Writing for Young Adults

        Jeni Mawter
What is a Young Adult?
• The Teenage Years (12 + )
What is a Young Adult?
The five milestones of transition to adulthood:
1) completing school
What is a Young Adult?
2) leaving home / gaining independence
What is Young Adult?
3) becoming financially independent
What is a Young Adult?
4) marrying
What is a Young Adult?
5) having children
Young Adults Today…
Young Adults Today…
YA Texts – Some Examples
•   Eugenides, Jeffrey. The Virgin Suicides. Warner, 1993

•   Rosoff, Meg. How I Live Now. Penguin, 2004

•   Pullman, Philip. Northern Lights. Point Fiction (Ashton Scholastic),
    1997

•   Zusak, Markus. The Book Thief. Picador, 2005

•   Haddon, Mark. The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night Time.
    David Fickling, 2003

•   Gwynne, Phillip. Deadly, Unna? 1998

•   Tan, Shaun. The Arrival. 2006

•   Gaiman, Neil. The Graveyard Book. Pan Macmillan, 2008
Features of a Young Adult Text
• Young adult protagonist

• Often a coming-of-age story

• The reader/audience has to care about the

 story and characters

• Issues relevant to age group
Young Adult Issues
• self-definition and subjectivity
Young Adult Issues
• self-definition and subjectivity with doubts
Young Adult Issues
• exploring sexuality and writing the body
Young Adult Issues
social power   social responsibility
Young Adult Issues
• representations of self and society
Young Adult Issues
• dominant ideologies
Young Adult Issues
• multiculturalism and assimilation
Young Adult Issues
       Glocal
Young Adult Issues
• relationships – social networks, driven by social
  media
Young Adult Issues
• other relationships
Young Adult Issues
• social media
Young Adult Issues
• technology
Young Adult Issues
• 24/7/365 access
Young Adult Issues
• religion and spirituality
Young Adult Issues
• risk taking
Young Adult Issues
•   drugs and
     alcohol
Young Adult Issues
• aggression
Young Adult Issues
• stress and anxiety
Young Adult Issues
• high expectations
Young Adult Issues
• high achievers
Young Adult Issues
• job prospects
Young Adult Issues
• celebrity
Young Adult Issues
• Harry Potter generation
Young Adult Issues
• reality shows
Young Adult Issues
• narcissism
Young Adult Issues
Young Adult Issues
• playing it safe
Young Adult Issues
• rise in conservatism
Young Adult Issues
• Conservatism reflected in YA literature
- Rise in Fantasy          - Less Realistic Fiction
Young Adult Issues
mortality   immortality
Young Adult Issues
• role reversals and blurred boundaries
Young Adult Issues
• the environment

• climate change
Publisher’s Wish List
   • young adult appeal

   • morally acceptable

   • innovative

   • characters you can’t forget

   • original voice

   • a fresh use of language

   • a story that moves its reader
Voice
• Who is telling the story and why?

• First-person perspective (intimate, limited POV)

• Omniscient third-person (less personal, multiple
  POV)

• Must be authentic

• Avoid clichés, stereotypes and contrivances
Style Considerations for Voice
 • word choice          • paragraph size

 • sentence length      • rhythm of sentences

 • sentence structure   • information given

 • tense                • colloquial language

 • emotions             • metaphor

 • humour               • lyrical language

 • point of view        • formal grammar,

 • attitudes              punctuation, spelling
Voice Exercise
Challenge: Different Voices
Planning Exercise
• Who is the main character?
• What does the character desire?
• What gets in the way of achieving this?
• What tactics might the character use?
• Does the character succeed or fail?
• How is the character’s world changed as a
  result of the struggle?
• How might our world be changed?
New Media Literacies
• traditional literacy (print culture) + mass and
  digital media literacy
• the ability to think across platforms
• social literacy
• community affiliation
• interactive
• collaborative
• Transmedia navigation involves the ability to
  read and write across all available modes of
  expression
New Media Literacies
• Kress (2003) stresses that modern literacy
  requires the ability to express ideas across
  a broad range of different systems of
  representation and signification including
  words, spoken or written; image, still and
  moving; musical; 3D models etc

Kress, G. (2003). Literacy in the New Media
Age. New York: Routledge.
New Media Exercise
Today by The Smashing Pumpkins
                                 •


                                     Pink ribbon scars
•   Today is the greatest            That never forget
    Day I ’ve ever known             I’ve tried so hard
    Can’t live for tomorrow          To cleanse these regrets
                                     My angel wings
    Tomorrow’s much too long         Were bruised and restrained
    I burn my eyes out               My belly stings
    Before I get out
                                     Today is
                                     Today is
    I wanted more                    Today is
    Than life could ever grant       The greatest day
    Bored by the chore               That I have ever known
    Of saving face
                                     I want to turn you on
                                     I want to turn you round
    Today is the greatest            I want to turn you on
    Day I have ever known            I want to turn you
    Can’t wait for tomorrow
                                     Today is the greatest
    I might not have that long       Today is the greatest day
    I’ll tear my heart out           Today is the greatest day
    Before I get out                 That I have ever known
New Media Exercise
Use these lyrics to write   • Acceptance speech
3 different texts.          • Personal narrative
                            • Newspaper/magazine
•   Blog                      article
                            • MySpace page
•   Parable
                            • Dialogue
•   Diary entry
                            • Comic strip
•   Speech                  • Photo essay
•   Interview               • Eulogy
•   Letter                  • Glog
•   Song lyric
•   Poem                    How could you make them
                            interactive?
•   memoir
New Media Exercise
Extension

Smashing Pumpkins Live in concert
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5uZkdv7Hqdw&fe
ature=related

Smashing Pumpkins Video Clip YouTube
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s6J28OdEKrI

Writing for young adults

  • 1.
    Writing for YoungAdults Jeni Mawter
  • 2.
    What is aYoung Adult? • The Teenage Years (12 + )
  • 3.
    What is aYoung Adult? The five milestones of transition to adulthood: 1) completing school
  • 4.
    What is aYoung Adult? 2) leaving home / gaining independence
  • 5.
    What is YoungAdult? 3) becoming financially independent
  • 6.
    What is aYoung Adult? 4) marrying
  • 7.
    What is aYoung Adult? 5) having children
  • 8.
  • 9.
  • 10.
    YA Texts –Some Examples • Eugenides, Jeffrey. The Virgin Suicides. Warner, 1993 • Rosoff, Meg. How I Live Now. Penguin, 2004 • Pullman, Philip. Northern Lights. Point Fiction (Ashton Scholastic), 1997 • Zusak, Markus. The Book Thief. Picador, 2005 • Haddon, Mark. The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night Time. David Fickling, 2003 • Gwynne, Phillip. Deadly, Unna? 1998 • Tan, Shaun. The Arrival. 2006 • Gaiman, Neil. The Graveyard Book. Pan Macmillan, 2008
  • 11.
    Features of aYoung Adult Text • Young adult protagonist • Often a coming-of-age story • The reader/audience has to care about the story and characters • Issues relevant to age group
  • 12.
    Young Adult Issues •self-definition and subjectivity
  • 13.
    Young Adult Issues •self-definition and subjectivity with doubts
  • 14.
    Young Adult Issues •exploring sexuality and writing the body
  • 15.
    Young Adult Issues socialpower social responsibility
  • 16.
    Young Adult Issues •representations of self and society
  • 17.
    Young Adult Issues •dominant ideologies
  • 18.
    Young Adult Issues •multiculturalism and assimilation
  • 19.
  • 20.
    Young Adult Issues •relationships – social networks, driven by social media
  • 21.
    Young Adult Issues •other relationships
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    Young Adult Issues •24/7/365 access
  • 25.
    Young Adult Issues •religion and spirituality
  • 26.
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    Young Adult Issues • drugs and alcohol
  • 28.
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    Young Adult Issues •stress and anxiety
  • 30.
    Young Adult Issues •high expectations
  • 31.
    Young Adult Issues •high achievers
  • 32.
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    Young Adult Issues •Harry Potter generation
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    Young Adult Issues •playing it safe
  • 39.
    Young Adult Issues •rise in conservatism
  • 40.
    Young Adult Issues •Conservatism reflected in YA literature - Rise in Fantasy - Less Realistic Fiction
  • 41.
  • 42.
    Young Adult Issues •role reversals and blurred boundaries
  • 43.
    Young Adult Issues •the environment • climate change
  • 44.
    Publisher’s Wish List • young adult appeal • morally acceptable • innovative • characters you can’t forget • original voice • a fresh use of language • a story that moves its reader
  • 45.
    Voice • Who istelling the story and why? • First-person perspective (intimate, limited POV) • Omniscient third-person (less personal, multiple POV) • Must be authentic • Avoid clichés, stereotypes and contrivances
  • 46.
    Style Considerations forVoice • word choice • paragraph size • sentence length • rhythm of sentences • sentence structure • information given • tense • colloquial language • emotions • metaphor • humour • lyrical language • point of view • formal grammar, • attitudes punctuation, spelling
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    Planning Exercise • Whois the main character? • What does the character desire? • What gets in the way of achieving this? • What tactics might the character use? • Does the character succeed or fail? • How is the character’s world changed as a result of the struggle? • How might our world be changed?
  • 51.
    New Media Literacies •traditional literacy (print culture) + mass and digital media literacy • the ability to think across platforms • social literacy • community affiliation • interactive • collaborative • Transmedia navigation involves the ability to read and write across all available modes of expression
  • 52.
    New Media Literacies •Kress (2003) stresses that modern literacy requires the ability to express ideas across a broad range of different systems of representation and signification including words, spoken or written; image, still and moving; musical; 3D models etc Kress, G. (2003). Literacy in the New Media Age. New York: Routledge.
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    New Media Exercise Todayby The Smashing Pumpkins • Pink ribbon scars • Today is the greatest That never forget Day I ’ve ever known I’ve tried so hard Can’t live for tomorrow To cleanse these regrets My angel wings Tomorrow’s much too long Were bruised and restrained I burn my eyes out My belly stings Before I get out Today is Today is I wanted more Today is Than life could ever grant The greatest day Bored by the chore That I have ever known Of saving face I want to turn you on I want to turn you round Today is the greatest I want to turn you on Day I have ever known I want to turn you Can’t wait for tomorrow Today is the greatest I might not have that long Today is the greatest day I’ll tear my heart out Today is the greatest day Before I get out That I have ever known
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    New Media Exercise Usethese lyrics to write • Acceptance speech 3 different texts. • Personal narrative • Newspaper/magazine • Blog article • MySpace page • Parable • Dialogue • Diary entry • Comic strip • Speech • Photo essay • Interview • Eulogy • Letter • Glog • Song lyric • Poem How could you make them interactive? • memoir
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    New Media Exercise Extension SmashingPumpkins Live in concert http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5uZkdv7Hqdw&fe ature=related Smashing Pumpkins Video Clip YouTube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s6J28OdEKrI