1. Script
Setting location 1: linford bottom, Hampshire.
Lighting/ time: just getting light, maybe in the morning where it’s dusky.
One car is parked in the middle of a field that looks no one can see because it’s an abandon
place. Another car roles up next to the other car. People get out of the first car (guy 4 and 2)
looking very annoyed and fed up of waiting.
Guy 1 and 3 get out of the car the pulled up late looking worrying and start to
scat out. Guy 4 reassures them and tells them to calm down and what happened
grabbing guy 1 shoulders
Guy 4: right, Calm daahhhn
Guy 2: cor’ blimey, Wot 'appened.
(all start to shout over eachother, guy 1 shouts…)
Guy 1: 'a can I relax after the bleedin' gavvers chased me
(cuts on the face of guy 1. And over voice of guy 4 describes his main characteristics and
why he is in the group, cuts to a short clip of him whining but then tackling someone because
hes an ex- rugby player)
(location 2: in a back alleyway guy is being chased and he thinks he’s clear so he lights up a
cigarette and then gets tackled while this is going on the overhead commentary is still
happening)
(back to location 1)
(guy 2 and 4 look at each other with shock)
(They both go up to guy 1 and grab him with one hand each by the scruff of the neck)
Guy 2: Nah daan't tell me they followed ya, I 'ave the bleedin' right blind tah
'it ya.
(cuts on the face of guy 2. And over voice of guy 4 describes his main characteristics and
why he is in the group, cuts to a short clip of him talking on the phone while drowning
someone (or something to show that he doesn’t mess about)
2. (location 3:a bathroom in toms house)
(back to location 1)
(Guy 1 starts to whimper)
(Guy 4 pushes guy 2 out the way and says…)
Guy 4: oi, shut it nah
(guy 3 intervenes and says…)
Guy 3: guys its ok we lost them, it just took a bit long then thought gents, but
it’s all under control now its ok.
(cuts on the face of guy 3. And over voice of guy 4 describes his main characteristics and
why he is in the group, cuts to a short clip of him doing a wheeler dealer thing (delboy) and
he gets chased by the police and he throws his merchandise up in the air and runs off)
(location 4 is in a back alley way maybe in Ringwood)
(cuts back to location 1)
Guy 2: what do you mean you lost them?
(Over exaggerates with movements when he says lost them)
Guy 3: its ok stop worryin’ ive lost them. End of
(guy 2 and 3 start to shout at each other and square up to each other with wild hand
actions)
(Guy 4 honks horn to get everyone stop shouting at each there and shouts over them
saying…)
Guy 4: Guys shut up, we came 'ere to finish the chuffin' Cob.now we gunu do this
or what?
(everyone looks at each other and gives a slight nod and walk over to the car that was there
at the start)
(guy 4 walks over to the boot and takes a deep breath in, then opens the boot)
(They all look distrusted and guy 1 turns around and throws up while guy 2 is looking with
anger in to the boot with guy 3 puts his hands on his head with disappointment and guy 4
says…)
3. Guy 4: poor soul, it shouldn’t have been this way
(cuts on the face of guy 4. And over voice of himself describes his main characteristics and
why he is in the group, it doesn’t skip to a clip because he’s modest about himself)
(shows a body in the back of the car, wrapped in a white bed sheet with fake blood on it)
(then cuts to a black screen with ‘24 hours’ later and that’s the end)