not to what is making you angry. Summarize
the main points of what the speaker was saying so that the focus is on the speaker and not you. It
is always important to try and listen objectively no matter what the speaker is trying to say. By
doing this, you will become a better listener and more able to communicate with others concerning
subjects that might normally make you angry to the point that you would no longer be able to carry
on a working conversation with that individual. This will make you especially valuable in the
management industry where, as a rule, people will come to you with problems that need to be
resolved.
It is important to listen carefully and to withhold personal judgement. This is especially true when the
subject matter or the position taken by the speaker is making you angry. In this circumstance, your
interjections, if not thoroughly thought through, may just make the person defensive. Problems can
also arise if you are too nice and give a lot of positive comments. People like it when they are being
praised. This can alter what the speaker is saying. If you continue to give positive comments the
speaker will continue to want more of them from you. If you want to find out what the speaker is
really thinking you need to listen and withhold evaluation.
As well as withholding evaluation one must also show patience. While many
Get more content on HelpWriting.net
Essay On Harmony
What is Harmony, and how does it play in society? My definition of Harmony is a relationship in
which people of many different cultures exist together or live in the same city without destroying
one another. Also, people from the same culture can view things differently, for example, the new
generation of teenagers are very attached to technology while the generations of the past are still not
accustomed to all the different changes that are happening simultaneously with technology. The
definition of Harmony is not the same as it was decades ago, Confucius explained that in order to
live in Harmony, an individual had to be an ideal person and by being an ideal person they had to
listen to what their ancestors had said to them and follow...show more content...
This relates to the way that I interpreted Harmony because humans just want to be understood so
that people from different cultures can live in the same setting without destroying one another. One
way in which society can live together is by practicing cultural barrowing, which is when an
individual or a group of individuals show appreciation for a culture that is not their own. Secondly,
from the article titled the good as Harmony, the author, Sidney Zink states "The term seems to
serve partly in an effort to develop a substitute for the traditional ethics of value" (1). I certainly
agree with Zink's statement, because Harmony can also be looked as traditional ethics, if an
individual wants to live in peace, he must ignore all the negatives that surround him that interfere
with their lifestyle. The term Harmony has gradually changed its meaning throughout the years, the
article titled The Good as Harmony states "Plato and Aristotle conceived the harmonious relations
to secure a certain relation among the various parts of human nature or the state, whereas the
modern writer speaks in terms of interest and values" (Zink 1). In the past, Confucius explained
that in order to become an ideal individual, we had to listen to what our ancestors were telling us;
to be respectful to one another, to obey and to never lie. Today, living in Harmony is being
Get more content on HelpWriting.net
Academic Dishonesty Essay
In the past decade, professors across the country have noticed an alarming new trend–academic
dishonesty is on the rise. More than half of college students surveyed admit to at least one instance
of serious cheating in the past year (McCabe and Pavela). Information is incredibly easy to access on
the Internet, and devices such as iPhones put that power, literally, into the palms of students' hands.
Many students entering universities today face extraordinary amounts of pressure for results
academically, leading them to believe that cheating is necessary to succeed. This mentality is further
cemented by examples in mass media, from professional athletes to CEOs cheating in order to get
ahead. To battle this trend, colleges across the...show more content...
According to Charles A. Perkins, Ph.D. and Anne A. Skleder, Ph.D, "most systems presume that the
great majority are honorable and honest and that the Code is in place to punish violators. This
approach is faulty because it is based upon the (false) presumption that the rules are understood and
built on a foundation well established prior to arriving at college." Students come to college with
bad habits developed in high school regarding their completing their schoolwork honestly. Also,
many already feel that cheating can be justified on a case–by–case basis, so honor codes do not
actually dissuade them from doing it.Also, I do not feel that it is the place of colleges to impose
moral standards on their students. For example, the students at Brigham YoungUniversity face
regulations on every part of their lives, from their academic work, to their personal appearance, to
their sexual expression. According to Stanley Fish in his work Save the World On Your Own Time,
this type of education is not the university's job, "the practices of responsible citizenship and moral
behavior should be encouraged in our young adults, but it's not the business of the university to do
so" (Fish 67). If honor codes tread into this territory, it serves the exact opposite of its intended
purpose. Honor codes made to protect the integrity of the university will actually undermine it when
they try to teach morality. Fish calls professors who try to cultivate
Get more content on HelpWriting.net

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  • 1. Basketball vs. Soccer Essay Comparison and Contrast Essay Basketball and soccer are two of the most played and enjoyable sports in the world. They both have professional leagues that attract millions of audience. People can watch both of them on television, but also play them for recreation and health. Basketball and soccer games are interesting, good for the body, and healthy, but they are also different in many ways. In both Soccer and Basketball the game is played with teams. Soccer has eleven players on the field at one for each team, whereas in basketball you only have five on the court for each team. (1) There are only five positions for a basketball games that includes two guards, two forwards, and one center.(1) On the other hand, soccer has many...show more content... Another aspect between these two sports is equipment. The first difference is the field these two sports play in. Soccer is played on a natural or artificial grass that is 120 yards long and 80 yards wide. (1) Basketball is played on a wooden floor 94 feet long and 50 feet wide. (1) These two sports are played with a ball; however, the ball is different in each sport. Soccer regularly uses a thickly padded, smooth leather ball with black and white spots on it; basketball typically uses an orange leather ball. (2) Soccer and basketball require different equipment for athletes to compete. These two sports are similar in many ways. People love basketball and soccer because it contains competitiveness. Both of these sports motivate people to stay healthy and fit. (2) Also both sports have one objective and that is to score more points than the opposing team to win games. (1)Every league has playoffs for the best teams to compete against each other. Competing in the playoffs will show the best team and the best team is rewarded with a championship trophy. In conclusion, soccer and basketball are good sports to play. Some might say basketball is only for tall people; however people of all heights can enjoy it if they put in the extra effort in any sport. Also some might say soccer leads to many injuries; nevertheless our technology is so advanced that it can help Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 2. Essay about Crime Crime In general the definition of a crime is an act punishable by law, usually considered an evil act. Crime refers to many types of misconduct forbidden by law. Crimes include such things as murder, stealing a car, resisting arrest, possession or dealing of illegal drugs, being nude in public , drunk driving, and bank robbery. Crime is an act that has been timeless and has been committed practically since the start of time. For example, ever since Cain killed his brother Abel (B.C.), people being charged with witchcraft in the 1600's, prostitution, to the current crimes of modern day(A.D.). Even though crime has existed throughout time it has progressed and branched out taking many types forms....show more content... Crimes are frequently classified according to their seriousness as felonies or misdemeanors. Generally, felonies are more serious than misdemeanors. Under the federal criminal law system, felonies are crimes for which the punishment is death or imprisonment for more than a year. A misdemeanor is punishable by a fine or by imprisonment for less than a year. In most states persons convicted of felonies are sent to state prisons, while those guilty of misdemeanors serve their sentence in city, or county jails, or correction houses. Crimes against people include assault, kidnapping, murder, and sexual attacks. Such crimes usually bring severe punishments. Crimes against property include arson, automobile theft, burglary, embezzlement, forgery, fraud, larceny, and vandalism. In most cases, these crimes carry lighter penalties than the crimes set against the person. Robbery is the crime most difficult to classify. The law considers robbery a crime against the person or against the property, according to the case. Robbery may involve simply stealing property from another person, but when a personal encounter occurs between the robber and his victim, it may include violence and bodily harm. This usually occurs during muggings or other strong–arm robberies. Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 3. Essay on Listening for Understanding Listening for Understanding Listening is an important form of communication. Unfortunately, many people who do not know how to listen believe they can listen well. They often say "I have been doing this all of my life of course I can listen". Listening is not inherited, or a personality trait, it is a skill that must be worked on and practiced. Anybody can become a good listener if they are committed to learn how and are willing to work hard. The first mistake that people tend to make when listening is to not make any type of comments while listening. They tend to just stand there and listen while the speaker talks. This can become very frustrating for the speaker and the listener. While the speaker may feel like he isn't being ...show more content... Try to listen to what the speaker is trying to say and not to what is making you angry. Summarize the main points of what the speaker was saying so that the focus is on the speaker and not you. It is always important to try and listen objectively no matter what the speaker is trying to say. By doing this, you will become a better listener and more able to communicate with others concerning subjects that might normally make you angry to the point that you would no longer be able to carry on a working conversation with that individual. This will make you especially valuable in the management industry where, as a rule, people will come to you with problems that need to be resolved. It is important to listen carefully and to withhold personal judgement. This is especially true when the subject matter or the position taken by the speaker is making you angry. In this circumstance, your interjections, if not thoroughly thought through, may just make the person defensive. Problems can also arise if you are too nice and give a lot of positive comments. People like it when they are being praised. This can alter what the speaker is saying. If you continue to give positive comments the speaker will continue to want more of them from you. If you want to find out what the speaker is really thinking you need to listen and withhold evaluation. As well as withholding evaluation one must also show patience. While many Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 4. Essay On Harmony What is Harmony, and how does it play in society? My definition of Harmony is a relationship in which people of many different cultures exist together or live in the same city without destroying one another. Also, people from the same culture can view things differently, for example, the new generation of teenagers are very attached to technology while the generations of the past are still not accustomed to all the different changes that are happening simultaneously with technology. The definition of Harmony is not the same as it was decades ago, Confucius explained that in order to live in Harmony, an individual had to be an ideal person and by being an ideal person they had to listen to what their ancestors had said to them and follow...show more content... This relates to the way that I interpreted Harmony because humans just want to be understood so that people from different cultures can live in the same setting without destroying one another. One way in which society can live together is by practicing cultural barrowing, which is when an individual or a group of individuals show appreciation for a culture that is not their own. Secondly, from the article titled the good as Harmony, the author, Sidney Zink states "The term seems to serve partly in an effort to develop a substitute for the traditional ethics of value" (1). I certainly agree with Zink's statement, because Harmony can also be looked as traditional ethics, if an individual wants to live in peace, he must ignore all the negatives that surround him that interfere with their lifestyle. The term Harmony has gradually changed its meaning throughout the years, the article titled The Good as Harmony states "Plato and Aristotle conceived the harmonious relations to secure a certain relation among the various parts of human nature or the state, whereas the modern writer speaks in terms of interest and values" (Zink 1). In the past, Confucius explained that in order to become an ideal individual, we had to listen to what our ancestors were telling us; to be respectful to one another, to obey and to never lie. Today, living in Harmony is being Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 5. Academic Dishonesty Essay In the past decade, professors across the country have noticed an alarming new trend–academic dishonesty is on the rise. More than half of college students surveyed admit to at least one instance of serious cheating in the past year (McCabe and Pavela). Information is incredibly easy to access on the Internet, and devices such as iPhones put that power, literally, into the palms of students' hands. Many students entering universities today face extraordinary amounts of pressure for results academically, leading them to believe that cheating is necessary to succeed. This mentality is further cemented by examples in mass media, from professional athletes to CEOs cheating in order to get ahead. To battle this trend, colleges across the...show more content... According to Charles A. Perkins, Ph.D. and Anne A. Skleder, Ph.D, "most systems presume that the great majority are honorable and honest and that the Code is in place to punish violators. This approach is faulty because it is based upon the (false) presumption that the rules are understood and built on a foundation well established prior to arriving at college." Students come to college with bad habits developed in high school regarding their completing their schoolwork honestly. Also, many already feel that cheating can be justified on a case–by–case basis, so honor codes do not actually dissuade them from doing it.Also, I do not feel that it is the place of colleges to impose moral standards on their students. For example, the students at Brigham YoungUniversity face regulations on every part of their lives, from their academic work, to their personal appearance, to their sexual expression. According to Stanley Fish in his work Save the World On Your Own Time, this type of education is not the university's job, "the practices of responsible citizenship and moral behavior should be encouraged in our young adults, but it's not the business of the university to do so" (Fish 67). If honor codes tread into this territory, it serves the exact opposite of its intended purpose. Honor codes made to protect the integrity of the university will actually undermine it when they try to teach morality. Fish calls professors who try to cultivate Get more content on HelpWriting.net