SlideShare a Scribd company logo
1 of 34
Persuasive Essay
Grade 9 tis2016english@gmail.com
Forms of Persuasive Writing
Advertisements
 Editorials
 Speeches
 Propaganda
 Reviews
 Blogs
 Persuasive Essays
Forms of Persuasive Writing
Advertisements
try to convince
you to do or buy
something.
Forms of Persuasive Writing
Editorials about current
issues appear in
newspapers and
magazines, or on
television, radio, and
the internet.
http://topmagazines.wordpress.com/2011/06/29/recommended-magazines-for-people-who-can%E2%80%99t-get-enough/
Forms of Persuasive Writing
Persuasive speeches try to
convince an audience to take
action
Forms of Persuasive Writing
Propaganda is often
about political issues,
and usually includes
emotionally charged
appeals.
Forms of Persuasive Writing
Reviews evaluate items
like books or movies and
state an opinion as to
whether the product is
worth the reader’s time
and money.
http://www.imdb.com/movies-in-theaters/
Forms of Persuasive Writing
Blogs provide commentary on
a particular topic, often
combining text, images, and
links to other blogs, web
pages, and other media
related to its topic. Blogs also
allow readers to respond.
http://www.ted.com/talks/marcel_dicke_why_not_eat_insects.html
Forms of Persuasive Writing
Persuasive essays use
logic, reason, and emotion
to convince readers to join
the writer in a certain point
of view.
http://www.essay.tv/wp-content/uploads/2010/01/how-to-write-essay.jpg
Text Structure of a Persuasive Essay
TITLE
1
2
3
4
5
Introduction
Claim 1 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas)
Claim 2 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas)
Claim 3 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas)
Conclusion
Graphic Organizer
Organization
Thesis –
Argument –
Counterargument –
Rebuttal –
Conclusion
TITLE
1
2
3
4
5
Introduction
Claim 1 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas)
Claim 2 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas)
Claim 3 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas)
Conclusion
Graphic Organizer
The Prompt
What is the best sport for children to play?
Outline
Thesis = Soccer is the ideal sport for children
teaches teamwork
--every position has a job
--everyone must work together to win
--physically smaller
--not as athletic
--work together well
home
school
too intimidating for some
learning teamwork necessary
argument
counter
rebuttal
Conclusion
Transitions for argument:
One reason
First,
Expand Your Argument
One reason is that soccer teaches teamwork.
Each position has a specific job. Forwards have the
responsibility of scoring goals. The fullbacks’ job
is defense, and the halfbacks assist both forwards
and fullbacks. Defense of the goal is the duty of the
goalie. In order to win all must do their jobs well
and rely on each other for help.
Outline
Thesis = Soccer is the ideal sport for children
teaches teamwork
--every position has a job
--everyone must work together to win
--physically smaller
--not as athletic
--work together well
home
school
too intimidating for some
learning teamwork necessary
argument
counter
rebuttal
Conclusion
Transitions for counterargument:
 I will admit
Certainly,
Of course,
 I will concede
Admittedly,
Obviously,
Expand Your Counter
Certainly, team sports can intimidate children. Some children
may be physically smaller than others. Age group teams are
meant to solve this problem, but it is not unusual to see large
differences of height and weight in children of the same age.
Others may not be as athletic as other team members. Children
are particularly sensitive about how they compare to their peers.
When they cannot run as fast as other team members or are not as
agile, they fear ridicule
Outline
Thesis = Soccer is the ideal sport for children
teaches teamwork
--every position has a job
--everyone must work together to win
--physically smaller
--not as athletic
--work together well
home
school
too intimidating for some
learning teamwork necessary
argument
counter
rebuttal
Conclusion
Transitions for solution:
 However,
On the other hand,
Nevertheless,
Conversely,
Yet,
Still,
Expand Your Solution
However, learning to work as part of a team is essential to success
in many other areas. Children have to learn to cooperate both at
school and home. In school students are expected to work together
without conflict. Many teachers use cooperative groups to teach. At
home children are expected to be part of the family team and help with
chores that need to be done. When they are older, these children may
have a job that requires teamwork. Only rarely does a person work in
job that does not require working with others. Office workers have to
work together to accomplish the tasks given to them. Construction
workers have to be part of a team effort to finish buildings on time and
on budget.
Don’t :
Don’t :
Don’t begin with “Hello my name is___ and I’m going to
write about____”
Don’t use the word “I “ (Instead of “I think we shouldn’t
wear uniforms” say “Uniforms shouldn’t be required.”
Don’t be wishy-washy. Pick a side!
Don’t forget to support your opinions with facts and
example s
Introductory Paragraph:
Introductory Paragraph:
Fast Food Is Killing America!
Did you know that a typical child needs 2,000 calories for
an entire day and Burger King’s Whopper with triple cheese
has 1,230 calories? That is far more calories than anyone
needs in one day! Fast food consumption has risen 500
percent since 1970 and today reaches nearly every part of
society, including some public school cafeterias. Fast food
is harmful because it rapidly increases weight, causes high
blood pressure, and leads to sluggishness. Fast food is bad
for your health!
CATCHY TITLE
HOOK THE READER
THESIS STATEMENT
YOUR THREE ARGUMENTS
Thesis Statement
A thesis statement is always one sentence that states your
assertion (belief) about a topic. A thesis statement usually brief
preview of your arguments.
(I believe) ____________________ because of argument 1,
argument 2, and argument 3.
Which of the following is a good thesis
statement?
 I believe we must stop wasting food now!
 The problem of food waste can easily be solved by implementing three
simple steps: reduce, reuse, recycle.
 If you aren’t reducing, reusing, and recycling, you should.
 I believe wasting food is a huge problem. We need to reduce our food
waste. For example, make a shopping list before you go to the store,
and only buy things you truly need. You shouldn’t buy a gallon of milk if
you are only going to drink a quart of it during the week. Who cares if
the gallon size is on sale?
Persuasive Vs. Argumentative Essay
Persuasive Vs. Argumentative Essay
Argumentative Essay Persuasive Essay
1. Get the reader to recognize
your side of the argument is
valid.
2. Logic based
3. Considers the opposite
opinion
4. With evidence for each
reason
1. Get the reader to agree with
your opinion.
2. Emotion based
3. Ignores the opinion of others
4. No evidence
TITLE
1
2
3
4
5
Introduction
Claim 1 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas)
Claim 2 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas)
Claim 3 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas)
Conclusion
Introduction
• The question
• Wh- information
Body Paragraph 1 (reason/ agree)
•
•
Body Paragraph 1 (reason/
disagree)
•
•
Conclusion
TITLE
1
2
3
4
Argumentative Vs. Persuasive Essay
Topics
1. Should schools sell fast food?
2. Does social media create isolation?
3. Should there be harsher punishments for bullying?
4. Should there be less homework?
5. Should school sports be mandatory?
6. Should school be year round with more breaks to improve education?
7. Should your school have a school newspaper?
TITLE
1
2
3
4
5
Introduction
Claim 1 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas)
Claim 2 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas)
Claim 3 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas)
Conclusion
Graphic Organizer

More Related Content

Similar to Fast Food is Killing America

persuasivewriting-1441-conversion-gate01.pptx
persuasivewriting-1441-conversion-gate01.pptxpersuasivewriting-1441-conversion-gate01.pptx
persuasivewriting-1441-conversion-gate01.pptxridwanalfan
 
3rd 1st Topic.pptargumentative essay third quarter
3rd 1st  Topic.pptargumentative essay third quarter3rd 1st  Topic.pptargumentative essay third quarter
3rd 1st Topic.pptargumentative essay third quarterMaricelQuiachon
 
How to Write a Persuasive Essay.ppt
How to Write a Persuasive Essay.pptHow to Write a Persuasive Essay.ppt
How to Write a Persuasive Essay.pptWaleedRaiya
 
Persuasive Writing and its step by step processes
Persuasive Writing and its step by step processesPersuasive Writing and its step by step processes
Persuasive Writing and its step by step processesAngelieBalangue1
 
Persuasive_Writing_1 (1).ppt
Persuasive_Writing_1 (1).pptPersuasive_Writing_1 (1).ppt
Persuasive_Writing_1 (1).pptBethCsiszer2
 
Persuasive_Writing_1.ppt
Persuasive_Writing_1.pptPersuasive_Writing_1.ppt
Persuasive_Writing_1.pptMnMVlog
 
Persuasive Writing.ppt
Persuasive Writing.pptPersuasive Writing.ppt
Persuasive Writing.pptCarlaTorre7
 
Persuasive Writing.ppt
Persuasive Writing.pptPersuasive Writing.ppt
Persuasive Writing.pptCarlaTorre7
 
Persuasive writing ppt with propaganda connection
Persuasive writing ppt with propaganda connectionPersuasive writing ppt with propaganda connection
Persuasive writing ppt with propaganda connectionMsSherriMZS
 
Persuasive_Writing - grade 9.pdf
Persuasive_Writing - grade 9.pdfPersuasive_Writing - grade 9.pdf
Persuasive_Writing - grade 9.pdfRonilloMapula1
 
IELTS Writing task 2 structuring , organizing and brainstorming
IELTS Writing task 2 structuring , organizing and brainstormingIELTS Writing task 2 structuring , organizing and brainstorming
IELTS Writing task 2 structuring , organizing and brainstormingShannon290101
 
Persuasive Essays On School Uniforms.pdf
Persuasive Essays On School Uniforms.pdfPersuasive Essays On School Uniforms.pdf
Persuasive Essays On School Uniforms.pdfShannon Morris
 
LAS English Grade 7 Quarter 3 Lesson 5 pptx
LAS English Grade 7 Quarter 3 Lesson 5 pptxLAS English Grade 7 Quarter 3 Lesson 5 pptx
LAS English Grade 7 Quarter 3 Lesson 5 pptxMariaAlphaOtilanoBur
 
Writing A Case Study Essay. FREE 10 Sample Case Study Templates in PDF PSD ...
Writing A Case Study Essay. FREE 10 Sample Case Study Templates in PDF  PSD  ...Writing A Case Study Essay. FREE 10 Sample Case Study Templates in PDF  PSD  ...
Writing A Case Study Essay. FREE 10 Sample Case Study Templates in PDF PSD ...Wendy Emerson
 

Similar to Fast Food is Killing America (18)

persuasivewriting-1441-conversion-gate01.pptx
persuasivewriting-1441-conversion-gate01.pptxpersuasivewriting-1441-conversion-gate01.pptx
persuasivewriting-1441-conversion-gate01.pptx
 
3rd 1st Topic.pptargumentative essay third quarter
3rd 1st  Topic.pptargumentative essay third quarter3rd 1st  Topic.pptargumentative essay third quarter
3rd 1st Topic.pptargumentative essay third quarter
 
How to Write a Persuasive Essay.ppt
How to Write a Persuasive Essay.pptHow to Write a Persuasive Essay.ppt
How to Write a Persuasive Essay.ppt
 
Persuasive Writing and its step by step processes
Persuasive Writing and its step by step processesPersuasive Writing and its step by step processes
Persuasive Writing and its step by step processes
 
Persuasive_Writing_1 (1).ppt
Persuasive_Writing_1 (1).pptPersuasive_Writing_1 (1).ppt
Persuasive_Writing_1 (1).ppt
 
Persuasive_Writing_1.ppt
Persuasive_Writing_1.pptPersuasive_Writing_1.ppt
Persuasive_Writing_1.ppt
 
Persuasive Writing.ppt
Persuasive Writing.pptPersuasive Writing.ppt
Persuasive Writing.ppt
 
Persuasive Writing.ppt
Persuasive Writing.pptPersuasive Writing.ppt
Persuasive Writing.ppt
 
Persuasive_Writing_1.ppt
Persuasive_Writing_1.pptPersuasive_Writing_1.ppt
Persuasive_Writing_1.ppt
 
Persuasive writing ppt with propaganda connection
Persuasive writing ppt with propaganda connectionPersuasive writing ppt with propaganda connection
Persuasive writing ppt with propaganda connection
 
Persuasive_Writing - grade 9.pdf
Persuasive_Writing - grade 9.pdfPersuasive_Writing - grade 9.pdf
Persuasive_Writing - grade 9.pdf
 
IELTS Writing task 2 structuring , organizing and brainstorming
IELTS Writing task 2 structuring , organizing and brainstormingIELTS Writing task 2 structuring , organizing and brainstorming
IELTS Writing task 2 structuring , organizing and brainstorming
 
ppt peres
ppt peresppt peres
ppt peres
 
Pers essay ppt
Pers essay pptPers essay ppt
Pers essay ppt
 
Persuasive Essays On School Uniforms.pdf
Persuasive Essays On School Uniforms.pdfPersuasive Essays On School Uniforms.pdf
Persuasive Essays On School Uniforms.pdf
 
ielts-essay_87091.ppt
ielts-essay_87091.pptielts-essay_87091.ppt
ielts-essay_87091.ppt
 
LAS English Grade 7 Quarter 3 Lesson 5 pptx
LAS English Grade 7 Quarter 3 Lesson 5 pptxLAS English Grade 7 Quarter 3 Lesson 5 pptx
LAS English Grade 7 Quarter 3 Lesson 5 pptx
 
Writing A Case Study Essay. FREE 10 Sample Case Study Templates in PDF PSD ...
Writing A Case Study Essay. FREE 10 Sample Case Study Templates in PDF  PSD  ...Writing A Case Study Essay. FREE 10 Sample Case Study Templates in PDF  PSD  ...
Writing A Case Study Essay. FREE 10 Sample Case Study Templates in PDF PSD ...
 

More from AliaaMohammed27

Grammar subject verb agreement
Grammar subject verb agreementGrammar subject verb agreement
Grammar subject verb agreementAliaaMohammed27
 
Grammar types of sentences 1
Grammar  types of sentences 1Grammar  types of sentences 1
Grammar types of sentences 1AliaaMohammed27
 
Literature sorry right number
Literature   sorry right numberLiterature   sorry right number
Literature sorry right numberAliaaMohammed27
 
Grammar clauses phrases(1)
Grammar  clauses   phrases(1)Grammar  clauses   phrases(1)
Grammar clauses phrases(1)AliaaMohammed27
 
Literature the story of an eye witness
Literature  the story of an eye witnessLiterature  the story of an eye witness
Literature the story of an eye witnessAliaaMohammed27
 
Pronoun antecedent agreement
Pronoun antecedent agreementPronoun antecedent agreement
Pronoun antecedent agreementAliaaMohammed27
 
Writing informative text
Writing informative textWriting informative text
Writing informative textAliaaMohammed27
 
Literature the story of an eye witness
Literature  the story of an eye witnessLiterature  the story of an eye witness
Literature the story of an eye witnessAliaaMohammed27
 
Grammar types of sentences 1
Grammar  types of sentences 1Grammar  types of sentences 1
Grammar types of sentences 1AliaaMohammed27
 

More from AliaaMohammed27 (12)

Grammar subject verb agreement
Grammar subject verb agreementGrammar subject verb agreement
Grammar subject verb agreement
 
Grammar types of sentences 1
Grammar  types of sentences 1Grammar  types of sentences 1
Grammar types of sentences 1
 
Literature sorry right number
Literature   sorry right numberLiterature   sorry right number
Literature sorry right number
 
Grammar clauses phrases(1)
Grammar  clauses   phrases(1)Grammar  clauses   phrases(1)
Grammar clauses phrases(1)
 
Literature the necklace
Literature the necklaceLiterature the necklace
Literature the necklace
 
Literature the story of an eye witness
Literature  the story of an eye witnessLiterature  the story of an eye witness
Literature the story of an eye witness
 
Grammar punctuation
Grammar punctuationGrammar punctuation
Grammar punctuation
 
Pronoun antecedent agreement
Pronoun antecedent agreementPronoun antecedent agreement
Pronoun antecedent agreement
 
Writing informative text
Writing informative textWriting informative text
Writing informative text
 
Literature the story of an eye witness
Literature  the story of an eye witnessLiterature  the story of an eye witness
Literature the story of an eye witness
 
The elevator analysis
The elevator analysisThe elevator analysis
The elevator analysis
 
Grammar types of sentences 1
Grammar  types of sentences 1Grammar  types of sentences 1
Grammar types of sentences 1
 

Recently uploaded

18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf
18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf
18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdfssuser54595a
 
Accessible design: Minimum effort, maximum impact
Accessible design: Minimum effort, maximum impactAccessible design: Minimum effort, maximum impact
Accessible design: Minimum effort, maximum impactdawncurless
 
Call Girls in Dwarka Mor Delhi Contact Us 9654467111
Call Girls in Dwarka Mor Delhi Contact Us 9654467111Call Girls in Dwarka Mor Delhi Contact Us 9654467111
Call Girls in Dwarka Mor Delhi Contact Us 9654467111Sapana Sha
 
Separation of Lanthanides/ Lanthanides and Actinides
Separation of Lanthanides/ Lanthanides and ActinidesSeparation of Lanthanides/ Lanthanides and Actinides
Separation of Lanthanides/ Lanthanides and ActinidesFatimaKhan178732
 
Beyond the EU: DORA and NIS 2 Directive's Global Impact
Beyond the EU: DORA and NIS 2 Directive's Global ImpactBeyond the EU: DORA and NIS 2 Directive's Global Impact
Beyond the EU: DORA and NIS 2 Directive's Global ImpactPECB
 
Student login on Anyboli platform.helpin
Student login on Anyboli platform.helpinStudent login on Anyboli platform.helpin
Student login on Anyboli platform.helpinRaunakKeshri1
 
Grant Readiness 101 TechSoup and Remy Consulting
Grant Readiness 101 TechSoup and Remy ConsultingGrant Readiness 101 TechSoup and Remy Consulting
Grant Readiness 101 TechSoup and Remy ConsultingTechSoup
 
Mastering the Unannounced Regulatory Inspection
Mastering the Unannounced Regulatory InspectionMastering the Unannounced Regulatory Inspection
Mastering the Unannounced Regulatory InspectionSafetyChain Software
 
Sanyam Choudhary Chemistry practical.pdf
Sanyam Choudhary Chemistry practical.pdfSanyam Choudhary Chemistry practical.pdf
Sanyam Choudhary Chemistry practical.pdfsanyamsingh5019
 
Industrial Policy - 1948, 1956, 1973, 1977, 1980, 1991
Industrial Policy - 1948, 1956, 1973, 1977, 1980, 1991Industrial Policy - 1948, 1956, 1973, 1977, 1980, 1991
Industrial Policy - 1948, 1956, 1973, 1977, 1980, 1991RKavithamani
 
Employee wellbeing at the workplace.pptx
Employee wellbeing at the workplace.pptxEmployee wellbeing at the workplace.pptx
Employee wellbeing at the workplace.pptxNirmalaLoungPoorunde1
 
Introduction to AI in Higher Education_draft.pptx
Introduction to AI in Higher Education_draft.pptxIntroduction to AI in Higher Education_draft.pptx
Introduction to AI in Higher Education_draft.pptxpboyjonauth
 
Q4-W6-Restating Informational Text Grade 3
Q4-W6-Restating Informational Text Grade 3Q4-W6-Restating Informational Text Grade 3
Q4-W6-Restating Informational Text Grade 3JemimahLaneBuaron
 
Privatization and Disinvestment - Meaning, Objectives, Advantages and Disadva...
Privatization and Disinvestment - Meaning, Objectives, Advantages and Disadva...Privatization and Disinvestment - Meaning, Objectives, Advantages and Disadva...
Privatization and Disinvestment - Meaning, Objectives, Advantages and Disadva...RKavithamani
 
microwave assisted reaction. General introduction
microwave assisted reaction. General introductionmicrowave assisted reaction. General introduction
microwave assisted reaction. General introductionMaksud Ahmed
 
POINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptx
POINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptxPOINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptx
POINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptxSayali Powar
 
The Most Excellent Way | 1 Corinthians 13
The Most Excellent Way | 1 Corinthians 13The Most Excellent Way | 1 Corinthians 13
The Most Excellent Way | 1 Corinthians 13Steve Thomason
 

Recently uploaded (20)

18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf
18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf
18-04-UA_REPORT_MEDIALITERAСY_INDEX-DM_23-1-final-eng.pdf
 
Accessible design: Minimum effort, maximum impact
Accessible design: Minimum effort, maximum impactAccessible design: Minimum effort, maximum impact
Accessible design: Minimum effort, maximum impact
 
Call Girls in Dwarka Mor Delhi Contact Us 9654467111
Call Girls in Dwarka Mor Delhi Contact Us 9654467111Call Girls in Dwarka Mor Delhi Contact Us 9654467111
Call Girls in Dwarka Mor Delhi Contact Us 9654467111
 
Separation of Lanthanides/ Lanthanides and Actinides
Separation of Lanthanides/ Lanthanides and ActinidesSeparation of Lanthanides/ Lanthanides and Actinides
Separation of Lanthanides/ Lanthanides and Actinides
 
Beyond the EU: DORA and NIS 2 Directive's Global Impact
Beyond the EU: DORA and NIS 2 Directive's Global ImpactBeyond the EU: DORA and NIS 2 Directive's Global Impact
Beyond the EU: DORA and NIS 2 Directive's Global Impact
 
Student login on Anyboli platform.helpin
Student login on Anyboli platform.helpinStudent login on Anyboli platform.helpin
Student login on Anyboli platform.helpin
 
Grant Readiness 101 TechSoup and Remy Consulting
Grant Readiness 101 TechSoup and Remy ConsultingGrant Readiness 101 TechSoup and Remy Consulting
Grant Readiness 101 TechSoup and Remy Consulting
 
Mastering the Unannounced Regulatory Inspection
Mastering the Unannounced Regulatory InspectionMastering the Unannounced Regulatory Inspection
Mastering the Unannounced Regulatory Inspection
 
Sanyam Choudhary Chemistry practical.pdf
Sanyam Choudhary Chemistry practical.pdfSanyam Choudhary Chemistry practical.pdf
Sanyam Choudhary Chemistry practical.pdf
 
Industrial Policy - 1948, 1956, 1973, 1977, 1980, 1991
Industrial Policy - 1948, 1956, 1973, 1977, 1980, 1991Industrial Policy - 1948, 1956, 1973, 1977, 1980, 1991
Industrial Policy - 1948, 1956, 1973, 1977, 1980, 1991
 
Employee wellbeing at the workplace.pptx
Employee wellbeing at the workplace.pptxEmployee wellbeing at the workplace.pptx
Employee wellbeing at the workplace.pptx
 
TataKelola dan KamSiber Kecerdasan Buatan v022.pdf
TataKelola dan KamSiber Kecerdasan Buatan v022.pdfTataKelola dan KamSiber Kecerdasan Buatan v022.pdf
TataKelola dan KamSiber Kecerdasan Buatan v022.pdf
 
Introduction to AI in Higher Education_draft.pptx
Introduction to AI in Higher Education_draft.pptxIntroduction to AI in Higher Education_draft.pptx
Introduction to AI in Higher Education_draft.pptx
 
Q4-W6-Restating Informational Text Grade 3
Q4-W6-Restating Informational Text Grade 3Q4-W6-Restating Informational Text Grade 3
Q4-W6-Restating Informational Text Grade 3
 
INDIA QUIZ 2024 RLAC DELHI UNIVERSITY.pptx
INDIA QUIZ 2024 RLAC DELHI UNIVERSITY.pptxINDIA QUIZ 2024 RLAC DELHI UNIVERSITY.pptx
INDIA QUIZ 2024 RLAC DELHI UNIVERSITY.pptx
 
Mattingly "AI & Prompt Design: Structured Data, Assistants, & RAG"
Mattingly "AI & Prompt Design: Structured Data, Assistants, & RAG"Mattingly "AI & Prompt Design: Structured Data, Assistants, & RAG"
Mattingly "AI & Prompt Design: Structured Data, Assistants, & RAG"
 
Privatization and Disinvestment - Meaning, Objectives, Advantages and Disadva...
Privatization and Disinvestment - Meaning, Objectives, Advantages and Disadva...Privatization and Disinvestment - Meaning, Objectives, Advantages and Disadva...
Privatization and Disinvestment - Meaning, Objectives, Advantages and Disadva...
 
microwave assisted reaction. General introduction
microwave assisted reaction. General introductionmicrowave assisted reaction. General introduction
microwave assisted reaction. General introduction
 
POINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptx
POINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptxPOINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptx
POINT- BIOCHEMISTRY SEM 2 ENZYMES UNIT 5.pptx
 
The Most Excellent Way | 1 Corinthians 13
The Most Excellent Way | 1 Corinthians 13The Most Excellent Way | 1 Corinthians 13
The Most Excellent Way | 1 Corinthians 13
 

Fast Food is Killing America

  • 1. Persuasive Essay Grade 9 tis2016english@gmail.com
  • 2. Forms of Persuasive Writing Advertisements  Editorials  Speeches  Propaganda  Reviews  Blogs  Persuasive Essays
  • 3. Forms of Persuasive Writing Advertisements try to convince you to do or buy something.
  • 4. Forms of Persuasive Writing Editorials about current issues appear in newspapers and magazines, or on television, radio, and the internet. http://topmagazines.wordpress.com/2011/06/29/recommended-magazines-for-people-who-can%E2%80%99t-get-enough/
  • 5. Forms of Persuasive Writing Persuasive speeches try to convince an audience to take action
  • 6. Forms of Persuasive Writing Propaganda is often about political issues, and usually includes emotionally charged appeals.
  • 7. Forms of Persuasive Writing Reviews evaluate items like books or movies and state an opinion as to whether the product is worth the reader’s time and money. http://www.imdb.com/movies-in-theaters/
  • 8. Forms of Persuasive Writing Blogs provide commentary on a particular topic, often combining text, images, and links to other blogs, web pages, and other media related to its topic. Blogs also allow readers to respond. http://www.ted.com/talks/marcel_dicke_why_not_eat_insects.html
  • 9. Forms of Persuasive Writing Persuasive essays use logic, reason, and emotion to convince readers to join the writer in a certain point of view. http://www.essay.tv/wp-content/uploads/2010/01/how-to-write-essay.jpg
  • 10. Text Structure of a Persuasive Essay
  • 11. TITLE 1 2 3 4 5 Introduction Claim 1 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas) Claim 2 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas) Claim 3 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas) Conclusion Graphic Organizer
  • 13. TITLE 1 2 3 4 5 Introduction Claim 1 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas) Claim 2 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas) Claim 3 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas) Conclusion Graphic Organizer
  • 14. The Prompt What is the best sport for children to play?
  • 15. Outline Thesis = Soccer is the ideal sport for children teaches teamwork --every position has a job --everyone must work together to win --physically smaller --not as athletic --work together well home school too intimidating for some learning teamwork necessary argument counter rebuttal Conclusion
  • 17. Expand Your Argument One reason is that soccer teaches teamwork. Each position has a specific job. Forwards have the responsibility of scoring goals. The fullbacks’ job is defense, and the halfbacks assist both forwards and fullbacks. Defense of the goal is the duty of the goalie. In order to win all must do their jobs well and rely on each other for help.
  • 18. Outline Thesis = Soccer is the ideal sport for children teaches teamwork --every position has a job --everyone must work together to win --physically smaller --not as athletic --work together well home school too intimidating for some learning teamwork necessary argument counter rebuttal Conclusion
  • 19. Transitions for counterargument:  I will admit Certainly, Of course,  I will concede Admittedly, Obviously,
  • 20. Expand Your Counter Certainly, team sports can intimidate children. Some children may be physically smaller than others. Age group teams are meant to solve this problem, but it is not unusual to see large differences of height and weight in children of the same age. Others may not be as athletic as other team members. Children are particularly sensitive about how they compare to their peers. When they cannot run as fast as other team members or are not as agile, they fear ridicule
  • 21. Outline Thesis = Soccer is the ideal sport for children teaches teamwork --every position has a job --everyone must work together to win --physically smaller --not as athletic --work together well home school too intimidating for some learning teamwork necessary argument counter rebuttal Conclusion
  • 22. Transitions for solution:  However, On the other hand, Nevertheless, Conversely, Yet, Still,
  • 23. Expand Your Solution However, learning to work as part of a team is essential to success in many other areas. Children have to learn to cooperate both at school and home. In school students are expected to work together without conflict. Many teachers use cooperative groups to teach. At home children are expected to be part of the family team and help with chores that need to be done. When they are older, these children may have a job that requires teamwork. Only rarely does a person work in job that does not require working with others. Office workers have to work together to accomplish the tasks given to them. Construction workers have to be part of a team effort to finish buildings on time and on budget.
  • 25. Don’t : Don’t begin with “Hello my name is___ and I’m going to write about____” Don’t use the word “I “ (Instead of “I think we shouldn’t wear uniforms” say “Uniforms shouldn’t be required.” Don’t be wishy-washy. Pick a side! Don’t forget to support your opinions with facts and example s
  • 27. Introductory Paragraph: Fast Food Is Killing America! Did you know that a typical child needs 2,000 calories for an entire day and Burger King’s Whopper with triple cheese has 1,230 calories? That is far more calories than anyone needs in one day! Fast food consumption has risen 500 percent since 1970 and today reaches nearly every part of society, including some public school cafeterias. Fast food is harmful because it rapidly increases weight, causes high blood pressure, and leads to sluggishness. Fast food is bad for your health! CATCHY TITLE HOOK THE READER THESIS STATEMENT YOUR THREE ARGUMENTS
  • 28. Thesis Statement A thesis statement is always one sentence that states your assertion (belief) about a topic. A thesis statement usually brief preview of your arguments. (I believe) ____________________ because of argument 1, argument 2, and argument 3.
  • 29. Which of the following is a good thesis statement?  I believe we must stop wasting food now!  The problem of food waste can easily be solved by implementing three simple steps: reduce, reuse, recycle.  If you aren’t reducing, reusing, and recycling, you should.  I believe wasting food is a huge problem. We need to reduce our food waste. For example, make a shopping list before you go to the store, and only buy things you truly need. You shouldn’t buy a gallon of milk if you are only going to drink a quart of it during the week. Who cares if the gallon size is on sale?
  • 31. Persuasive Vs. Argumentative Essay Argumentative Essay Persuasive Essay 1. Get the reader to recognize your side of the argument is valid. 2. Logic based 3. Considers the opposite opinion 4. With evidence for each reason 1. Get the reader to agree with your opinion. 2. Emotion based 3. Ignores the opinion of others 4. No evidence
  • 32. TITLE 1 2 3 4 5 Introduction Claim 1 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas) Claim 2 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas) Claim 3 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas) Conclusion Introduction • The question • Wh- information Body Paragraph 1 (reason/ agree) • • Body Paragraph 1 (reason/ disagree) • • Conclusion TITLE 1 2 3 4 Argumentative Vs. Persuasive Essay
  • 33. Topics 1. Should schools sell fast food? 2. Does social media create isolation? 3. Should there be harsher punishments for bullying? 4. Should there be less homework? 5. Should school sports be mandatory? 6. Should school be year round with more breaks to improve education? 7. Should your school have a school newspaper?
  • 34. TITLE 1 2 3 4 5 Introduction Claim 1 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas) Claim 2 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas) Claim 3 + evidence ( story, facts, supporting ideas) Conclusion Graphic Organizer

Editor's Notes

  1. A campaign poster for Barack Obama and a billboard advertisement that was displayed on Interstate 35 between Dallas and Austin in Texas
  2. Show students the correlation between the thesis and forecast and the planner.
  3. Introduce the thesis statement model. Have students practice writing thesis statements with the “I believe” stem until they become proficient. Some students may only need to be shown the example once—others may have to write four or five essays using the stem until they get the idea. I refer to the “I believe” stem as the “training wheels” for thesis statements. Once students are confident in their ability to write thesis statements, they can get rid of the “training wheels.” Show students the correlation between the planner and the thesis statement and forecast.
  4. Have students analyze these typical student thesis statements. The first is missing a forecast. The third has an assertion, and previews the arguments, but the tone is not academic. This is a great opportunity to discuss with students the use of first person, second person, and third person points of view in academic writing. The final example starts with an assertion, but the writer then launches into the heart of the arguments. Stress to students that the forecast is a concise preview—the full argument and supporting details should go in the body paragraphs, not the introduction.