6. JIYOUNGMOON
BUSINESS COMMUNICATIONS
IN ENGLISH AS A 2ND LANGUAGE
When writing text, start in English from the
beginning. (Never translate from your local text.)
Avoid clichés and overused expressions.
Try not to use these phrases:
- Think outside the box
- Game-changing, paradigm shift ...
- Walk the talk
10. JIYOUNGMOON
What can we do with that ?!
Data Visualization for PR / Marketing
Sort
data
Analyze
Visualize
Identify
patterns
(key
takeaways)
PR / Marketing
Activities
Business
Performance
Plan next
PR /
marketing
activities
based on the
key
takeaways
?
Develop
branded
content
17. JIYOUNGMOON
Investors Behind Softbank’s $100B Vision Fund
EXERCISE II
As of May 2017
Source: Bloomberg
$45B
Saudi Arabia’s
Public Investment
Fund
$28B
SoftBank
$15B
Abu Dhabi’s Mubata’s
Investment Co.
$7B
Yet to be raised
$5B
Apple, Qualcomm, Faxconn, Sharp
MAKEOVER #1
18. JIYOUNGMOON
Investors Behind Softbank’s $100B Vision Fund
EXERCISE II
As of May 2017
Source: Bloomberg
$60B
Middle East Investors
▪ Saudi Arabia’s Public
Investment Fund
▪ Abu Dhabi’s Mubata’s
Investment Co.
$28B
SoftBank
$7B
Yet to be raised
$5B
Apple, Qualcomm,
Faxconn, Sharp
MAKEOVER #2
28. JIYOUNGMOON
CHECKLIST
Make sure the flow is smooth from the
opening to the closing
Rehearse with some flexibility
Check the venue and equipment in advance
Prepare for the worst-case scenario
Prepare Q&A List