You have written a four-source essay and a six-source essay and are working toward the multiple-source essay. Throughout the semester up to this point, you have integrated sources into your writing and have gleaned various strategies in using different ways of integrating sources.
As we conclude the course, please examine the following short paragraph on a hypothetical paper about cybersecurity and the Internet of Things. The writer has made some errors in his integration of Shindell as a source.
Please identify at least two errors. Describe what the errors are in a sentence or two. (You don’t have to re-write the paragraph. You just need to describe what the errors are.)
One potential method of hacking into a hospital’s records is through a wearable device. Often, wearable devices are used by health care institutions to monitor blood pressure or other health conditions. However, such devices expose vulnerabilities in the system. (Shindell, 2018) argues that hackers increasing integrate malware to infect such devices and then use them as foundations upon which to attack the health care institution’s IT systems. Specifically, (Shindell, 2018) maintains that ransomware is especially pernicious. “During an attack, victims will typically encounter a screen giving them directions for paying a ransom to retrieve their data…” “More than half of hospitals surveyed were hit with ransomware in the previous 12 months.”
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You have written a four-source essay and a six-source essay and
1. You have written a four-source essay and a six-source essay and
are working toward the multiple-source essay. Throughout the
semester up to this point, you have integrated sources into your
writing and have gleaned various strategies in using different
ways of integrating sources.
As we conclude the course, please examine the following short
paragraph on a hypothetical paper about cybersecurity and the
Internet of Things. The writer has made some errors in his
integration of Shindell as a source.
Please identify at least two errors. Describe what the errors are
in a sentence or two. (You don’t have to re-write the
paragraph. You just need to describe what the errors are.)
One potential method of hacking into a hospital’s records is
through a wearable device. Often, wearable devices are used by
health care institutions to monitor blood pressure or other
health conditions. However, such devices expose
vulnerabilities in the system. (Shindell, 2018) argues that
hackers increasing integrate malware to infect such devices and
then use them as foundations upon which to attack the health
care institution’s IT systems. Specifically, (Shindell, 2018)
maintains that ransomware is especially pernicious. “During an
attack, victims will typically encounter a screen giving them
directions for paying a ransom to retrieve their data…” “More
than half of hospitals surveyed were hit with ransomware in the
previous 12 months.”
