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Running Head: Research Summary and Ethical Considerations
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Research Summary and Ethical Considerations
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Hi, please review APA for your header sections. Please put your
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Student’s Name:
Institution:
Introduction
Background of the study
The main reason for the study has been to evaluate and analyze
the amount of knowledge patients have concerning hypertension
and how the patients take treatment and drugs which are related
to hypertension. The bottom line of the study is to evaluate how
different opinions on hypertension and the treatment of the
disease and how such opinions differ from one place to another
especially due to the difference in culture or ethnic of these
groups. In addition, the study will be evaluated on what the

research can do to improve the adherence to these groups.
Comment by Doreen Farley: For someone reading this that
doesn’t know what your subject is, how would they know what
study you were talking about. In your intro/background you
must either name the article that you are critiquing for the
reader or the author’s name.
For instance, the following information is a critique of a
qualitative study authored by…… The purpose of the study was
to…..
Smith & Smith stated…..
The study was conducted due to the…..
These are just examples to help you ensure that the reader
knows exactly what you are speaking about in terms of the
authors, name of study, purpose of study and why it was
conducted. I hope this helps. . Comment by Doreen Farley:
ethnicity Comment by Doreen Farley: Is it what the research
will do or what the proposed interventions would do to improve
adherence?
The research subject is equally important to nursing. In the
nursing field, we have to deal with different groups. Nurses
need to connect, convey, and care for the treatment
administrations of various patients having a place with various
societies and racial origin. In most cases, nurses are faced with
the challenge of dealing with one treatment at a time, but they
do offer modes which are different especially to patients who
are suffering from the same diseases (Marshall, Wolfe, &
McKevitt, 2012). In this case, nurses can administer the
treatment using different methods depending on culture and
racial of the community in the question. Therefore it is
important that the study considers issues which are relevant to
nursing practices. In addition, the study will help nurses in
appreciating and acknowledging the experience the patients

have especially the symptoms since there are no scientific ways
to prove such symptoms. Based on the beliefs and culture of the
patients, the nurses should be in a position to tell people with
hypertension even with these symptoms from the patients. In
fact, most of these symptoms have been found to be irrelevant
since in some cases it is not a must that they have any
connection to the disease of difference in blood pressure level.
From the article, nurses might learn why it is important for
them to caution the patients that they may have the
cardiovascular disease even without the said symptoms and it is
only through treatment that they can be able to overcome and
prevent cardiovascular disease. Comment by Doreen
Farley: Is this a new paragraph? If so, you need an indent here.
Thanks. Comment by Doreen Farley: When you state equally
important it would hint to that fact that prior to this statement
you talked about the importance to some other group. Take out
the word, “equally” Comment by Doreen Farley: In this
sentence you are using the present tense. Remember that you are
critiquing a study that has already been completed so, did the
other consider this or not. If so, just state, The study considered
issues which were relevant to nursing practice. Then you would
have to go into those issues as you mentioned in. Does this
make sense? Comment by Doreen Farley: Remember that we
do not know if the study will do something but we can
definitely, state that the study may do something. In the future,
I would change that word to “may” instead of “will”.
Comment by Doreen Farley: Please read this sentence out
loud slowly as it is a little bit confusing. Comment by
Doreen Farley: Here you are talking about symptoms again but
did not let the reader know what symptoms that you are talking
about. Comment by Doreen Farley: Again, you have not
discussed the symptoms you are talking about. Are you trying to
state: The article mentioned it is important for nurses to learn
why it is important to teach patients about cardiovascular
disease and explain that the disease may be present even
without symtoms?

Understanding patient's perspective in the primary objective of
this article which helps the nurses to learn why there is low
hypertension treatment. The research aim has been to help
nurses understand the reason why educational interventions
when it comes to informing the patients about cardiovascular
disease risk have been met so far. On the other hand, the
research helps the reader on developments which have been
made in the management of both hypertension and
cardiovascular diseases. Comment by Doreen Farley: was the
primary objective of this article.
The rest of that sentence is not clear. Please read out loud
slowly.
How does the nurse understanding the patient’s perspective help
the nurse learn that there is low hypertension treatment. (What
does that mean?) Comment by Doreen Farley: The research
aim was to help…..
Methods of Study
The authors completed a methodical audit and account
combination of subjective examinations on hypertension. In the
study, the authors of the article looked at the causes of
hypertension and how it can be prevented through the taking of
drugs. In addition, the authors have researched how different
patients from different cultures and ethnic groups understand
the issue of hypertension. Some the electronic database which
the researchers have been evaluating in the study is such as
Medline, Embase, the British Nursing Index, Social Policy and
Practice, and PsycInfo. Apart from the above, other papers
which are relevant have been searched help in coming up with
various methods and strategies which help in understanding
qualitative research and some terminologies which are
associated with hypertension (Marshall, Wolfe, & McKevitt,
2012). Comment by Doreen Farley: were Comment by
Doreen Farley: Please read this sentence out loud slowly.
Comment by Doreen Farley: good job on this paragraph.
In the study, some of the methods which have been used in
collecting data are such as conducting face to face interviews,

and journals published on the topic as a sample an thus help in
evaluating the perspective of the patients on hypertension and
taking of drugs. Apart from face to face interviews, the
researchers conducted telephone and filling of questionnaires in
an effort of bringing a better understanding of hypertension.
Some of the people who were excluded from the research are
those leaving with diabetes or cardiovascular diseases and
pregnant women. There was no language barrier, and thus
materials, which are in different languages, were considered to
be sample since in the research framework translation mode was
included. Comment by Doreen Farley: The authors
conducted fact to face interviews, telephone interviews and also
used questionnaires to get a better understanding of
participants’ understanding of hypertension. Comment by
Doreen Farley: Exclusion criteria were diabetics or pregnant
women with cardiovascular disease.
Through steps, which are provided and accepted by the UK
Economic and Social Research Council (ESRC), the data, which
was collected, was analyzed and synthesized. Using methods
and other techniques that are most appropriate in qualitative
research, the researchers were able to bring clear and untestable
study results to the audience. Some of the methods, which were
used by the researcher to synthesize the data, are such as
tabulation, textual summary, and thematic analysis. The textual
summary was very important to the researchers especially in
adopting the "one-sheet-paper method." Final themes were
developed through consensus and discussion of the full-text
papers and supported by coding its presence in the text
(Marshall, Wolfe, & McKevitt, 2012). Tabulation was used in
determining similarities and variations of cultures and ethnic
group in different countries. Comment by Doreen Farley:
were Comment by Doreen Farley: were Comment by Doreen
Farley: Good job on this paragraph. It was concise and provided
detailed information about how the research was conducted.
Good job.
Results from the Study

As per the results of the study, it was found that the causes of
hypertension are family history, stress, overweight, alcohol and
also food. Of all the sources stress was found to be the main
cause of hypertension. The patients with hypertension were
found to have a lot of worries. In a Dutch study done, a
participant was able to see the relationship between blood
pressure and worry as synonymous. However, most of the
participants agreed that stress is the main cause of increased
blood pressure. Also, in the course of the study, participants
from six different countries suggested a supplementation or
replacement of drugs with traditional ones and even other
alternative medicines. The supplementation and replacement
were more connected to beliefs and practices of certain cultures.
Comment by Doreen Farley: were
Remember that we are talking about a study that was already
conducted. Use the past tense. Comment by Doreen Farley: ,
Put a common after the word sources. Comment by Doreen
Farley: was Comment by Doreen Farley: Again, good job on
this paragraph.
The results of the study are so important to the practitioners of
nursing. This study enables nurses to cater for the needs of
different patients who come from different belief systems and
cultural backgrounds. Through the study, nurses are also able to
monitor how the patients take their medications (Marshall,
Wolfe, & McKevitt, 2012). This way, they can know whether
the participants adjust their doses, or maybe take the drugs in a
sporadic manner due to lack of knowledge or information. The
patients may even stop taking the medicines for the control of
blood pressure, and therefore the nurses need to keep a close
eye on them. For these same reasons, nurses have to play their
role of providing the required information to their patients
about the control of hypertension. Comment by Doreen Farley:
the nurses were able to obtain information related to the
participant’s knowledge of their disease process and treatment
regimen. The study found that patients may stop taking
medications, adjust their doses, and/or took their medications in

a sporadic manner. These results are related to nursing practice
as nurses play a role in providing required information to their
patients about the control of hypertension.
I tried to take your sentences and show you how to use different
verbiage to complete your thoughts. You did a great job on this
section but I am trying to get you ready for Capstone writing. I
hope this helps. These are just recommendations of how to write
study results. Comment by Doreen Farley: Good job on this
section.
Ethical Considerations
The basis for the research was primary and secondary source
materials which are in the form of electronic databases. Since
the participants were not involved in the research directly, there
was no need to seek ethical approval in the research.
Comment by Doreen Farley: Thanks
Conclusion
The format of good research work was adhered to. The same
applied to the case of the norms. Data collection methods were
also in check. Their transparency was visible. The research
methodology as a whole was very free of errors. The relevance
of the study is well established as the nurses can monitor the
progress of their patients from various cultural backgrounds and
with diverse beliefs. Also, they can know the reasons behind the
emergence of blood pressure among individuals. The research
teaches nurses on how to have a closer eye on their patients
suffering from high blood pressure. Comment by Doreen Farley:
was Comment by Doreen Farley: could Comment by Doreen
Farley: the nurses knew Comment by Doreen Farley:
Remember that your conclusion should really be just a short
summary of the important parts of the information you provided
above and then state how the research was significant to nursing
practice. Please see the rubric to keep you on track. Thanks
Comment by Doreen Farley: Is that what the outcome of
the research. Or, was the outcome that it was important that
nurses provided education to cardiovascular patients to ensure

that patients understood the disease process and the importance
to adhering to treatment regimens to decrease further risks?
Reference Comment by Doreen Farley: Center this on the page.
Also, good job on your in-text citations and your reference
section.
Marshall, I. J., Wolfe, C. D., & McKevitt, C. (2012). Lay
perspectives on hypertension and drug adherence: systematic
review of qualitative research. Bmj, 345, e3953.
Letzy, you provided good work here and were able to connect to
nursing practice. This paper was related to cardiovascular
disease and the importance of nursing education to ensure that
clients understood various aspects of hypertension. Your first
paper was related to HIV and what you sent me in the individual
forum the other day had something to do with the following:
For grown-ups remaining in long-term care, what are the
procedures used to deliver a clinically huge change in IV
related complexity contrasted with quality nursing practice at
one weeks?
I am not sure what is going on here. This article was not in
either of your previous writings that you sent me.
You did a good job on this paper and I think it would be best if

your question was developed from this work. Please provide a
PICOT question related to this work and send to me in the
individual forum. Also, choose five more articles along this line
which must be a combination of qualitative and quantitative
designs. I do not want a case study type of information as you
sent in the individual forum. I want your PICOT question just
like the one you have above and 5 research articles with their
abstracts.
You can bring up your Marshall article, look at the author’s
reference section and you will find other articles the authors
used along with some key search terms that may be helpful to
you. You are on the right track with this assignment. You did a
good job. I gave you a lot of feedback to help you with your
sentence structure and writing research related papers. I hope
the comments help.
I will need your new PICOT as soon as possible with the 6
related articles. You only need to provide 5 more though
because you already have this one. Also, I will give you until
Wednesday by 1159pm to complete your assignment that is due
on Sunday as you have been struggling a little bit. No worries
though because this is new to you. Please do not get frustrated.
Not having to submit the next paper until next Wed, should give
you a little more time and may relieve a little stress. If you have
any questions, please let me know. I see much improvement in
this paper than your previous paper. Keep your head up.
Professor Farley
Running Head: Research Summary and Ethical Considerations
1
2
Please put your title in caps
Hi, please review APA for your header sections. Please put your
title in caps. Thanks.

Student’s Name:
Institution:
Introduction
Background of the study
The main reason for the study has been to evaluate and analyze
the amount of knowledge patients have concerning hypertension
and how the patients take treatment and drugs which are related
to hypertension. The bottom line of the study is to evaluate how
different opinions on hypertension and the treatment of the
disease and how such opinions differ from one place to another
especially due to the difference in culture or ethnic of these
groups. In addition, the study will be evaluated on what the
research can do to improve the adherence to these groups.
Comment by Doreen Farley: For someone reading this that
doesn’t know what your subject is, how would they know what
study you were talking about. In your intro/background you
must either name the article that you are critiquing for the
reader or the author’s name.
For instance, the following information is a critique of a
qualitative study authored by…… The purpose of the study was
to…..

Smith & Smith stated…..
The study was conducted due to the…..
These are just examples to help you ensure that the reader
knows exactly what you are speaking about in terms of the
authors, name of study, purpose of study and why it was
conducted. I hope this helps. . Comment by Doreen Farley:
ethnicity Comment by Doreen Farley: Is it what the research
will do or what the proposed interventions would do to improve
adherence?
The research subject is equally important to nursing. In the
nursing field, we have to deal with different groups. Nurses
need to connect, convey, and care for the treatment
administrations of various patients having a place with various
societies and racial origin. In most cases, nurses are faced with
the challenge of dealing with one treatment at a time, but they
do offer modes which are different especially to patients who
are suffering from the same diseases (Marshall, Wolfe, &
McKevitt, 2012). In this case, nurses can administer the
treatment using different methods depending on culture and
racial of the community in the question. Therefore it is
important that the study considers issues which are relevant to
nursing practices. In addition, the study will help nurses in
appreciating and acknowledging the experience the patients
have especially the symptoms since there are no scientific ways
to prove such symptoms. Based on the beliefs and culture of the
patients, the nurses should be in a position to tell people with
hypertension even with these symptoms from the patients. In
fact, most of these symptoms have been found to be irrelevant
since in some cases it is not a must that they have any
connection to the disease of difference in blood pressure level.
From the article, nurses might learn why it is important for
them to caution the patients that they may have the
cardiovascular disease even without the said symptoms and it is
only through treatment that they can be able to overcome and

prevent cardiovascular disease. Comment by Doreen
Farley: Is this a new paragraph? If so, you need an indent here.
Thanks. Comment by Doreen Farley: When you state equally
important it would hint to that fact that prior to this statement
you talked about the importance to some other group. Take out
the word, “equally” Comment by Doreen Farley: In this
sentence you are using the present tense. Remember that you are
critiquing a study that has already been completed so, did the
other consider this or not. If so, just state, The study considered
issues which were relevant to nursing practice. Then you would
have to go into those issues as you mentioned in. Does this
make sense? Comment by Doreen Farley: Remember that we
do not know if the study will do something but we can
definitely, state that the study may do something. In the future,
I would change that word to “may” instead of “will”.
Comment by Doreen Farley: Please read this sentence out
loud slowly as it is a little bit confusing. Comment by
Doreen Farley: Here you are talking about symptoms again but
did not let the reader know what symptoms that you are talking
about. Comment by Doreen Farley: Again, you have not
discussed the symptoms you are talking about. Are you trying to
state: The article mentioned it is important for nurses to learn
why it is important to teach patients about cardiovascular
disease and explain that the disease may be present even
without symtoms?
Understanding patient's perspective in the primary objective of
this article which helps the nurses to learn why there is low
hypertension treatment. The research aim has been to help
nurses understand the reason why educational interventions
when it comes to informing the patients about cardiovascular
disease risk have been met so far. On the other hand, the
research helps the reader on developments which have been
made in the management of both hypertension and
cardiovascular diseases. Comment by Doreen Farley: was the
primary objective of this article.
The rest of that sentence is not clear. Please read out loud

slowly.
How does the nurse understanding the patient’s perspective help
the nurse learn that there is low hypertension treatment. (What
does that mean?) Comment by Doreen Farley: The research
aim was to help…..
Methods of Study
The authors completed a methodical audit and account
combination of subjective examinations on hypertension. In the
study, the authors of the article looked at the causes of
hypertension and how it can be prevented through the taking of
drugs. In addition, the authors have researched how different
patients from different cultures and ethnic groups understand
the issue of hypertension. Some the electronic database which
the researchers have been evaluating in the study is such as
Medline, Embase, the British Nursing Index, Social Policy and
Practice, and PsycInfo. Apart from the above, other papers
which are relevant have been searched help in coming up with
various methods and strategies which help in understanding
qualitative research and some terminologies which are
associated with hypertension (Marshall, Wolfe, & McKevitt,
2012). Comment by Doreen Farley: were Comment by
Doreen Farley: Please read this sentence out loud slowly.
Comment by Doreen Farley: good job on this paragraph.
In the study, some of the methods which have been used in
collecting data are such as conducting face to face interviews,
and journals published on the topic as a sample an thus help in
evaluating the perspective of the patients on hypertension and
taking of drugs. Apart from face to face interviews, the
researchers conducted telephone and filling of questionnaires in
an effort of bringing a better understanding of hypertension.
Some of the people who were excluded from the research are
those leaving with diabetes or cardiovascular diseases and
pregnant women. There was no language barrier, and thus
materials, which are in different languages, were considered to
be sample since in the research framework translation mode was
included. Comment by Doreen Farley: The authors

conducted fact to face interviews, telephone interviews and also
used questionnaires to get a better understanding of
participants’ understanding of hypertension. Comment by
Doreen Farley: Exclusion criteria were diabetics or pregnant
women with cardiovascular disease.
Through steps, which are provided and accepted by the UK
Economic and Social Research Council (ESRC), the data, which
was collected, was analyzed and synthesized. Using methods
and other techniques that are most appropriate in qualitative
research, the researchers were able to bring clear and untestable
study results to the audience. Some of the methods, which were
used by the researcher to synthesize the data, are such as
tabulation, textual summary, and thematic analysis. The textual
summary was very important to the researchers especially in
adopting the "one-sheet-paper method." Final themes were
developed through consensus and discussion of the full-text
papers and supported by coding its presence in the text
(Marshall, Wolfe, & McKevitt, 2012). Tabulation was used in
determining similarities and variations of cultures and ethnic
group in different countries. Comment by Doreen Farley:
were Comment by Doreen Farley: were Comment by Doreen
Farley: Good job on this paragraph. It was concise and provided
detailed information about how the research was conducted.
Good job.
Results from the Study
As per the results of the study, it was found that the causes of
hypertension are family history, stress, overweight, alcohol and
also food. Of all the sources stress was found to be the main
cause of hypertension. The patients with hypertension were
found to have a lot of worries. In a Dutch study done, a
participant was able to see the relationship between blood
pressure and worry as synonymous. However, most of the
participants agreed that stress is the main cause of increased
blood pressure. Also, in the course of the study, participants
from six different countries suggested a supplementation or
replacement of drugs with traditional ones and even other

alternative medicines. The supplementation and replacement
were more connected to beliefs and practices of certain cultures.
Comment by Doreen Farley: were
Remember that we are talking about a study that was already
conducted. Use the past tense. Comment by Doreen Farley: ,
Put a common after the word sources. Comment by Doreen
Farley: was Comment by Doreen Farley: Again, good job on
this paragraph.
The results of the study are so important to the practitioners of
nursing. This study enables nurses to cater for the needs of
different patients who come from different belief systems and
cultural backgrounds. Through the study, nurses are also able to
monitor how the patients take their medications (Marshall,
Wolfe, & McKevitt, 2012). This way, they can know whether
the participants adjust their doses, or maybe take the drugs in a
sporadic manner due to lack of knowledge or information. The
patients may even stop taking the medicines for the control of
blood pressure, and therefore the nurses need to keep a close
eye on them. For these same reasons, nurses have to play their
role of providing the required information to their patients
about the control of hypertension. Comment by Doreen Farley:
the nurses were able to obtain information related to the
participant’s knowledge of their disease process and treatment
regimen. The study found that patients may stop taking
medications, adjust their doses, and/or took their medications in
a sporadic manner. These results are related to nursing practice
as nurses play a role in providing required information to their
patients about the control of hypertension.
I tried to take your sentences and show you how to use different
verbiage to complete your thoughts. You did a great job on this
section but I am trying to get you ready for Capstone writing. I
hope this helps. These are just recommendations of how to write
study results. Comment by Doreen Farley: Good job on this
section.
Ethical Considerations

The basis for the research was primary and secondary source
materials which are in the form of electronic databases. Since
the participants were not involved in the research directly, there
was no need to seek ethical approval in the research.
Comment by Doreen Farley: Thanks
Conclusion
The format of good research work was adhered to. The same
applied to the case of the norms. Data collection methods were
also in check. Their transparency was visible. The research
methodology as a whole was very free of errors. The relevance
of the study is well established as the nurses can monitor the
progress of their patients from various cultural backgrounds and
with diverse beliefs. Also, they can know the reasons behind the
emergence of blood pressure among individuals. The research
teaches nurses on how to have a closer eye on their patients
suffering from high blood pressure. Comment by Doreen Farley:
was Comment by Doreen Farley: could Comment by Doreen
Farley: the nurses knew Comment by Doreen Farley:
Remember that your conclusion should really be just a short
summary of the important parts of the information you provided
above and then state how the research was significant to nursing
practice. Please see the rubric to keep you on track. Thanks
Comment by Doreen Farley: Is that what the outcome of
the research. Or, was the outcome that it was important that
nurses provided education to cardiovascular patients to ensure
that patients understood the disease process and the importance
to adhering to treatment regimens to decrease further risks?

Reference Comment by Doreen Farley: Center this on the page.
Also, good job on your in-text citations and your reference
section.
Marshall, I. J., Wolfe, C. D., & McKevitt, C. (2012). Lay
perspectives on hypertension and drug adherence: systematic
review of qualitative research. Bmj, 345, e3953.
Letzy, you provided good work here and were able to connect to
nursing practice. This paper was related to cardiovascular
disease and the importance of nursing education to ensure that
clients understood various aspects of hypertension. Your first
paper was related to HIV and what you sent me in the individual
forum the other day had something to do with the following:
For grown-ups remaining in long-term care, what are the
procedures used to deliver a clinically huge change in IV
related complexity contrasted with quality nursing practice at
one weeks?
I am not sure what is going on here. This article was not in
either of your previous writings that you sent me.
You did a good job on this paper and I think it would be best if
your question was developed from this work. Please provide a
PICOT question related to this work and send to me in the
individual forum. Also, choose five more articles along this line
which must be a combination of qualitative and quantitative
designs. I do not want a case study type of information as you
sent in the individual forum. I want your PICOT question just
like the one you have above and 5 research articles with their
abstracts.
You can bring up your Marshall article, look at the author’s
reference section and you will find other articles the authors
used along with some key search terms that may be helpful to

you. You are on the right track with this assignment. You did a
good job. I gave you a lot of feedback to help you with your
sentence structure and writing research related papers. I hope
the comments help.
I will need your new PICOT as soon as possible with the 6
related articles. You only need to provide 5 more though
because you already have this one. Also, I will give you until
Wednesday by 1159pm to complete your assignment that is due
on Sunday as you have been struggling a little bit. No worries
though because this is new to you. Please do not get frustrated.
Not having to submit the next paper until next Wed, should give
you a little more time and may relieve a little stress. If you have
any questions, please let me know. I see much improvement in
this paper than your previous paper. Keep your head up.
Professor Farley

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