The document provides feedback on a written work, highlighting issues with structure, such as the need to rearrange paragraphs and include a thesis statement. It points out the absence of a conclusion and critiques the author for not taking a clear stance on the topic discussed. Additionally, it notes citation errors and grammatical issues that need to be addressed.

1. You need to work on the structure. Your third paragraph should
be your second paragraph. Also, your introduction does not
have an argumentative thesis. It’s mainly just informational.
You are also missing a conclusion.
Support: You provide information about why companies don’t
provide training, but you never take a position. Do you agree
with the companies?
Citations: you have included some information from sources
other than our book, and you also did not cite these sources.
Grammar: sub/verb agreement