The document contains feedback on a digipak and music video. For the digipak, the feedback suggests adding more color to make the text stand out better and improving the resolution of a picture. For the music video, it is suggested to add a beginning and end for better narrative structure and shorten some scenes to prevent boredom. Additional color is also recommended for the advert to help it stand out.

2. Digipak
“possibly another colour being added” – “so it’s got something
to stand out”
“I think there could be a little bit more colour”
“the picture of the eye could have been a bit clearer”
= From the feedback I received I’d probably add some colour to
my digipak. I’d most likely make the text a brighter colour so it
stands out a bit better. However adding colour may detract from
the theme. I’d also make the picture of the eye a higher
resolution so it would be better quality compared to the rest of
the pictures.

3. Music video
“I feel the music video could have had beginning and
an end”
= Next time I would of included more of narrative to
my music video, in order for it to be easier to follow
and also more interesting to watch.

4. Music video
“timing of things some scenes could have been
second or two shorter”
= Some scenes could have been shorter so it
wouldn’t be as boring to watch. The scene of the
hand at the end could have been a lot shorter.

5. Digipak
“possibly another colour”
=Again like the digipak I would include some colour
to the advert so it stands out. I would include the
same colour on the digipak as the advert – possibly a
neutral colour like blue.

6. “include some brush strokes here”
“empty space underneath the eye”
= If I remake my advert I would of included some
more of brush strokes under the eye so there isn’t
empty space.